Zimerick-Art Posted June 10, 2014 Report Share Posted June 10, 2014 This archetype is primarily focused on making it so your opponent can't do many big plays while also doing damage in the mean time. They are all Dark Attribute and Fiend-typed with their names, concept, and artwork being based around dark themes as well as psychological terms. Their effects revolve around being rid of the cards in your opponents hand to drive them to the point of insanity during the Duel or match to give you a bigger advantage. Let the psychotic powers roam wild throughout your mind! [spoiler=Macabre Remnant Amnesia] When this card is Summoned: You can look at your opponent's hand, if they have any Spell or Trap Cards return them to the bottom of their Deck and inflict 100 damage to your opponent's Life Points for each card sent to the Deck. Gain Life Points equal to the damage inflicted to your opponent. Amnesia was the first monster to be created and the artwork was the inspiration for the archetype, using the effect of this monster may just make your opponent question what happened. The true name of this monster is Gorey Remains of Memories Lost.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Macabre Remnant Amygdala] When this card is Summoned: You can look at your opponent's hand, if they have any monsters with 2000 or more ATK return those cards to the bottom of their Deck and inflict 200 damage to your opponent's Life Points for each card sent to the Deck. Gain Life Points equal to the damage inflicted to your opponent. Amygdala comes from the part of the human brain by the same name that stores emotions and emotional behavior. It is the physical manifestation of the trauma the woman in the artwork went through. The true name of this monster is Gorey Remains of Emotional Trauma.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Macabre Remnant Bipolarity] When this card is Summoned: You can look at your opponent's hand, if they have any Spell Cards send them to their Graveyard and inflict 300 damage to your opponent's Life Points for each card discarded. If this effect resolves Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Macabre Remnant" monster from your Deck. Bipolarity is the term used for someone with the mental illness bipolar disorder, it is the psychological representation of anger and hatred giving it the appearance of a powerful being. The true name of this monster is Gorey Remains of Enhanced Aggression.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Macabre Remnant Dendrites] When this card is Summoned: You can look at your opponent's hand, if they have any Level 3 or lower monsters send them to their Graveyard and inflict 100 damage to your opponent's Life Points for each card discarded. During the End Phase of the turn this monster was Summoned, you can Tribute this card to Special Summon 1 "Macabre Remnant Glia" from your Deck. Dendrites are branched parts of a neuron in the brain that spread stimulations to other neurons inside the brain. It's final effect allows it to be upgraded, the electrochemical stimulations this monster spread gave support and protection to the other neural cells to create a new monster. The true name of this monster is Gorey Remains of Electrical Impulses.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Macabre Remnant Glia] Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Macabre Remnant Dendrites" and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. When this card is Summoned this way: Both players show their hands and if either player has Level 5 or higher monsters discard them and inflict 300 damage to the respective players Life Points for each card discarded. Glia or neuroglia are non-neural cells that produce support and protection for other neurons and help to destroy diseases and dead neural cells. This new form to Dendrites is one key to a strong mindset. The true name of this monster is Gorey Remains of Defensive Stratagems.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Macabre Remnant Catharsis] When this monster is Summoned: You can look at your opponent's hand, if they have any Level 4 or lower monsters banish them and inflict 400 damage to your opponent's Life Points for each card banished. Gain Life Points equal to the damage inflicted to your opponent and Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Macabre Remnant" monster from your Deck. It cannot attack this turn. Catharsis is one of the main monsters of this archetype that purges emotions and helps relieve emotional tension of the brain from a tragic moment in ones life. This card can help do a lot of damage to your opponent especially against decks relying on Level 1-4 monsters. The true name of this monster is Gorey Remains of Tragedies Purged.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Macabre Remnant Personality] When this card is Summoned: You can look at your opponent's hand, if they have any Trap Cards return them to the top of their Deck and inflict 200 damage to their Life Points for each card sent to the Deck. If this effect resolves draw 2 cards from your Deck. The Personality is a great aspect of the human mind, it makes us who we are and helps the brain notify the body on how to act. This specific representation consults multiple personality disorders and helps eradicate the traps found throughout ones life. The true name of this monster is Gorey Remains of Multiplied Personas.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Macabre Remnant Ego] 2 Level 4 "Macabre Remnant" monsters When this card is Xyz Summoned both players draw cards until they have 6 in their hand. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to look at your opponent's hand, if they have any Level 5 or higher monsters banish them and inflict 200 damage to their Life Points for each card banished. Gain Life Points equal to the damage inflicted to your opponent. The Ego. The part of the brain that gives us perception for the world around us, the mind can make this a dangerous concept though as the human psyche can create too big of an ego making us judgmental, intolerant, overly defensive, and out of control so it is best to keep your ego in check. The true name of this monster is Gorey Remains of Egotistical Actions.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Macabre Remnant Necrophobia] 2 Level 6 "Macabre Remnant" monsters When this card is Xyz Summoned: You can Special Summon 2 Level 3 "Macabre Remnant" monsters from your Graveyard. They cannot attack and their effects are negated. Once per turn during your End Phase: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to look at your opponent's hand, if they have any Level 6 or higher monsters banish 1 monster summoned by this card and inflict 1000 damage to your opponent, if they have any Spell Cards discard them and inflict 500 damage to their Life Points for each card discarded. Lastly we have Necrophobia, the king of this archetype. Necrophobia is the fear of death and dead things which is why it is represented as a powerful demon, seen by some as Death himself. This monster fully represents fear as a whole and can conjure up many and all phobias of the human mind. Death is not a force to be reckoned with. The true name of this monster is Gorey Remains of the Fear of Death, King Necros.[/spoiler] I'm not sure why this spoiler code isn't working for this description, I put in the right coding but it keeps doing this even when I retype it. Anyways! There we have it the Macabre Remnant archetype as of right now. I'm likely going to add either a few more monsters or add Spells and Traps. Let me know what you think of this archetype and maybe how I can fix that error with the last spoiler tag there. Thank you in advance for your critiques, and let me know if I need to fix anything with these cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Excalibur the Divine Posted June 11, 2014 Report Share Posted June 11, 2014 You have a few grammar errors. They should be easy to spot so look for them. For example for the last card you forgot the colon after once per turn. Overall nice archetype. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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