Pleiades Posted June 27, 2014 Report Share Posted June 27, 2014 Hello, this is my first post in this forum, please correct me if I make any mistakes as I wish to improve my experience here.-Introduction- The "Frozen Fury" is an archetype based on banishing your cards to activate unique effects (to keep this concept from being too powerful, they must be banished by "Frozen Fury" card effects). They are all WATER monsters and are capable of Xyz Summons as well as Synchro Summons. So, without further ado, here are the cards.-The Cards- [spoiler=Monsters]Frozen Fury Ice Berserker ****/WATER/Beast-Warrior/1800/1200 When this card is Special Summoned by the effect of a "Frozen Fury" card: You can target 1 card in either player's Graveyard; banish that target. You can only use this effect of "Frozen Fury Ice Berserker" once per turn. If this card is banished by the effect of a "Frozen Fury" card: You can target 1 face-up monster on the field; destroy that target.Frozen Fury Ice Sorcerer ****/WATER/Spellcaster/1600/1400 Once per turn: You can send 1 "Frozen Fury" card from your Deck to the Graveyard; Special Summon 1 "Frozen Fury Ice" monster from your hand, except "Frozen Fury Ice Sorcerer". If this card is banished by the effect of a "Frozen Fury" card: You can target 1 Spell/Trap Card on the field; destroy that target.Frozen Fury Ice Wyvern ****/WATER/Dragon/1900/1100 Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. You can Special Summon this card (from your hand), then banish 1 "Frozen Fury" card in your Graveyard, except "Frozen Fury Ice Wyvern". If this card is banished by the effect of a "Frozen Fury" card: You can target 1 of your banished "Frozen Fury Ice" monsters; Special Summon that target in face-up Defense Position. You can only use 1 "Frozen Fury Ice Wyvern" effect per turn, and only once that turn.Frozen Fury Ice Priestess ****/WATER/Aqua/1400/1600 When this card is Special Summoned by the effect of a "Frozen Fury" card: You can add 1"Frozen Fury" Spell/Trap Card from your Deck to your hand. If this card is banished by the effect of a "Frozen Fury" card: You can add 1 "Frozen Fury Ice" monster from your Deck to your hand. You can only use this effect of "Frozen Fury Ice Priestess" once per turn.Frozen Fury Ice Lycaon ***/WATER/Beast/Tuner/1500/0500 Cannot be banished from the Deck. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent by a direct attack: Discard 1 card from your opponent's hand. If this card is banished by the effect of a "Frozen Fury" card: You can Special Summon this card in face-up Defense Position. During your End Phase, tribute this card. You can only use this effect of "Frozen Fury Ice Lycaon" once per turn.Frozen Fury Ice Golem ****/WATER/Rock/1100/1900 You can target 1 "Frozen Fury Ice" monster in your Graveyard; Special Summon that target in face-up Defense Position. If you activate this effect, monsters you control other than "Frozen Fury" monsters cannot attack for the rest of this turn. If this card is banished by the effect of a "Frozen Fury" card: You can target 1 of your other banished "Frozen Fury" cards; add that target to your hand. You can only use 1 "Frozen Fury Ice Golem" effect per turn, and only once that turn.Frozen Fury Blizzard Daemon *******/WATER/Fiend/2700/2300 Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. Must first be Special Summoned (from your hand) by sending 4 banished "Frozen Fury" monsters with different names to your Graveyard. Cannot be destroyed by card effects. You cannot banish cards, except by this card's effect. During your Standby Phase: Banish 1 "Frozen Fury" card from your Graveyard or banish this card. You can only control 1 "Frozen Fury Blizzard Daemon".[/spoiler] [spoiler=Spells]Winter Storm of Frozen Fury Spell/Quick-Play Target 1 "Frozen Fury" monster you control; banish that target, then Special Summon 1 of your banished "Frozen Fury" monsters with a different name. If this card is banished by the effect of a "Frozen Fury" card: All face-up "Frozen Fury" cards you currently control cannot be targeted by monster effects this turn. You can only activate "Winter Storm of Frozen Fury" once per turn.Snow Castle of Frozen Fury Spell/Field Once per turn: You can target up to 2 of your banished "Frozen Fury Ice" monsters; send those targets to the Graveyard, then draw 1 card. If this card is banished by the effect of a "Frozen Fury" card: You can send 1 "Frozen Fury" card from your Deck to the Graveyard.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Traps]Ice Avalanche of Frozen Fury Trap/Normal You can choose a number from 1 to 3, then reveal that many cards from the top of your Deck, banish any revealed "Frozen Fury" cards, also send the other cards to the Graveyard, then draw 1 card. If this card is banished by the effect of a "Frozen Fury Blizzard" card: You can target up to 3 of your banished "Frozen Fury Ice" monsters; shuffle those targets into the Deck, then draw 1 card. You can only activate 1 "Ice Avalanche of Frozen Fury" effect per turn, and only once that turn.Ice Battleground of Frozen Fury FZFY-010 Trap/Continuous All "Frozen Fury Ice" monsters you control gain 800 ATK. If this card is banished by the effect of a "Frozen Fury" card: You can shuffle 1 "Frozen Fury" card from your hand into the Deck; add 1 "Frozen Fury" card from your Deck to your hand. You can only control 1 "Ice Battleground of Frozen Fury".[/spoiler] [spoiler=Xyz Monsters]Frozen Fury Blizzard Knight ****/WATER/Warrior/Xyz/2500/1500 2 Level 4 "Frozen Fury" monsters Once per turn, during either player's turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card, and if you do, send 1 "Frozen Fury" card from your Deck to the Graveyard; all face-up "Frozen Fury" cards you currently control are unaffected by Spell/Trap effects this turn.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Synchro Monsters]Frozen Fury Blizzard King *******/WATER/Beast-Warrior/Synchro/2800/2200 1 "Frozen Fury" Tuner + 1 or more WATER monsters Once per turn: You can target 1 card on the field; destroy that target, then banish 1 "Frozen Fury" card from your Graveyard. You can only control 1 "Frozen Fury Blizzard King".[/spoiler] -End Note- Thank you for viewing my topic. I would appreciate your input; so, if you have any suggestions, fixes, ratings, and/or whatever else, please leave a comment below. Thanks again! 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Vakana-chan Posted June 27, 2014 Report Share Posted June 27, 2014 I like the idea of this archtype: cards that banish themselves. You made the cards well, however there are some things I'd like to mention (just in case): The effect of the monster that is banished for the special summon of Wyvern will not trigger, because it is not banished by the effect of a "frozen fury", but by an activition cost. If you want to fix that, you can write something like "You can banish 1 'Frozen Fury' monster from your graveyard and Special Summon this card from your hand". Priest's effect will activate even if it's special summoned by call of the haunted, pinpoint guard, etc. Nothing wrong with that, just making sure you meant it to be this way. Golem is kind of overpowered. It lets you revive any "frozen fury" from your graveyard, without negating its effect, and then you can banish any "frozen fury" from your deck, triggering their effect. And all of this for no cost at all. I suggest adding a cost like discarding a card or a limitation like Stellarknight Altair's effect, that prevents monsters that are not from the archtype from attacking that turn. Blizzard Daemon has the same problem as Wyvern, his special summoning will not trigger the banished monsters' effects (though it might be better this way because he is really strong on his own). Aside from that, I think you made a great job with these cards, not to mention you came up with a unique playing style. Keep up the good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pleiades Posted June 27, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2014 I like the idea of this archtype: cards that banish themselves. You made the cards well, however there are some things I'd like to mention (just in case):The effect of the monster that is banished for the special summon of Wyvern will not trigger, because it is not banished by the effect of a "frozen fury", but by an activition cost. If you want to fix that, you can write something like "You can banish 1 'Frozen Fury' monster from your graveyard and Special Summon this card from your hand".Priest's effect will activate even if it's special summoned by call of the haunted, pinpoint guard, etc. Nothing wrong with that, just making sure you meant it to be this way.Golem is kind of overpowered. It lets you revive any "frozen fury" from your graveyard, without negating its effect, and then you can banish any "frozen fury" from your deck, triggering their effect. And all of this for no cost at all. I suggest adding a cost like discarding a card or a limitation like Stellarknight Altair's effect, that prevents monsters that are not from the archtype from attacking that turn.Blizzard Daemon has the same problem as Wyvern, his special summoning will not trigger the banished monsters' effects (though it might be better this way because he is really strong on his own).Aside from that, I think you made a great job with these cards, not to mention you came up with a unique playing style. Keep up the good work!Thank you for your kind words. Every one of your suggestions are very helpful as the things you mentioned are issues I want to address. I gained some ideas from you on how to go about fixing my cards and thank you for that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vakana-chan Posted June 27, 2014 Report Share Posted June 27, 2014 My pleasure :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pleiades Posted July 2, 2014 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2014 Frozen Fury Update 1.1 -Added Ice Avalanche of Frozen Fury to Traps -Frozen Fury Ice Priest -> Frozen Fury Ice Priestess -Nerfed Frozen Fury Ice Golem -Nerfed Frozen Fury Ice Lycaon -Nerfed Frozen Fury Ice Priestess -Nerfed Frozen Fury Blizzard Daemon -Improved Card Syntax -Improved Card PSCT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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