Golem Archetype

[redrock1337]

Again, I want CnC. The previous cards were removed on purpose, simply for memory purposes.

 

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[redrock1337]

I own none of these pictures

[Mihe]

These cards seem pretty cool so far. Liking the artwork in them as well. :)

 

Here's some stuff I'll comment on:

 

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/uploads/monthly_05_2014/post-748403-0-44801500-1399003507.jpg

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/uploads/monthly_05_2014/post-748403-0-82406400-1399003534.jpg

"you can discard 1 card," This part here seems incomplete. I think it needs to be either "you can discard 1 card from your hand to the graveyard" or simply, "you can discard 1 card from your hand". The difference would be that in order for the effect to activate and resolve, the first suggestion ("you can discard 1 card from your hand to the graveyard") requires the discarded card to be in the graveyard, whereas the second suggestion ("you can discard 1 card from your hand") only requires a card to be discarded from your hand, no matter where it leaves to. The second suggestion is ofc better imo, but in this case of Golem of Fire's full effect, the end means would be in the graveyard anyway, so using the second suggestion is pointless, as the resolve is a FIRE monster being sent to the grave or WATER being added to your hand (which in this case, the second suggestion is recommended). 

 

I'm really liking the boss monsters effects as well. Really quite good work!