The "Shounen Warrior" Archetype: Barrage of the Shounen

[Hyuuga Mayuki]

Hello there. I'm new to this site, but I'm planning on some custom cards and making them since I resumed playing Yugioh since 2010 (but I started playing 2004). I had also some custom cards created using Yugico's Card Creator, but since the cards created here were more realistic and the forum seems more active here, I decided to port all of my created cards back at Yugico into this site, and resume my archetype's development here.
 
Well, as you can see, I'm creating a custom archetype named "Shounen Warrior". But although the name might speak for itself, I'm also accepting bishounen characters for my archetype, from every anime that had some popularity in the whole world. I'm not a master in cropping, so forgive me for some sloppiness in my works. I also don't have much knowledge about other anime, and so, if you have any character ideas, just post their name and powers here, and I'll do what I can to create a card based on that character. I'm also searching for some decent cross-over fanart to serve as the archetype's Spell and Trap Cards, and if you have found one, you could post the link here (the link, NOT the picture), and I'll determine what should be the name of the card and its effects. And also, I would want to keep my cards as realistic as possible, and so, if there's something I should change for the effects of the monsters, I'm open for any reactions, violent or not.
 
DISCLAIMER: All characters mentioned in this thread are copyrights of their respective owners. All arts used in this thread are copyrights of their creators, although it is not mentioned in any work in this thread whoever was the creator of each art.
 
And, to start it off: The First Seven Generals of the Shounen Warriors (reflecting the main characters of the seven series that I watched and enjoyed thoroughly). Of the seven Shounen Warrior Generals mentioned, only Hayate, Light, Luffy, and Loki would start out as Level 6 monsters (the reason is because they have an ambiguous starting point (Luffy), they have no starting or final points, only that they are too strong (Hayate and Light) or their starting and/or final points are too strong (Loki)). The others (Naruto, Allen, and Coud) would have weaker Level 4 counterparts. But before you scream, I'll just tell you that there would be someone in the archetype stronger than these ("LV" monsters and Xyz monsters), and I'll release them sooner or later.
 

 

Card Lores:

 

Shounen Warrior of Loyalty - Hayate (Level 6 WATER Warrior-Type)(ATK 1800 DEF 1750)

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by its own effect. You can discard two "Shounen Warrior" monsters to Special Summon this card from your hand. Once per turn: You can place 1 Shounen counter on this card. During either player's turn: you can discard any number of "Shounen Warrior" monsters to place a number of Shounen counters on a card on the field equal to the number of monsters discarded by this effect. This card gains 50 ATK and 100 DEF for each Shounen counter on the field. If this card is sent to the Graveyard for the activation of the effect of a "Shounen Warrior" monster, add this card to your hand during your next Draw Phase.

 

Bishounen Warrior of Death - Light (Level 6 DARK Psychic-Type)(ATK 1200 DEF 1500)

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by its own effect. You can discard 2 "Shounen Warrior" monsters to Special Summon this card from your hand. Once per turn: You can place 1 Shounen counter on this card. Once per turn, during either players' turn: you can destroy a number of cards on the field, up to the number of Shounen counters on this card. When this card's effect is activated: you cannot conduct your Battle Phase or activate any other effects until your next turn's End Phase. If this Special Summoned monster is removed from the field, it is banished instead. If this card is sent to the Graveyard for the activation of an effect of a "Shounen Warrior" monster, add this card to your hand during your next Draw Phase.

 

Shounen Warrior of Friendship - Luffy (Level 6 EARTH Warrior-Type)(ATK 2100 DEF 200)

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by its own effect. You can discard two "Shounen Warrior" monsters from your hand to Special Summon this card from your hand. Once per turn: You can place 1 Shounen Counter on this card. This card gains 100 ATK for each Shounen Counter on the field. If this card would be destroyed: you can remove 2 Shounen counters from this card instead. If this card is sent to the Graveyard for the activation of an effect of a "Shounen Warrior" monster: add this card to your hand during your Draw Phase.

 

Shounen Warrior of Destiny - Naruto (Level 6 FIRE Warrior-Type)(ATK 2000 DEF 1200)

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by its own effect. You can discard two "Shounen Warrior" monsters from your hand to Special Summon this card from your hand. Once per turn: You can place 1 Shounen Counter on this card. This card gains 100 ATK for each Shounen Counter on this card. Once per turn, during either players' turn: You can remove 3 Shounen counters on this card to have its ATK doubled. If this effect resolves: Your other monsters cannot attack until your End Phase. If this card is sent to the Graveyard for the activation of an effect of a "Shounen Warrior" monster: add this card to your hand during your Draw Phase.

 

Shounen Warrior General of Change - Loki (Level 6 DARK Spellcaster-Type)(ATK 1400 DEF 1500)

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by its own effect. You can discard two "Shounen Warrior" monsters from your hand to Special Summon this card from your hand. Once per turn: You can place 1 Shounen Counter on this card. This card gains 200 ATK for each Shounen Counter on this card. Once per turn, during either players' turn, when a Trap effect resolves on your opponent's side of the field: You can remove 3 Shounen counters on this card, negate the effect. If this effect resolves: skip your next Main Phase 1. If this card is sent to the Graveyard for the activation of an effect of a "Shounen Warrior" monster: add this card to your hand during your Draw Phase. You can Tribute this face-up card with 5 or more Shounen counters on it to Special Summon 1 "Bishounen Warrior Trickster God - Loki" from your Extra Deck, and attach this card to that monster as an Xyz Material.

 

Shounen Warrior General of Hope - Allen (Level 6 LIGHT Warrior-Type)(ATK 1900 DEF 1800)

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by its own effect. You can discard two "Shounen Warrior" monsters from your hand to Special Summon this card from your hand. Once per turn: You can place 1 Shounen Counter on this card. This card gains 200 ATK for each Shounen Counter on this card. Once per turn, during either players' turn, when a monster on your opponent's side of the field activates its effect: You can remove 1 Shounen counter on this card and discard 2 "Shounen Warrior" monsters, negate the activation, and inflict 500 damage to your opponent. If this card is sent to the Graveyard for the activation of an effect of a "Shounen Warrior" monster: add this card to your hand during your Draw Phase.

 

Shounen Warrior General of Love - Coud (Level 6 WIND Warrior-Type)(ATK 1900 DEF 1700)

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by its own effect. You can discard two "Shounen Warrior" monsters from your hand to Special Summon this card from your hand. Once per turn: You can place 1 Shounen Counter on this card. If a "Shounen Warrior" monster is returned from the field or Graveyard to the hand or Deck, place 1 Shounen Counter on this card. This card gains 50 ATK and DEF for each Shounen Counter on this card. During either players' turn: You can remove 7 Shounen counters from this card to shuffle 4 "Shounen Warrior" monsters into your Deck. If this effect resolves: draw a card and skip your Battle Phase for your next turn. If this card is sent to the Graveyard for the activation of an effect of a "Shounen Warrior" monster: add this card to your hand during your Draw Phase.

[Azure Wolf]

A bit hard to read so if you post the lore below the cards it would be a good help. I can read the lore from the cards but can't make a good review with the size of the writing as its harder to see errors in the cards

[G.B. Sparticus]

You forgot goku!!!!!!!! add him now before he chops your head off!

[Hyuuga Mayuki]

Edited with the card lores.

You forgot goku!!!!!!!! add him now before he chops your head off!

I'll add him in the archetype as an Xyz Ranking-Up monster.

 

DHARC'S EDIT: It's because he started his journey as a shounen back in Dragon Ball.

[lucky777dice]

What about Ichigo? Bleach is huge in Shonen Jump

[Hyuuga Mayuki]

What about Ichigo? Bleach is huge in Shonen Jump

 

Ichigo was in the list of those I had back at Yugico, a Level 4 and a Rank 4. I'll post the others after I sleep.

 

DHARC EDIT: Actually I had made the following card adaptations back at Yugico: Tsunayoshi Sawada from Katekyo Hitman Reborn, Gintoki Sakata from Gintama, Lelouch Vi Britannia from Code Geass, Natsu Dragneel from Fairy Tail, Edward Elric from Fullmetal Alchemist, Kirigaya Kazuto of Sword Art Online (made his different game personae into an LV series), Kurosaki Ichigo of Bleach, Inuyasha from the series of the same name, Conan Edogawa from Detective Conan, Li Syaoran of Cardcaptor Sakura, Li Tsubasa "Syaoran" from Tsubasa Reservior Chronicle, Haru of Rave Master, Yoh Asakura from Shaman King and Urameshi Yuusuke from Yuu Yuu Hakusho. I also have made L Lawliet of Death Note as an Xyz Monster.

[Hyuuga Mayuki]

 

Shounen Warrior - Tsuna (Level 4 FIRE Warrior-Type)(ATK 1450 DEF 1400)

When this card is Normal Summoned: you can add a Level 4 "Shounen Warrior" monster from your Deck to your hand. If this card is sent to the Graveyard for the activation of an effect of a "Shounen Warrior" monster: add this card to your hand during your Draw Phase.

 

 

Bishounen Warrior - Gin (Level 4 EARTH Warrior-Type)(ATK 1650 DEF 1300)

You can discard two "Shounen Warrior" monsters from your hand; Special Summon this card from your hand. If you do: you cannot Special Summon other monsters until the End Phase of your turn. Once per turn: you can discard one "Shounen Warrior" monster from your hand to target one "Shounen Warrior monster on your field or your Graveyard; this card gains the target's effects until the End Phase of your turn. If this card is sent to the Graveyard for the activation of an effect of a "Shounen Warrior" monster: add this card to your hand during your Draw Phase.

 

 

Bishounen Warrior - Lelouch (Level 4 DARK Spellcaster-Type)(ATK 1000 DEF 1800)

You can discard two "Shounen Warrior" monsters from your hand to target one monster your opponent controls or in the Graveyard: take control of that target until your next End Phase. Each player can only use the effect of "Bishounen Warrior - Lelouch" once per turn. If this card is sent to the Graveyard for the activation of an effect of a "Shounen Warrior" monster: add this card to your hand during your Draw Phase.

[Hyuuga Mayuki]

If the effect of a "Shounen Warrior" monster is activated, OR if a "Shounen Warrior" monster is discarded for the activation of an effect: Inflict 50 damage to your opponent, and this card gains ATK equal to the inflicted damage. If this card is sent to the Graveyard for the activation of an effect of a "Shounen Warrior" monster: add this card to your hand during your Draw Phase.



If this card is sent to the Graveyard for the activation of an effect of a "Shounen Warrior" monster: add this card to your hand during your Draw Phase. If a card(s) would be sent to the Graveyard for the activation of an effect of a "Shounen Warrior" monster, activate either of the following effects as the cost instead:
• Send one "Shounen Warrior" monster from the field to the Graveyard.
• Shuffle the same number of "Shounen Warrior" monsters from the Graveyard to the Deck.



You can discard one "Shounen Warrior" monster: this card can attack twice during the Battle Phase(this change lasts until the End Phase). If this card is sent to the Graveyard for the activation of an effect of a "Shounen Warrior" monster: add this card to your hand during your Draw Phase. During your End Phase, you can send this card to the Graveyard to Special Summon "Shounen Warrior - Kirito LV6" from your hand or Deck.



This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Shounen Warrior - Kirito LV4". Once per turn, during either player's turn: You can discard one "Shounen Warrior" monster; this card's ATK is doubled, until the end of the Battle Phase. If this card is sent to the Graveyard for the activation of an effect of a "Shounen Warrior" monster: add this card to your hand during your Draw Phase. During your opponent's End Phase: you can Tribute this card to Special Summon "Shounen Warrior - Kirito LV8" from your hand or Deck.



This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Shounen Warrior - Kirito LV6". You can discard one "Shounen Warrior" monster: this card can attack twice during this turn's Battle Phase. If this card destroys a monster by battle: inflict 500 damage to your opponent. If this card is sent to the Graveyard for the activation of an effect of a "Shounen Warrior" monster: add this card to your hand during your Draw Phase. During your opponent's End Phase: you can Tribute this card to Special Summon "Shounen Warrior - Kirito LV10" from your hand or Deck.



This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Shounen Warrior - Kirito LV8". You can discard two "Shounen Warrior" monsters: this card can attack all of your opponent's monsters on the field during that turn's Battle Phase. If that effect is activated; if this card attacks: it is unaffected by other card effects until the end of the Damage Step. If this card is sent to the Graveyard for the activation of an effect of a "Shounen Warrior" monster: add this card to your hand during your Draw Phase.



You can discard one "Shounen Warrior" monster: this card can attack directly this turn. If this card battles: you can discard one "Shounen Warrior" monster, this card is not destroyed in that battle (damage calculation is applied). If this card is sent to the Graveyard for the activation of an effect of a "Shounen Warrior" monster: add this card to your hand during your Draw Phase.



Once per turn, during either player's turn, when a monster activates its effect: You can discard two "Shounen Warrior" monsters, negate the activation. If this card is sent to the Graveyard for the activation of an effect of a "Shounen Warrior" monster: add this card to your hand during your Draw Phase.



If a "Shounen Warrior" monster you control activates its effect, except "Bishounen Warrior - Inuyasha", place 1 Shounen Counter on this card. This card gains 100 ATK for every Shounen Counter on this card. During the End Phase, remove all Shounen Counters placed on this card by this effect. If this card is sent to the Graveyard for the activation of an effect of a "Shounen Warrior" monster: add this card to your hand during your Draw Phase.



When a "Shounen Warrior" monster you control is destroyed by battle: you can discard 2 "Shounen Warrior" monsters to target the opponent's monster which destroyed your monster; destroy that target. If this card is sent to the Graveyard for the activation of an effect of a "Shounen Warrior" monster: add this card to your hand during your Draw Phase.



Once per turn: you can discard two "Shounen Warrior" monsters to target one face-up card on the field; while this card is face-up on the field, that target's effects are negated. You can only target 1 card at a time with this effect. If this card is sent to the Graveyard for the activation of an effect of a "Shounen Warrior" monster: add this card to your hand during your Draw Phase.

[Hyuuga Mayuki]

Once per turn: you can discard one "Shounen Warrior" monster to have this card gain the following effect: At the start of the Battle Step, if this card battles with a monster with the same Attribute with the Attribute of the "Shounen Warrior" monster discarded by this effect: destroy that monster(without damage calculation). If this card is sent to the Graveyard for the activation of an effect of a "Shounen Warrior" monster: add this card to your hand during your Draw Phase.



Once per turn: you can discard one "Shounen Warrior" monster to have this card gain the Attribute of the discarded monster. Once per turn, when a "Shounen Warrior" monster with an Attribute the same as this monster's Attribute is targeted by a card effect: negate that effect. If this card is sent to the Graveyard for the activation of an effect of a "Shounen Warrior" monster: add this card to your hand during your Draw Phase.

[The Sleeping Lion]

Dude I love your warrior cards! I think they are awesome, and the effect of each card is very well thought out! Props!! ^_^

[Hyuuga Mayuki]

Dude I love your warrior cards! I think they are awesome, and the effect of each card is very well thought out! Props!! ^_^

Thanks pal, I've been into creating cards as balanced as possible, and in keeping with each character's skills. The only problem is that there's no enough cross-over art to serve as the archetype's Spell and Trap Cards. Although there's enough Monster Cards to fill one-and-a-half Structure Decks. The plan is also that I'll add a number of characters from a series based on how many fanarts generated from that series in Zerochan. And maybe I'll also create a Shoujo Warrior archetype.

DHARC EDIT: General upgrades upcoming for Ichigo, Tsuna, and Conan(as Shinichi), as well as a new General: Okumura Rin from Ao no Exorcist.

[Hyuuga Mayuki]

 

Once per turn: You can discard two "Shounen Warrior" monsters to target the monster on the field with the highest ATK; this monster gains ATK equal to half the ATK of that target. If this card is sent to the Graveyard for the activation of an effect of a "Shounen Warrior" monster: add this card to your hand during your Draw Phase.

 

 

2 Level 4 Spellcaster OR Psychic-Type monsters
During either players' turn, if the effect of a card activates that destroys a card(s) on the field: discard one "Shounen Warrior" monster, negate the activation(this is a Compulsory effect). Once per turn, if a Trap effect activates: you can detach one Xyz Material from this card, negate the activation.

 

 

2 Level 4 Warrior-Type monsters
If this card would be destroyed by battle: you can detach one Xyz Material from this monster instead. If that effect resolves: this card gains ATK equal to half the ATK of the monster it battled with, at the end of the Battle Phase. If this card would leave the field: you can remove a total of 7 Shounen Counters from cards you control instead.

[The Sleeping Lion]

awesome! Goku, Naruto and L join the scene :D

[Hyuuga Mayuki]

Actually I'm having a hard time synergizing the Spell and Trap Cards with the cards I've created, and so I'll not post the next series of cards until I'm finished on the Spells and Traps.

[G.B. Sparticus]

Yay! Goku is finally in.