Cat O' Nine Tails Posted June 24, 2014 Report Share Posted June 24, 2014 Here is the link to the card http://www.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=The+Paladin+of+the+Magician&cardtype=Monster&subtype=effect&attribute=Light&level=4&rarity=Rare&picture=http%3A%2F%2Fimages.yugiohcardmaker.net%2F510105%2F154967412.jpg&circulation=&set1=Iono&set2=27845&inset=on&type=Warrior&carddescription=This+Card+gains+100+DEF+for+Every+%22Of+the+Magician%22+card+in+play.+If+this+card+is+in+face+up+Attack+position%2C+your+oppenet+cannot+select+another+card+as+an+attack+target.&atk=0&def=2300&creator=Cat+O%27+Nine+Tails&year=2014&serial=50763846 Light. Level 4 Warrior effect 0 Atk/2300 Def This Card gains 100 DEF for Every "Of the Magician" card in play. If this card is in face up Attack position, your oppenet cannot select another card as an attack target. Dont be afraid to chew me out If there is something Wrong, and please Feel Free and leave comments! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magemeek22 Posted June 24, 2014 Report Share Posted June 24, 2014 Hey! It's nice to see someone taking an interest in making a full-blown archetype, so kudos on that! However, one thing: When posting cards, don't post links to the images separately. Instead, use the little url below your card that shows up on the Card Maker. It looks something like: "[img.../img]" Also, since you're making an archetype, I recommend you wait until you're finished and then post the entire thing in the multiple cards section here: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/forum/18-realistic-cards-multiple-cards/ This way, you don't post single cards repeatedly. Also, you're bound to get better reviews if you post your cards together, since people will see how the archetype works. Right now, I see a card meant to support an archetype, but I know nothing of this archetype in the first place. If you post your cards together, then it becomes easier to review! A little bit on your actual card: It's nice and simple. The 2300 DEF is fine, and then the force-your-opponent-to-attack-this-card effect completes the whole defensive feel of the card. I would also make it so your opponent also has to target this card with card effects if its in face-up attack position; that way, it really gets the message across that this is your defensive wall, and your opponent has to get rid of it; in addition, your other cards get added protection. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cat O' Nine Tails Posted June 24, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2014 Ok! Thank You! I will keep that in mind! only problem is, it usually says the file is to big to attach to I use a link instead. And, I will try to post them all together once I am done with them, but I post them singularly to have people help fix them, that way they are better and more likely to be workable with the game! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magemeek22 Posted June 24, 2014 Report Share Posted June 24, 2014 Hmmm... I'm not tech savvy enough to help with the link stuff. That said, I really think you shouldn't post cards singularly like you have been, because it essentially becomes spam. You'll get better reviews if you just hold off until you finish! Also, this section is technically for realistic single cards, which none of your cards are alone - they work together, so its logical to just post them together. (I really don't want to sound rude or anything, but I just want you to know :3 ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cat O' Nine Tails Posted June 24, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2014 Oh its no problem at all bro, I don't care if you sound harsh or rude, as long as it is the truth :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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