Elspeth, Sun's Champion

[Sunn O)))]

 

2 Level 4 monsters

You can only use 1 "Elspeth, Sun's Champion" effect per turn, and only once that turn. Detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Special Summon 3 "Soldier Tokens" (Warrior-Type/LIGHT/Level 1/ATK 800/DEF 800). Detach 2 Xyz Materials from this card; Destroy all monsters on the field with 2000 or more ATK.

[JohnWalrusIII]

Though I'm not certain, I believe this card technically belongs in a different section, as it was a MtG card originally.

[Sunn O)))]

Though I'm not certain, I believe this card technically belongs in a different section, as it was a MtG card originally.

 

I've posted multiple MtG cards here before, so you are wrong.

[newhat]

I think retrains for YGO cards go somewhere else. But retrains of MTG cards are fine here.

 

The Token effect is not particularly useful because of how resource management works in Yu-Gi-Oh. You can't "trade" them with other monsters and they're not that great for Synchros or even for protecting your field.

 

The nuke effect is probably too heavy because it's inevitably going to be one-sided. I don't know because Exciton exists.

 

There should be "you can" clauses and semicolons in the effect but it can be understood so it's fine.

[Sunn O)))]

I think retrains for YGO cards go somewhere else. But retrains of MTG cards are fine here.

 

The Token effect is not particularly useful because of how resource management works in Yu-Gi-Oh. You can't "trade" them with other monsters and they're not that great for Synchros or even for protecting your field.

 

The nuke effect is probably too heavy because it's inevitably going to be one-sided. I don't know because Exciton exists.

 

There should be "you can" clauses and semicolons in the effect but it can be understood so it's fine.

 

Why did I use colons instead of semicolons? Based the wording on Castel's wording, besides the colons, I think it's right. Should I make the tokens stronger and nerf the nuke eff? 

 

Fixed the semicolons.

[newhat]

You are right. The "You can" clause is already attached to the OPT clause.

[Sunn O)))]

So, how do I fix this?

[death00]

 

2 Level 4 monsters

You can only use 1 "Elspeth, Sun's Champion" effect per turn, Once per turn and only once that turn, You may use 1 of  "Elspeth, Sun's Champion's" effects . Detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Special Summon 3 "Soldier Tokens" (Warrior-Type/LIGHT/Level 1/ATK 400/DEF 400). Detach 2 Xyz Materials from this card; Destroy all monsters on the field with 2000 or more ATK.

 

There you go.

[Sunn O)))]

There you go.

 

I don't get it. Pretty sure I'm using the correct OCG.

[Armoire]

 

I don't get it. Pretty sure I'm using the correct OCG.

 

 

Your OCG's perfect. I don't know what he was talking about.

And as for the Tokens, I like the effect because they don't have any restrictions, meaning you could play them with Synchros or Tribute them for stuff like Wicked Dreadroot or Enemy Controller. If you want, I'd say even bump up their stats to ~700 ATK/DEF.

[Sunn O)))]

Your OCG's perfect. I don't know what he was talking about.

And as for the Tokens, I like the effect because they don't have any restrictions, meaning you could play them with Synchros or Tribute them for stuff like Wicked Dreadroot or Enemy Controller. If you want, I'd say even bump up their stats to ~700 ATK/DEF.

 

Just made the ATK and DEF 800, because I prefer 800.

 

Also, I'm pretty sure there is a way to summon Quasar with this. Can someone find the way?