98rbake Posted June 11, 2014 Report Share Posted June 11, 2014 If this card battles a monster with a rank; send that monster to the graveyard (without damage calculation). During your opponent's turn, if this card battles a monster with a level and is sent to the graveyard: Target that monster; banish this card from the graveyard and return the target to the hand. *Changed to* If this card Battles an Xyz Monster with a Rank lower than this card's Level: send that monster to the Graveyard (without applying damage calculation.) If this card battles a monster with a level and is sent to the Graveyard: target that monster; banish this card in your Graveyard (permanently) and banish the target until your next End Phase. I feel the first effect is more balanced with the Rank/Level comparison and it can be enhanced with cards that raise levels (i.e. Noisy Gnat). I also changed the "return to hand" effect to "Banish till your next End Phase" to make the monster removal only temporary but still allowing for some advantage. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YakimuraTheWarlord Posted June 13, 2014 Report Share Posted June 13, 2014 This card is slightly overpowered, even if it is just considering Xyz Monsters. Still, it would be wise to make it 'A rank of 4 or lower.' You might also want to make it so it's 'If this monster battles an opponent with a level of *Insert Level, at most 8* or lower during your opponent's turn and is sent to the Graveyard; target that monster; banish this monster from the Graveyard and return the target to the hand. If this card battles a monster with a rank; send that monster to the graveyard (without damage calculation). During your opponent's turn, if this card battles a monster with a level and is sent to the graveyard: Target that monster; banish this card from the graveyard and return the target to the hand. If this card Battles an Xyz Monster: send that monster to the Graveyard (without applying damage calculation.) If this card battles a monster with a level an sent to the Graveyard; target that monster; banish this card from the Graveyard and return the target to the owner's hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
98rbake Posted June 23, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2014 Thanks for the input! I really appreciate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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