TFMegamanlan Posted February 21, 2014 Report Share Posted February 21, 2014 3 Level 5 Monsters Once per turn, When a Spell/Trap Card is activated: You can Detach 1 Xyz Material; negate that card's effect. Opponent may pay 500 Lifepoints instead. This effect can only activate/resolve if this card has Xyz Materials: When Opponent pays Lifepoints, Inflict damage to your Opponent equal to half of the Cost. If this card was Xyz Summoned by a Ranking-up "Number 44: Sky Pegasus" this card gains the Following Effect: • You can Detach 1 Xyz Material to Destroy all Monsters your Opponent controls, Your Opponent may pay 1000 Lifepoints to negate this effect. Once per turn, during either player's Main Phase: If your Opponent paid Lifepoints, you can Target 1 Card Opponent controls: Destroy that target. Quick notes and Reasoning: -So first off the negate ability is especially to get Xyz Materials off of this card so Opponent can escape the troublesome problem of taking damage each time they pay a cost. Plus it acts as a good counter to easy removals and an easy way for Opponent to even stopping it. -Second the damage effect I want to word it that it only takes the original cost, so if you activate Solemn Warning you would take 1000 Damage after it resolves. I also want to have it work like this: - if a Card with a variable as it's Lifepoint Cost activates (such as Solemn Judgement) this effect will not activate as there was no original value to halve. - If a card says "pay multiples of X Lifepoints" (such as Prideful Roar) this card will only hit for the Original Lifepoint cost not for each multiple that you paid. - It is also a Quick Effect. The Destroy all Monsters effect is the evolved version of his original effect. The last effect is setup that no matter what, you can affect Field presence when it's needed. (Especially since its possible that Your Opponent will be negating what you attempt to do) So any thoughts on this card? Also I am more open to OCG Grammar fixes, but I still have my Anti-OCG Grammar missiles! Please be sure your OCG is actually correct and not just attempting to reword what I have with old or incorrect OCG Grammar. Please let me know what you think! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masaaki71484 Posted February 21, 2014 Report Share Posted February 21, 2014 I don't like the first ability but the second one is nice though as a Johnny-Spike Player I have come to realize when you do mechanics that give your opponent choices those cards usually don't end of being used often and thats just food for thought but I don't get the Pegasus Flavor behind this card sorry but overall 7.8/10 Good Job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TFMegamanlan Posted February 21, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2014 My idea in general is for them to negate it, then they lose LP and I can still destroy stuff. It gives my Opponent the option of "is that Spell/Trap worth enough to you that you'll give up 750 LP for it? Or is your Field worth 1500 LP?" That and also my favorite Number overall is Number 44: Sky Pegasus. I just wish that he was better then how he is as the actual card wasn't that great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masaaki71484 Posted February 21, 2014 Report Share Posted February 21, 2014 Your Opponent would say Yes every time which bring me back to my point you and me both know board presence is better than life. I would rather a Blue Eyes with 1 Life than a Skull Servant with 5000 Life. I get where you are going but since it is easily able to be ran over I feel like it is strong don't get me wrong but not strong enough to make a spot for it in the Extra Zone that is the Spike side of it. Now the Johnny/Flavor Stand point I think you were going for the I will burn you for whatever choice you pick but Arcana did the same thing...and what tier are they now? Still I very well designed card and would have it's fans but it would have no place in tourneys no offense to your creation but that is how I see it. But if you would be a Doll and comment on my Golden Seas Archtype that would be Awesome :D. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TFMegamanlan Posted February 21, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2014 Well the ironic thing is that if you do pay to keep all your Monsters that does mean I can still just kill your Blue-Eyes or King of the Skull Servants as you paid Lifepoints so the very last effect can kick in. Sure I can check it out. =) the main goal of this card was also to end up as no matter what you'll end up getting burned and lose something on the board, it's just up to you on how much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masaaki71484 Posted February 21, 2014 Report Share Posted February 21, 2014 Well I meant in general lol obviously if that was on the field and I had less than 2000 LP I would most likely lose but then I probably would have already anyway making it then a Win More card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TFMegamanlan Posted February 21, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2014 One other plan I can see going for is just a giant drain of LP then Cowboy to game. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masaaki71484 Posted February 21, 2014 Report Share Posted February 21, 2014 But see Cowboy is easier to summon and can take down big monster and can burn ya. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TFMegamanlan Posted February 21, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2014 Actually Cowboy is a Once per turn thing, but I have been able to get both No. 44 and Cowboy out together which mean't that unless Opponent has more then at least 1800 LP, they probably won't survive the turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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