barsam Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 The "c" after Trap and Spell needs to be capitalizedmeh...2.98/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
barsam Posted March 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 Thx CrazyKev^__^! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 OCG needs improvement... 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ikatsui Karite Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 like tectonix said they need impreovement epecially the name "The Ra" doesnt sound right it should be "Ra, Lord of the Dessert".but still good idea i give it 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PokeLen Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 I like it. 8/10. Small OCG errors, good effect, not too overpowered, nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 HEY! I used that image! But okay. Pretty nice card, although i don´t like effect. 7/10 for that reason. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
barsam Posted March 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 Thanks Guys^__^! I will try to make my OCG better next time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 Effect actually seems underpowered to me. After all, to summon him you need to give up three monsters of a particular attribute (and WIND is one of the least supported attributes), and even then its effect does nothing unless a WIND or FIRE monster is destroyed. And his effect isn't exactly game-breaking. I don't like the name, though; as some people said earlier, "Ra, Lord of the Desert" would sound better than "The Ra, The Lord of the Desert" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rt264 Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 I dont think that the holo effect looks very good...I like the effect thought. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
barsam Posted March 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 Thanks RT264 ^__^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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