nodyyyy Posted April 30, 2014 Report Share Posted April 30, 2014 Effect: When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by battle, you can Special Summon it at the End Phase. When this card is Special Summoned by its own effect: Skip your next Draw Phase. Each time this card is Special Summoned by its own effect: You can target 1 face-up monster on the field it loses 400 ATK permanently.I hope it isn't now to strong in combination with Black Garden. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted April 30, 2014 Report Share Posted April 30, 2014 Interesting effect. Im curious what you had in mind for this guy. Seems like its meant to support a stall strategy but im not sure. Im tempted to call it abusable, but the fact it only triggers when destroyed by battle seems to balance it quite nicely. The OCG could use a little tweaking. Let me take a crack at it for you: During either player's End Phase, if this card was destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon it from the Graveyard. If this card is Special Summoned this way, skip your next Draw Phase. When this card is Special Summoned by its own effect, you can target 1 face-up monster on the field; it loses 400 ATK permanently. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TFMegamanlan Posted April 30, 2014 Report Share Posted April 30, 2014 This seems UP to me... As it's already weak then it only slightly weakens another monster to give up your next draw? I'd gladly just keep destroying this monster by Battle then keep pushing for game as I know you can't draw... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted April 30, 2014 Report Share Posted April 30, 2014 he can still draw, though... just doesnt have draw phase...cup of ace, upstart goblin, golden bamboo sword, maxx c, and cardcar d just to name a few Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nodyyyy Posted April 30, 2014 Author Report Share Posted April 30, 2014 I wanted to make an Archetype of 5 cards that weak the opponents monsters with and aditional Field Spell for support but I gave up beacuse I couldnt find good artwork for them. Also I think this card can be combined with some other cards to make a very good combination. Yes you lose your Draw Phase and it has low ATK and DEF but if I made a stronger monster with higher ATK and DEF plus without the effect of losing your Draw Phase wouldnt it then be a to much strong card?? I want my cards to be balanced. Thank you for your replys if you have any ideas what should U edit on this card or what card should I edit next feel free to say. I accept every critic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TFMegamanlan Posted April 30, 2014 Report Share Posted April 30, 2014 he can still draw, though... just doesnt have draw phase...cup of ace, upstart goblin, golden bamboo sword, maxx c, and cardcar d just to name a few And what happens if those were already used or the player doesn't have those in his hand? Then they just made a way for me to kick them without worry. I wanted to make an Archetype of 5 cards that weak the opponents monsters with and aditional Field Spell for support but I gave up beacuse I couldnt find good artwork for them. Also I think this card can be combined with some other cards to make a very good combination. Yes you lose your Draw Phase and it has low ATK and DEF but if I made a stronger monster with higher ATK and DEF plus without the effect of losing your Draw Phase wouldnt it then be a to much strong card?? I want my cards to be balanced. Thank you for your replys if you have any ideas what should U edit on this card or what card should I edit next feel free to say. I accept every critic. Well, considering that there are Reptillianne's, Gorgonics, and random cards like Ghost Gardna that have comparable but a bit better effects, (Gorgonic Guardian for example is an Xyz with 1600 ATK that can kick any Opp's Monster to 0 once during any player's turn + negate its effect and it can destroy a Monster with 0 ATK OPT too) My suggestion would be make it that it would take more away and at least give it like 1200-1400 ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nodyyyy Posted April 30, 2014 Author Report Share Posted April 30, 2014 Yeah but they cannot come back when they are destroyed, and they need to detach a monster. Like I said I wanted this card to make with some Spell Cards or Spell Fields to give it full support and make a very strong combination at dueling but I didnt find the right pictuers for those cards so I gave up. Thank you for your suggestion if I dont find those pictures that I search I will re-edit, boost its ATK and DEF a little bit and mabey add some details in the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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