blader1010 Posted March 20, 2008 Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 this is my first card without my brothers(victoreydragon)help!!!So plz rate i want to know how i did!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
loren Posted March 20, 2008 Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 pretty good but it should say during your standby phase this card gains 500 Atk points just word it better 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blader1010 Posted March 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 thank you but i was talking about the other one!I forgot how to put it up so what do you think of the new one? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
loren Posted March 20, 2008 Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 ohhh!! sorry my computer didnt load the image awesome effect 9/10 but you spelled take wrong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blader1010 Posted March 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 oh ill fix it .What are some of your cards?And did you see my other cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
loren Posted March 20, 2008 Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 yeah there all pretty good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blader1010 Posted March 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 so got any cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Supreme Posted March 20, 2008 Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 OCG is way Off: "When this card is destroyed, you may select 1 Level 4 or lower DARK monster and Special Summon it to your side of the field. Then shuffle your Deck. " I added the bolded part to make it balenced ( Not overpowered ). Normal Rating: 2.575 / 10Fixed Rating: 4.565/10Fixed Rating + Bolded words: 5.975 / 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Victory Posted March 20, 2008 Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 hes new and he did that one wthout my help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted March 20, 2008 Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 In addition to Supreme's suggestions, it should be Beast Type not "monster". Otherwise, it's a pretty good card for a beginner. overall - 9.63/13.69 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slade Posted March 20, 2008 Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 Ah, you're victorydragon's brother? I work in the shop with him. You pmed me for a booster, right? Well, I guess I could make an exception and try to make a booster. I'm not very good at it though.About the card:The OCG and grammar were, well, bad. The image was pretty terrible, also. It needed a background.I won't rate, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
coolmoo Posted March 20, 2008 Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 Not so good cards and find a better picture Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blader1010 Posted March 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 slade: its ok i dont really need the pack Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 20, 2008 Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 5.5/10needs improvement. Confusing how it is. Sounds like you take a Dark monster and send it to the graveyard, then place that monster back in the deck. If its how Supreme Duelist described it, then we already have a monster that does the job, and has better ATK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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