[Haru-Star] Noble Knight Support

[Armoire]

Bump. Need criticisms for monsters.

[Dracoswag]

I like the addition of the Trap card and the new Synchro Monster. The Trap can go well with Round Table.

 

Also I believe Lamorak has a grammatical error.

 

• This card is unaffected by monster effects. Once per turn, if you have 5 or more "Noble Knight" cards in your Graveyard with different names once per turn: You can target 1 of your banished "Noble Knight" monsters or "Lady of the Lake"; return it to the Graveyard.

I think if, you want a much more optical reason/use for Lady of the Lake, maybe make it so that, instead of returning it to the Graveyard, make it Special Summon the target (an an either/or like effect, meaning it can return it to the Graveyard OR Special Summon it from banished.) If you think that is too much, you can always put the restriction clause of "you can only Special summon Noble Knight monsters or Lady of the Lake for the rest of this turn this effect was used" and what not.

 

For Medraut Traitor Xyz

 

Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Special Summon any number of "Noble Knight" monsters from your Graveyard in face-up Defense Postition, up to the number of "Noble Arms" Equip Spell Cards you control but you cannot Special Summon monsters for the rest of this turn, except "Noble Knight" monsters.

 

Simply was missing the term "you" because it was hard to read otherwise. So far, these cards are really interesting, and if Guidance was a real card, it would be an amazing Side Deck card vs. Shaddolls and Monarch Support.

 

(Also, I had an idea for a card concept for your Dark Blade set, if you wanted me to pm the idea to you.)

 

[CrowCardMaster]

Am I dumb for saying these would work great with Gilford?? cause im seeing that he could be quite usfull with those Noble Arms equips?

[Armoire]

Am I dumb for saying these would work great with Gilford?? cause im seeing that he could be quite usfull with those Noble Arms equips?

 

Gilford the Legend would be nice with these, but the problem is summoning him. But if you did, you have a nearly-invincible Gilford with you.

 

 

 

I like the addition of the Trap card and the new Synchro Monster. The Trap can go well with Round Table.

 

Also I believe Lamorak has a grammatical error.

 

• This card is unaffected by monster effects. Once per turn, if you have 5 or more "Noble Knight" cards in your Graveyard with different names once per turn: You can target 1 of your banished "Noble Knight" monsters or "Lady of the Lake"; return it to the Graveyard.

I think if, you want a much more optical reason/use for Lady of the Lake, maybe make it so that, instead of returning it to the Graveyard, make it Special Summon the target (an an either/or like effect, meaning it can return it to the Graveyard OR Special Summon it from banished.) If you think that is too much, you can always put the restriction clause of "you can only Special summon Noble Knight monsters or Lady of the Lake for the rest of this turn this effect was used" and what not.

 

For Medraut Traitor Xyz

 

Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Special Summon any number of "Noble Knight" monsters from your Graveyard in face-up Defense Postition, up to the number of "Noble Arms" Equip Spell Cards you control but you cannot Special Summon monsters for the rest of this turn, except "Noble Knight" monsters.

 

Simply was missing the term "you" because it was hard to read otherwise. So far, these cards are really interesting, and if Guidance was a real card, it would be an amazing Side Deck card vs. Shaddolls and Monarch Support.

 

(Also, I had an idea for a card concept for your Dark Blade set, if you wanted me to pm the idea to you.)

 

Fixed the Synchro and Medraut. Thanks for the compliment towards Noble Arms of Guidance, but I couldn't have done it without your... guidance. (huehue)
I don't mind the idea. PM me it.

[Armoire]

Bump.