sen12 Posted February 17, 2014 Report Share Posted February 17, 2014 These cards were created by me, and I'm not sure if they are good or not. Give me real feedback! Edit: The modified cards are further down. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ninjabronybot Posted February 17, 2014 Report Share Posted February 17, 2014 First off, the borders say Normal Monsters and you apparently wrote effects. Second, the ogre needs some kind of summoning handicap. Third, I don't understand the effects of the other two. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sen12 Posted February 17, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2014 First off, the borders say Normal Monsters and you apparently wrote effects. Second, the ogre needs some kind of summoning handicap. Third, I don't understand the effects of the other two. It is handicapped enough, I understand the effect part, but how do you not understand the effects? Pretty self explanatory... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ninjabronybot Posted February 17, 2014 Report Share Posted February 17, 2014 A 5000 ATK double tribute with no negative effects is not handicapped enough. The engineer's effect about being targeted by a spell card is worded strangely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted February 17, 2014 Report Share Posted February 17, 2014 There are multiple cards here, so this topic will be moved to Realistic Cards - Multiple Cards. Also, you should probably change the cards using the Effect monster border, since you now have Normal monsters with effects written. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sen12 Posted February 18, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2014 Thanks everyone! And for the engineer, it means that if it is targeted by a spell card, like Ancient Forest, or Acid Rain, or just any cards that target the whole field (Dark Hole, etc.), negate that spell card, send it to the graveyard, but also send your engineer to the graveyard. I also fixed the effect thing. And for the Ogre, I made it so that they have to tribute 2 Forgotten Lands cards to special summon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
razzy Posted February 18, 2014 Report Share Posted February 18, 2014 No offense but I think you need a lot of help in the creating card department. Cards like Ancient Forest and Acid Rain don't target. They are simply effects. Targeting is something that occurs at activation and specifically says "target x" if something just says something such as "destroy all x" it doesn't target. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sen12 Posted February 18, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2014 Here is a modified version of the cards! [attachment=40826:Engineer of Forgotten Lands Card.jpg][attachment=40827:Ogre of Forgotten Lands Card.jpg][attachment=40828:Warrior of Forgotten Lands Card.jpg] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sen12 Posted February 18, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2014 No offense but I think you need a lot of help in the creating card department. Cards like Ancient Forest and Acid Rain don't target. They are simply effects. Targeting is something that occurs at activation and specifically says "target x" if something just says something such as "destroy all x" it doesn't target. Sorry. I will change the wording Edit: The engineer now says: This card can not be destroyed by trap cards. If it is affected by a spell card in any way, destroy the spell card and this card. When face up, +200 ATK and DEF for all Spellcasters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sen12 Posted February 18, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2014 Also, I am a first timer with card creation. I've only created Pokemon Cards, and those are much easier... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ninjabronybot Posted February 18, 2014 Report Share Posted February 18, 2014 Hi, I'm back. So let me confirm what I believe your card effects to be. Engineer: This card cannot be destroyed by trap effects. If this card is targeted by a spell card: Negate that Spell Card and destroy it; also destroy this card. While this card is face-up on the field, all Spellcaster-Type monsters gain 200 ATK and DEF. Warrior: If this card battles with a Beast-Type monster: Destroy that monster immediately with this card's effect. While this card is face-up on the field: All EARTH monsters gain 400 ATK and DEF. Ogre: This card cannot be Normal Summoned/Set.This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing 2 "Forgotten Lands" cards you control. If a Trap Card activates that would affect this card: Negate that trap and destroy it. Agreed. Pokemon is WAY simpler than this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
razzy Posted February 18, 2014 Report Share Posted February 18, 2014 Sorry. I will change the wording Edit: The engineer now says: This card can not be destroyed by trap cards. If it is affected by a spell card in any way, destroy the spell card and this card. When face up, +200 ATK and DEF for all Spellcasters. That is a little better. Here is how I would suggest. This card cannot be destroyed by Trap Cards. All Spellcaster-Type monsters you control gain 200 ATK and DEF. When this card is targeted by a Spell Card: Negate the activation of that card, and if you do, destroy it also destroy this card. You can Tribute 2 "Forgotten Lands" monsters: Special Summon this card (from your hand). This card is unaffected by Trap Cards. All EARTH monsters you control gain 400 ATK and DEF. At attack declaration when this card battles an opponent's Beast-Type monster: Send that monster to the Graveyard. I believe that's all that needs to be. The only thing is maybe something that says "before/without applying damage calculation" but I don't think that's needed since it is saying at attack declaration. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sen12 Posted February 18, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2014 Thanks everyone! I will change it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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