Prepare for complete Annihilation! Dragon World Archetype *Complete*

[BleuConviction]

For the last few months I've been slowly working on an archetype that I had created with help from a friend of mine. After 30+ card, I finally decided it was enough which brought me to post this. I present: Dragon World! OCG help would be great.


[spoiler=Cards]

Spells

[spoiler=Flight of the Dragons][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Text]Activate by paying 1000 Life Points. Until the End Phase of your opponent's next turn, negate the effects of your opponent's Spell/Trap Cards that target a Dragon-Type monster(s) you control, and if you do, destroy them.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Dragon World][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Text]Cannot be destroyed by Spell/Trap Cards or by monster effects. During each of your Main Phases, you must pay 1000 Life Points or discard a card and banish a card in your Deck or Graveyard (this is not optional), or this card is destroyed.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Burning Fields][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Text]If you control a Dragon-Type monster: Target up to 3 empty Monster Card Zones your opponent controls; those zones cannot be used.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Surprise Maneuver][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Text]Flip all face-down monsters on the field face-up, then activate 1 of the following effects.
- Gain 400 Life Points for every Dragon-Type monster you control.
- Change the Battle Position of all monsters on the field.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Dark and Light Ritual][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Text]This card is used to Ritual Summon "Drakoth the Devourer of Worlds" or "Zeiphon Bringer of Light". You must also Tribute monsters from your hand or field whose total Levels equal 10 or more.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Dragon Sanctuary][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Text]Each time a level 9 or higher Dragon-type monster is Special Summoned; place 1 S-Counter on this card. You can remove 2 S-Counters from this card; draw 1 card and gain 1000 Life Points. There can be no more than 4 S-Counters on this card.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Strategic Swarm][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Text]During either players turn, if you control 3 or more Level 9 or higher Dragon-type monsters, activate 1 of these effects.
.Your opponent reveals their hand; choose 1 card and put it on top of their deck,
.All face-up Dragon-type monsters loose all their ATK until the end of the turn: target 1 Dragon-type monster you control; it gains half of all the total ATK lost this turn by Dragon-type monsters you control until the end of this turn. Also it gains piercing damage.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Land of Ancient Beginning]

[spoiler=Text]When this is activated, add 1 "Dragon World" from your deck to your hand. When this card is removed from the field; Special Summon 1 Level 5 or 9 Dragon-type monster from your graveyard.[/spoiler][/spoiler]


Traps

[spoiler=Power Burst][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Text]Activate only if you have half of your starting Life Points. Discard 2 cards in your hand and banish 2 cards in your Deck/Graveyard: Select and activate 1 of the following effects.
- Draw 3 cards; gain 1000 Life Points for every Dragon-Type monster drawn by this effect.
- Target 1 Level 9 or lower Dragon-Type Monster in your Deck: Special Summon that target. The Special Summon of that monster cannot be negated.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Draconic Siege][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Text]Activate only if you control 2 or more face-up Level 9 or Higher Dragon-type monsters. Target up to 2 Spell/Trap Cards on the field; destroy those target(s). Then you can gain these effects based on what you destroy.
. 2 Spell Cards: Gain 2000 Life Points.
. 2 Trap Cards: Discard 1 random card from your opponents hand.
. 1 Spell and 1 Trap Card: Gain 1000 Life Points and your opponent discards a card from their hand.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Draconic Blitzz Fireball][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Text]When an opponent's monster declares an attack on a face-up Level 9 or higher Dragon-type monster you control: negate the Attack and halve the ATK of all face-up monsters your opponent controls until the end of the Battle Phase.[/spoiler]



Monsters

[spoiler=Essther Protector of Earth][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Text]This card cannot be Normal Summoned. You can banish 2 Dragon monsters (from your hand, field or Graveyard) to Special Summon this card from your hand. When a monster is Special Summoned to your opponent's side of the field in face-up Attack Position; That monster loses 1000 DEF, then if its DEF has been reduced to 0 as a result, destroy it. During your opponents turn, you can banish this card from your side of the field; your monsters cannot be destroyed by battle this turn.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Kequeom Guardian of the Sea][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Text]Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. Must be Special Summoned (from your hand) by shuffling 2 cards from your hand/field into the Deck. When this is Special Summoned select 1 of your opponent's Monster Card Zones; while this card is face up on the field, the selected zones cannot be used.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Raynir King of Lightning][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Text]You can reveal the top 3 cards of your deck; if any of them are Dragon-Type monsters: Special Summon this card from your hand in face-up ATK position. If summoned this way; this card can't attack until the your next turn. If this card is used for a Xyz/Ritual Summon; the Summoned monster gains 2000 ATK until the end of your turn. This card is also treated as a Dark monster while face-up on the field.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Sahake the Great Wind][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Text]If a face-up Dragon monster you control is destroyed by battle or by card effect: you can pay 1000 Life Points; Special Summon this card from your hand in face-up ATK position. If Summoned this way, this card cannot attack or change its battle position. This effect can only be used once per turn.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Dru the Blazing Flame][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Text]If you control a Rank 9 (or higher) Xyz monster: you can pay 1000LP; Special Summon this card from your hand in face-up DEF position. If Summoned this way: Target 1 set card your opponent controls; reveal it then set it back face-down.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Carcus Creature of the Deep][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Text]When you Summon a Level 9 or higher Dragon-type Dark, Earth, or Water monster; Special Summon this card from your hand. Once per turn, you can send the top 3 cards of your deck to the graveyard; increase this cards level by 4 until the end of the turn.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Dalzaar the Gleaming Fire][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Text]When you Summon a Level 9 or higher Dragon-type Light, Wind, or Fire monster; Special Summon this card from your hand. Once per turn, you can pay 500 Life Points; increase this cards level by 4 until the end of the turn. If you used this effect, your opponent draws 2 cards during their next Draw Phase.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Saku the Cyclone][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Text]When you Summon a Level 9 or higher Dragon-type Wind or Earth monster; Special Summon this card from your hand. Once per turn, you can banish 2 cards in your graveyard; increase this cards level by 4 until the end of the turn.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Eeos the Shining Star][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Text]This card is also treated as an Earth monster. This card cannot be Normal Summoned. If there is a face-up "Dragon World" on the field; Special Summon this from your hand in face-up Defense position. Once per turn, you can pay 1000 Life Points; Special Summon 1 Level 5 or 9 Dragon-type Water, Fire, or Earth monster from your deck. Its effects are negated and it cannot Attack. You cannot conduct your Battle Phase the turn you activate this effect. This card cannot be used for an Xyz or Synchro Summon.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Rathos the Descendent of Dracos][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Text]You can discard this card from your hand; add 1 "Dragon World" from your deck to your hand. If you control 2 or more Dragon-type monsters on the field: pay 2000 Life Points; Special Summon this card from your hand. You must control "Dragon World" to activate this effect.[/spoiler]


Extra Deck

[spoiler=Drakoth Devourer of Worlds][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Text]You can Ritual Summon this card with "Dark and Light Ritual". You do not pay the maintenance cost for "Dragon World". While "Dragon World" is face-up on the field, this card cannot be targeted for attacks. Once per turn, you can activate 1 of the following effects.
- Target 1 card on the field; banish it.
- Pay 3000 Life Points; banish all cards on the field except for "Dragon World" and this card.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Zeiphon Bringer of Light][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Text]You can Ritual Summon this card with "Dark and Light Ritual". You do not pay the maintenance cost for "Dragon World". While "Dragon World" is face-up on the field, this card cannot be affected by spell effects. Once per turn, you can activate 1 of the following effects.
- Target 1 Dragon monster in your graveyard; special summon it.
- Pay 2000 Life Points; banish all face-down cards on your opponents side of the field.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Falekim the Intense Heat][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Text]2 Level 9 Dragon-type monsters
This is also treated as a Dark monster. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material; Special Summon 1 level 5 or 9 Dragon-type monster from your Graveyard. Its effects are negated, also it cannot attack. While you control another Dragon-type monster; if this card attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict piercing Battle Damage to your opponent. You must control "Dragon World" to activate any of these effects.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Taskel the Frozen Nightmare][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Text]3 Level 9 Dragon-type monsters
This cards Summon cannot be negated. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card, then target 1 Dragon monster you control; it gains ATK equal to half its DEF. If this card would be removed from the field by a card effect, you can detach 2 Xyz materials from this card; negate the card and destroy it. Face-up Dragon monsters you control gain 500 ATK. You must control "Dragon World" to activate any of these effects.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Ohnom the Draconic Phantom][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Text]3 Level 10 Monsters
You can also Xyz Summon this monster by using 1 Dragon Xyz monster and 2 Level 5 or 9 Dragon-type effect monsters in your graveyard. While this card has Xyz material it cannot be destroyed by battle or by card effects. Once per turn you can target 1 monster on the field; decrease its ATK to 0 and this card gains ATK equal to half the amount lost. During each of your End Phases: Detach 1 Xyz Material from this card. When this card has no Xyz materials its attack becomes 0.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Tycarad Golem of Annihilation][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Text]2 or more (max. 3) Level 9 Dragon-type Monsters
While this card is face-up on the field, switch all your other Dragon-type monsters to face-up DEF position. Your opponents monsters can only target this face-up card for an attack. You must control "Dragon World" on the field to declare an attack with this card. At the end of your opponents end phase; detach 1 Xyz material from this card. When this card has no Xyz materials left; halve its ATK and DEF.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Noyuko the Cosmic Obliterator][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Text]2 Rank 9 or Higher Dragon-Type Xyz Monsters
This card is unaffected by other card effects while it has Xyz material. While this card has no Xyz material; all Dragon-type monsters you control cannot be destroyed by card effects. During either players turn, you can detach 2 Xyz material from this card; Special Summon both Materials used with this card (and their materials). You must discard 1 card at the end of each players turn for this card to remain on the field. You cannot control more than 1 " Noyuko the Cosmic Obliterator".[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Ralek the Crystal Colossus][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Text]2 Level 9 Dragon-type Monsters
Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz material from this card; Special Summon 2 "Crystal Tokens" (Rock-Type/Earth/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 2000) in face-up DEF position. While you control a "Crystal Token", you can Normal Summon 1 additional time. Each time you Summon a card, this card gains 1000 ATK until the end of your opponents next turn. You must control "Dragon World" to activate any of these effects.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Xephos Emissary of the Heavens][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Text]2 Level 9 Dragon-type monsters
The Summon of this card cannot be negated. When this card is Summoned: target up to 3 cards your opponent controls; add them to the hand. When this card attacks: you can send 1 card from your hand to the bottom of the Deck: target 1 face-up monster you control; it is unaffected by card effects until the end of the turn.[/spoiler]

[spoiler]Enjoy![/spoiler]

[BleuConviction]

bump ...

[razzy]

Don't have a whole lot of time at the moment but I looked over the spell/traps

 

Dragon World's effect would stop itself from being destroyed. Should just say "Cannot be destroyed by other card effects." I can see some combos with it. I don't know who on Earth would take 1000 LP over either of the other effects. Especially the discard/banish effect.

 

Burning Fields - Not sure how I feel about it. On one hand 3 zones seems like a bit much but they will still be able to Xyz and such. Should add a clause that destroys itself if you don't control any Dragons after activation. 

 

Power Burst - Cards in the deck cannot be targeted.

 

Draconic Blitzz Fireball - What's the point of halving their attack until only the end phase if this card ends the battle phase anyway? Something cool would be if it halved their attack and forced them to attack with all monsters they control.

[BleuConviction]

Thanks for the feedback... I'll make some edits.