The_Last_One Posted March 20, 2008 Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 Here are some of my first Neon Heros please commentEdit here is the booster Pack:EDIT: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted March 20, 2008 Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 You forgot to say what you raises on the second card, and the fourth card is a wee bit overpowered. Other than that, i think they are cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Last_One Posted March 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 thanks will fix them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted March 20, 2008 Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 They are interesting cards. The OCG needs a lot of work, but the effects pretty much fit the cards. The pics are good, and I can see how the cards would work well together. overall - 11.99/13.69 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slade Posted March 20, 2008 Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 I spy with my little eye OCG errors!Seriously, though, the pictures were somewhat distorted or low-res. Also, Neon Hero sounds like a combination between Neo Spacians and E-Heroes. Also, don't use ampersands in a card's effect. Use the word "and". There should be quotes ("") around the words "Neon Hero" in some of the card effects. Also, use hypens (-) in place of the asterisks on that one card; then, you can manually cover them up in any photo-editing program to make them look like bullet points. 6/10 overall.EDIT: ^^ Hey, you stole my signature design! Jk, I think when I made mine my subconsious suggested that, and I went with it. No offense if it looks a lot similar :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
commander mike Posted March 20, 2008 Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 good cards i really like the first 1 (cause my name is mike) lol so overall ill give u a 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted March 20, 2008 Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 EDIT: ^^ Hey' date=' you stole my signature design! Jk, I think when I made mine my subconsious suggested that, and I went with it. No offense if it looks a lot similar :P[/quote']Â I made mine a week or two ago. I got tired of people asking me "Where do you get 13.69 from for your ratings??" so I posted my criteria in my sig so everyone could see it. As for the cards, it's just my favorite personal splice, and my favorite card from a set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Last_One Posted March 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 thanks for the comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted March 20, 2008 Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 The OCG needs improvement, and you don't need to make a new type. 5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Last_One Posted March 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 what do you mean new type.Also edit the cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Last_One Posted March 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 more comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Touketsu Kage Posted March 20, 2008 Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 every ones already said OCG errors i like them and r u making a card of the pic on the booster 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Last_One Posted March 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2008 yes the booster is on top and the dragon is the rarest Neon Hero Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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