_duster_ Posted March 9, 2014 Report Share Posted March 9, 2014 The last time I ever made a card was before PSCT was around, so I decided to make one to get some practice and also learn how to better balance cards. 3 Level 4 Monsters Once per turn, during either player's turn: you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to activate one of these effects. Each effect can only be used once while this card is face-up on the field. - Target 1 face-up monster your opponent controls; change that target to face-up Defense Position. Its effects are negated and its DEF becomes 0 until the End Phase. - When an opponent's monster declares an attack involving this card: Negate the attack and end the Battle Phase. - This turn, if this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent: Send 1 random card in your opponent's hand to the Graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amyar Posted March 10, 2014 Report Share Posted March 10, 2014 Nice card. The artwork is nice and appropriate and the card it's self is well balanced and the effects are very useful. One gripe is that the last effect is a little underwhelming. Try 2 cards instead of one. Just a thought. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunn O))) Posted March 10, 2014 Report Share Posted March 10, 2014 Seems very underpowerd in my opinion. 2200 atk is too low for a 3 mat Rank 4, and it's effects are very weak. Also, it's totally outclassed by Evilswarm Ouroboros. Give it higher atk, and better effects. You can remove the first effect, since it'll just be a beater once the materials are gone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_duster_ Posted March 10, 2014 Author Report Share Posted March 10, 2014 Thanks for the feedback guys. I think I was too afraid of making it overpowered and instead made it into one underwhelming monster. I changed the effect and stats. I was also thinking of adding the ability to be treated as a Reptile, since you know, it is one-third serpent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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