General Grievous

[Zidca-56]

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Lore: Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 Level 4 Machine-Type monsters you control. This face-up card cannot be destroyed by battle. You can pay 1000 Life Points during your Main Phase 1 to Special Summon up to 2 Level 4 or lower Machine-Type monsters from your hand in face-up Attack position. Your opponent takes no battle damage the turn you activate this effect. When this face-up card is targeted by a card effect, banish it, and Special Summon 2 "Battle Droid Tokens" (Machine-Type/DARK/Level 4/ATK 1000/DEF 1500) They cannot be tributed. During your Standby Phase, you can add this banished card to your hand. You can only activate 1 "General Grievous- Cybernetic Tactician" effect per turn, and only once that turn.

 

This is my first ever serious attempt at making a YuGi-Oh card. And I tried as hard as I could to accurately portray the General, and I think I did a good job. He is a master light saber duelist, and even the strongest Jedi have trouble facing him , so he cannot be destroyed by battle. He can control droids at his will with his built-in antennas, and he uses droids to defend him, hence both of the summoning effects. I wanted to add more effects to portray his prowess in battle, and I may make another version to do just that, but his effects are already enough to make him useful

 

Please give me some constructive criticism

[Darthakin]

Well, let's see, the problem with this card would be that using his effect well, means you'd have 4 monsters. Now, the tokens cannot be tributed, meaning you'd need one more machine. Now, that's assuming all of your monsters survive (the Non-Tokens). I could see it work with cards that are indestructible by battle, but appart from that, that's the biggest weakness. His ATK is blanced, I think, seeing as it's pretty low. For 3 machines, I think it could even be a BIT highger 

[Zidca-56]

Well, let's see, the problem with this card would be that using his effect well, means you'd have 4 monsters. Now, the tokens cannot be tributed, meaning you'd need one more machine. Now, that's assuming all of your monsters survive (the Non-Tokens). I could see it work with cards that are indestructible by battle, but appart from that, that's the biggest weakness. His ATK is blanced, I think, seeing as it's pretty low. For 3 machines, I think it could even be a BIT highger 

I see your point. The tributing requirement is high. What is I change it to having to banish 3 machine types from hand or graveyard?