L33t Jenkins Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 [IMG]http://i31.tinypic.com/2118is1.jpg[/IMG] http://nem-rac.deviantart.com/ the set contians mini card sets. instead of one solid set so i can so a range of my card making skills. [IMG]http://i25.tinypic.com/34o6k38.jpg[/IMG] http://soys.deviantart.com/ [IMG]http://i32.tinypic.com/2vinhfk.jpg[/IMG] artist sames as the eye card [IMG]http://i26.tinypic.com/2cgkej5.jpg[/IMG] http://22zddr.deviantart.com/ here is 1 of the fusion material monsters [IMG]http://i25.tinypic.com/161dk61.jpg[/IMG] same as eyes [IMG]http://i31.tinypic.com/2uj5nar.jpg[/IMG] http://njoo.deviantart.com/ [IMG]http://i29.tinypic.com/2sbvjmx.jpg[/IMG] same as eye [IMG]http://i31.tinypic.com/famqu9.jpg[/IMG] same as eye [IMG]http://i29.tinypic.com/11awyuu.jpg[/IMG] This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell "Tomb of the Shdowing Light Lord". When this monster destroys another monster as a rsult of battle you can activate 1 of the following effects: *Remove 1 monster with "Shadowing Light" in it's name in your Graveyard from play to inflict 300 points of damage to your opponent. *Discard 1 DARK monster from your hand and select 1 LIGHT monster on the field. The selected monster cannot attack directly as long as this card remains face-up on the field. *Select 1 monster on the field that Level is 4 or lower with "Shadowing Light" in it's name. The selected monster can attack directly this turn. SAME AS EYE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen Moon Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 Nice cards you can see the artists sig in the second though cant wait to see the rest. 8/10you sis Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L33t Jenkins Posted March 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 any other comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 I don't like the first picture2.87/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L33t Jenkins Posted March 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 2 new cards added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Deucalion Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 1st Card Spelling: 10 / 10%Grammar: 20 / 20%Picture: 14 / 15%Power (over/under): 10 / 10%Originality: 7 / 15%Realisticness: 20 / 20%Name: 6 / 10% 87%. Slight improvements could be made to the name, the picture could be touched up somewhat, and a slightly more original design. Card 2 Spelling: 10 / 10%Grammar: 15 / 20%Picture: 2 / 15%Power (over/under): 8 / 10%Originality: 15 / 15%Realisticness: 19 / 20%Name: 6 / 10% 75%. A few Grammar points could be improved, the picture doesn't fit with the Yu-Gi-Oh artstyle, and still has the artists signature, it is a little underpowered, and the name doesn't really fit with the card description. I'll rate the rest later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
barsam Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 The Light Angel needs a background,I like your cards though ^__^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L33t Jenkins Posted March 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 new card added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Parting Shot Posted March 24, 2008 Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 Pretty good cards. A few minor errors with the pics, like the artist's sig, but otherwise good. I also don't think the name of the eye card fits the effect, but it is a cool pic. overall - 12.58/13.69 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SOUL Posted March 24, 2008 Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 Awesome Cards! 9/10Really good! Great Pictures! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L33t Jenkins Posted March 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 27, 2008 new card added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Queen Moon Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 i like darkness corspe and razor claw dinosaur. but im not so sure about dark faith Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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schyshter Posted March 30, 2008 Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 Azurious okay, i guess. but u cant reborn this card; youll just wast a ss cuz it kills itself at the end of the turn. mebe if u made it so its destroyed during your next standby phase? think dat wud be betta. it would make an EXCELLENT combo wit THE CREATOR and CARD OF SAFE RETURN. 5/10 Eye of the Demon dont know why u chose dis name. anyways, i think the effect is broken. it shud go something more like this: "This card can only be activated by paying 1000 Life Points. Your opponent then adds this card to their Deck, then shuffles the Deck. When you draw this card or add it from your Deck to your hand by a card effect, if it was added to your Deck by its own effect, you cannot activate it. You must then select 1 card from your Deck and 1 card from your hand and send them both to your Graveyard. This card is then removed from play." there are already other card with effects that make yer opp discard from the hand or deck, with a lower or no cost. so, i give it... 4/10 Silent White OWl 2/10 Dark Faith WAY too powerful. i mean, when its fusion summoned, it already has 6500 ATK! for only 2 fusion materials! its last effect is also weak. water it down a bit. 3/10 Darkness Corpse now this card is CRAZY-COOL! u can activate a TRAP from your hand! would become forbidden (or AT LEAST semi-limited) real quick tho; easy to ss (look at the cards from ZOMBIE MADNESS). mebe its too powerful, dunno. 7/10 RC Dino awesome! shud be at least ULTRA RARE, tho. too good fro a common. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L33t Jenkins Posted March 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 Azurious okay' date=' i guess. but u cant reborn this card; youll just wast a ss cuz it kills itself at the end of the turn. mebe if u made it so its destroyed during your next standby phase? think dat wud be betta. it would make an EXCELLENT combo wit THE CREATOR and CARD OF SAFE RETURN. 5/10 Eye of the Demon dont know why u chose dis name. anyways, i think the effect is broken. it shud go something more like this: "This card can only be activated by paying 1000 Life Points. Your opponent then adds this card to their Deck, then shuffles the Deck. When you draw this card or add it from your Deck to your hand by a card effect, if it was added to your Deck by its own effect, you cannot activate it. You must then select 1 card from your Deck and 1 card from your hand and send them both to your Graveyard. This card is then removed from play." there are already other card with effects that make yer opp discard from the hand or deck, with a lower or no cost. so, i give it... 4/10 Silent White OWl 2/10 Dark Faith WAY too powerful. i mean, when its fusion summoned, it already has 6500 ATK! for only 2 fusion materials! its last effect is also weak. water it down a bit. 3/10 Darkness Corpse now this card is CRAZY-COOL! u can activate a TRAP from your hand! would become forbidden (or AT LEAST semi-limited) real quick tho; easy to ss (look at the cards from ZOMBIE MADNESS). mebe its too powerful, dunno. 7/10 RC Dino awesome! shud be at least ULTRA RARE, tho. too good fro a common. 8/10[/quote'] dark faith has 3500 atk and the increasing atk effect will make it a semi limited. rc dino is suppose to be a super rare but for some reason the shiny streaks wont appear. white owl and the angel are supposed to be monsters that work in a combo with another card coimng soon. any other comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Khalleb Posted March 31, 2008 Report Share Posted March 31, 2008 Nice cards, OCG errors though. Some pics very un-yugiohish.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L33t Jenkins Posted March 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 31, 2008 Main card added :). ritual coming soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chaosruler7 Posted March 31, 2008 Report Share Posted March 31, 2008 your "darken corpse" has some grammar problems you might want to fix. your "angel of faith" should remove the card from play for 3 turns not to the graveyard. and your "Anubis" has very minor grammar problems on the third effect. other than that your cards look great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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