Homunculus Cards FMA

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Let me start this out with I have no Idea how to add images as the normal add image thing won't work for me and attaching files only lets me do three of them. So I Have to do Links.

 

Ok so these are the Homunculus cards I made. Please give any useful advice on how to improve them as these are my first attempts at making cards.

 

Homunculus cards are cards that can not be destroyed in battle. I made them like this to compare it to there regenerative properties they hold.

 

I also made it so there can only be up to 2 Homunculus cards on the field at any given time. Lust and Gluttony traveled together and worked in a sort of partnership. Thats the reason for the only 2 Homunculi on the field at any given time rule. I also wanted to NERF the cards a bit as 5 monsters that can't be destroyed in battle all on the field is kind of overkill.

 

There are 2 stages for the Homunculi cards. There initial stage, which is just level 4 effect monsters and then there, I guess you could call it 2nd stage. There 2nd stage can be destroyed by battle. The first stages cannot. To get one Homunculus form the first stage to the 2nd you must equip that card with the Philosophers stone card. Then you must sacrifice the Homunculi equpied with said card to bring out there 2nd stage. The 2nd stage cards can only be brought out with this method (not including reviving from the graveyard and other methods).

 

Lets start off with the Philosophers Stone Card

http://i.imgur.com/8YxCeIL.jpg

 

  Here is Sloth

http://i.imgur.com/MczRr8x.jpg

 

I tried to keep true to Sloths Lazy nature as well as showing his raw strength. Even though his attack is at 2200 after he attacks he must switch to defense mode. To get him out of defense mode you must discard a card. 

 

Heres the 2nd stage version

http://i.imgur.com/qJ7wEes.jpg

 

The attack might be a little high, but I wanted to show off the raw power sloth is said to have. He didn't have to many abilities in the anime though so compared to the other homunculi he is the strongest power wise.

 

 

Now heres Greed.

http://i.imgur.com/m3PmDux.jpg

 

So Greed is Greedy. Just saying that now if it wasn't obvious. So of course the ability to steal from your opponent is a good idea. And when he uses this effect he can't attack cause he switches to defense mode, so I guess again Im evening him out. Plus greed's ultimate shield, so Obviously a better def then attack.

 

2nd Stage Greed

http://i.imgur.com/5owKIuj.jpg

 

So the gaining attack points after Homunculus monster is destroyed references to the end of the anime where Greed gained friends and s***. And again, the Ultimate Defense so when he is attack it makes sense for him to switch to defense mode.

 

This is All I got for now as Im working on the others. Ill update this as I create these new cards. So anyways judge away. Please no "this sucks, this is terrible" bullshit. If you want to criticize please at least tell me how to improve.