avariademon Posted March 21, 2008 Report Share Posted March 21, 2008 ok this is my second card, and yes its another one that addes to a card/set of cards, this one is an addition to one of my favorite cards of all time. now im not sure if its overpowered or underpowered i was thinking about adding an extra effect but i decided what i did is enough if not more then enough... so here it is ok eddited version should look a bit better in the card text OMG i cannot beleive i didnt do this im so stupid... ugh ANY how this cards image is not mine i got it fromhttp://www.epilogue.net/cgi/database/art/view.pl?id=12105 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
loren Posted March 21, 2008 Report Share Posted March 21, 2008 awesome card but should be put in a zombie deck 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
avariademon Posted March 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2008 hmm i dont understand im trying to make it different... weird any how thanks for the rating, i would not mind him being a zombie but unfortunatly that would stray from the original version and he should be a feind though i could see him being used in a zombie deck or a deck that works for getting monsters in both players graves... any how lets try this again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 21, 2008 Report Share Posted March 21, 2008 A few spelling mistakes, and it should be both players Graveyards not all Graveyards. Pretty good attempt still. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted March 21, 2008 Report Share Posted March 21, 2008 "Fiend" not "feind", "field" not "feild", and if you leave the ATK as 0, then the last sentence should be "Increase the ATK of this card by 400 points for each Monster Card in both player's Graveyards." Though, if you changed it to ? ATK, it would say "This card's ATK is equal to the number of Monster Cards in both player's Graveyards x 400." I think the second one sounds better, but that's just me :P overall - 12.34/13.69 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
avariademon Posted March 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2008 well SORRY lol i have dislexia every once in awile that happens i will attempt to edit it soon, thanks for the fixes and ratings. oh and about the what you said, its based on chaos necromancers effect, chaos necromancer has the same basic idea it has 0 ATK with this cards ATK becomes. im pretty sure get back to me on that and i will change it accordingly. oh and sorry about the in all instead of in both, my mind, i think, went to mortivore for a second and thats how that card is worded. i like my wording better because if your playing in a multi duel (more then two people) its not confusing but in order to be correct i will change it thanks again for the ratings and fixes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
avariademon Posted March 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 there i eddited it and did somthing i should have done<,< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SpazzeOut Posted March 24, 2008 Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 7/10 >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
avariademon Posted March 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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