Faded Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 Attention: Must Read The Rules First.Rules1- There is to be NO rating given to this card! So no ?/10 or whatever.2 -Only suggestions on how to fix the grammar mistakes!3 -Dont say theres an error without first pointing it out! You may discuss ideas about the card, and suggest changes. Any breaking of the above rules will get you Neg'd! After I am satisfied with the result and changes, and everyone says its okay, then will it be added it to my card collection thread, and open to ratings there. [align=center]This monster cannot be destroyed by battle or Spell and Trap Cards controlled by you. This monster cannot be used as a Tribute. Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 "SpaMan" from your hand or Deck. During each End Phase, if you have not Special Summoned 1 "SpaMan" from your hand or Deck this turn, then you must remove this card from play, and inflict 1200 damage to your Life Points.disclaimer: I do not own this picture. I only use this to enhance over overall quality of my card.[/align] Some combo'sSpaMan + Limiter Removal!SpaMan + Begone Knave!SpaMan + Creature Swap / Exchange Can you think of any other combo's with this card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SpazzeOut Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 I like this card for some reason..., theres some OCG errors pic is fine. 8.5/9.5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
72night Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 Umm... "..destroyed. (Damage Calculation is applied normally).".. Don't put a period after destroyed.. >_>First of all Tribute..Second of all Tributed isn't a word.. If you wonder how you say it then, "You cannot Tribute this monster.."hand not Hand..I think your suppose to say card in this sense..Your arts always amazes me. ^_^ But you didn't credit the artist. =/Overall = 8.3/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AJM Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 sry dont like it. OCG is bad. PIC IS GOOD. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 hand does not get capitalized... i dislike the name of spaman = spam man... 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lilly white Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 Besides a few OCG errors its good card I give it a 8/10 ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 I like the pictureOCG errors3.12/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 @Spazze- Thanks for liking my card@72- Ill edit the card [Hard to break old tradition thats all]. I put a disclaimer below it, and that is as good as crediting the artist. Plus I dont know who that is.@AJM- Thanks. OCG can be fixed, then it would be awesome!!@hunterb- Your so clever. The name is a combination of Spam and Man. Its meant to be that way@Yuri- Thanks alot for your rating! :)@Crazy- 6.24/10? hurts Altered and Fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeroshot Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 I'm sorry Faded, I have to neg you for that. Direspectful and hunterb is a great card maker. for the card, 7/10. Since you insult respectful members -34/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hioco Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 kool one faded 9/10 but a few errors (u know where to come for that lol) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 hunter "My cards are better than yours." No way dude your cards arent any better zershot "I'm sorry Faded, I have to neg you for that. Direspectful and hunterb is a great card maker. for the card, 7/10. Since you insult respectful members -34/10" I receive your negative rep with open arms my friend! I accept it in all its forms, and it was so worth it. I loved every minute of it. Thanks for the rating also! even though its lame. sheesh you guys are the insulting ones. expect a backlash from me in the near future. even I dont rate s*** cards I see a 7. hioco "kool one faded 9/10 but a few errors (u know where to come for that lol)" thank you but ive changed it twice already everyone has ocg errors, because everyone thinks that their way of wording it is more correct. I want proof Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 Some OCG problems, but i think its good. 8/10This monster cannot be destroyed by Battle (Damage Calculation is applied normally). This monster cannot be used as a Tribute for Tribute Summon. Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 "SpaMan" from your hand or Deck. During each of your End Phases, if you didnt Special Summon a monster, remove this card from play and inflict 1200 Direct Damage to your Life Points.I think it should be more correct... Lucky now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 Thanks, proof of ocg or your comment is N/A. new rule EDIT: OMFG Grayall take a look at your card in your sig before you say my ocg is off Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 This card is cool I think you have fixed all the errors but Im not sure because my ocg sucks.The pic rocks.In all i give it a 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 Thanks haris, at least you admit that you are unsure. Some blurt out that ocg is off, but if you look at their cards [eg grayalls card in sig, and hunterbs new card] then youll see that they speak alot of crap! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 Whats about card, its for being the card, not for cool OCG. So. little guy, dont mess up, k?HOW CAN YOU SAY MY OCG IS INCORRECT, IF YOUR iS! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 because I can back my claims up field>Field, switch>turn, becomes>declared?WTH!, battle>Battle, the " is in the wrong place or the sentence is structured wrong, and the ATK becomes 0 not decreased to 0. bro Im not little, you didnt even say where my errors are, so what have you got to say for yourself now? school boy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 Oh hell, just take off...There are mistakes of words in my cards, but there are mistakes in sentences in your card...How you can think that i am school boy? You dont even know my age... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slade Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 I'm not even going to review the card, because you'll just flame me like you did everyone else who didn't give it a good review.:| *sigh* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 grayall- "Oh hell, just take off...There are mistakes of words in my cards, but there are mistakes in sentences in your card...How you can think that i am school boy? You dont even know my age..." The schoolboy terms means that you got schooled and need to learn. I pointed out the fact the since you have errors that you cant get started on someone elses errors. It just sounds so hypocritical And why am I a little boy? Im older than you most probably I only ask for proof and no I dont want reviews they suck. I want to know how the card [effect] interacts with other cards. I hate people saying bad things but not talking how good this card is when combo'd with this card or what deck itll be good with etc Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
barsam Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 I like it^__^! I like your holo's to! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 Thanks. Anyone else. Any comments on gameplay? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 Should it not be 'During each of your End Phases' ?? the word 'every' i dont believe to be correct OCG, and if there are cards with the Ref of 'every', then they should never have been made. Regardless your current 'every End Phase', also counts towards your opponent, and is the effect not a your-turn only effect?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 Um its for every End Phase but im not sure about whether its each or every. Ill look into. unless you of course know of cards that I can ref to already. and thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted March 24, 2008 Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 Well as i said, i dont believe to have seen a card with 'every', i always understood it was 'each'. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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