Number 1: Golem of Banishment

[Mew9001]

Number 1: Golem of Banishment

Rank oooooooooo        [Machine/Xyz/Effect]     Dark Monster

2 Level 10 monsters                                 

This card's ATK and DEF is x500 for every monster in both player's graveyard. Once per turn: You can target one monster on your side of the field, attach it to this card. That monster become Xyz material for this card. Once per turn: You can detach one Xyz material from this card: Banish one card on the field                  ATK/ ?   DEF/ ?

 

 

 

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[Progenitor]

First off: there already is a Number 1.  You're gonna have to fix that.

 

OCG fix:

2 Level 10 monsters                                 

This card's ATK and DEF is equal to x500 for every the number of monsters in both player's graveyard times 500. Once per turn: You can target one face-up monster on your side of the field that you control; attach it to this card. That monster become as a face-up Xyz material for this card. Once per turn: You can detach one Xyz material from this card; banish one card on the field.

One tip on your OCG: If there is something that resolves because of a previous action (such as attaching after a traget) the two actions are separated by a semi-colon, as I have done.

 

Honestly this isn't that bad.  It seems like a nice tech card for a rank 10 deck, and it adds some banish support while being a massive attacker late game.

It doesn't have a lot of protection though, but with a potentially infinite banish I think that would be overkill.

 

8/10; not bad for one of your firsts.  Nice, simple and effective.