Tormented Posted April 24, 2014 Report Share Posted April 24, 2014 CnC I personally think this showcases my improvements although entirely up to y'all. I'll supply .psd on request Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smear Posted April 24, 2014 Report Share Posted April 24, 2014 I love it bae. You are such a cheater thogj Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madsen Posted April 24, 2014 Report Share Posted April 24, 2014 Oh damn, I like. The biggest thing to take away from this tag is that you're translating your avatar skills into tags with the great colors and soothing compo. However, the thing about a transition like that is that some things stay behind. The asymetric transition from light to dark in the right doesn't look appealing and it wouldn't without a parallel counterpart in a tag that bases itself on bright playful colors. Another thing is that in tags you're encouraged to go harder on the effects and you seem to be on a good path to doing that very well since proper effect placement takes practice and a sense for it you get by years of consistent work. Overall a really nice tag, although that little spiral-y thing is constantly stealing my focus on the render. KIU Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted April 24, 2014 Report Share Posted April 24, 2014 Really provokes the sensation of heat, I wish you'd capitalize on that. Perhaps blurring parts around the piece similarly to how heat blurs vision in actuality. Right side seems a bit iffy, could use work blending with the rest of the piece. Nothing bad to say really, but it could be significantly better with more attention to details. Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted April 24, 2014 Report Share Posted April 24, 2014 I'd agree with Night. Capitalise on the really well implemented atmosphere here. Exaggerate depth, and blur things, to emphasise that. I'd actually crop twenty pixels or something off the right; doesn't need to be there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chairman ali Posted April 24, 2014 Report Share Posted April 24, 2014 I don't like the way you de-contrast your artworks (I've seen it in your avatars mostly). It just doesn't seem natural at all; forced is what I'm trying to hint. It's okay, but there's nothing that would make me want to stare at it for a while. Experiment with textures; that's your best bet with a style like this. Go crazy, make many versions, etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted April 25, 2014 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2014 The reason I like de-contrasting is because I love the way it fits into pieces sometimes... call it a personal "flair" thanks for all the CnC though :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smear Posted April 26, 2014 Report Share Posted April 26, 2014 Can you send me the psd? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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