Rainbeux Posted February 9, 2014 Report Share Posted February 9, 2014 This card is the first card I have posted in a long time. For fans of "Dragon's Gunfire". Please give feedback. Effect:Activate only while you control a face-up Dragon-type monster. Discard 1 card from your hand and target one monster on your side of the field. Send it to the Graveyard and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the targeted monster's original attack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted February 9, 2014 Report Share Posted February 9, 2014 Inflict damage to whom? Both players or your opponent? assuming that only your opponent take this damage, this card's costs is too much for even massive burn, I suggest that u should only discard or send, but deal half damage Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rainbeux Posted February 9, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2014 Balanced it out a bit more. My OCG text skills are a bit rusty. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted February 9, 2014 Report Share Posted February 9, 2014 You even weaken it, at least cut out Send the monster to the Graveyard OR discard a card (only 1 cost is enough, especially after u just weaken it to deal only half damage) and u should said in card text who would take the damage, since there are many cards that can inflict damage to both players or only you (Prime Dragon cards, for example) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rainbeux Posted February 10, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 10, 2014 I have clarified the bottom details. The effect says "Send one monster you control to the Graveyard" which allows you to send any type of monster you want, good or bad. I believe that that is enough to atone for the discarded card and the monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kwisatz-Haderach Posted February 10, 2014 Report Share Posted February 10, 2014 Broke as hell. At least make it Normal Spell and not appliable on all monster types Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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