Dies Irae Deck - The last NAZI Legion

[huuthien2911]

Just finish Dies Irae last night. It was great, awesome, best..... game ever (May be lolz)

It's the story about a Normal(?) high school boy have a fight with the last NAZI legion called LDO (Longinus Dreizehn Orden) who have 13 Knight of Black Round table and try to sarifice all people in that city for a ritual to resurrect their General - Reinhard Tristan Eugen Heydrich.

I have tried to make the most realistic card as possible but still not sure if they are broken or not, so please give your comment if you found anything wrong in card text or concept.

 

[spoiler='Lieutenant rank']

 

This card cannot be destroyed by card effect. As long as this card remains in face-up Defend Position, it cannot be destroyed by battle. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card, then target 1 Level 4 or lower "Black Roundtable Knight" monster, Special Summon that target. If this card in Attack Position, you can target 1 face-up monster on the field, destroy that monster. This effect can only be used once per Duel.

 

Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. You can send 2 DARK monsters from your hand to the Graveyard to Special Summon this card from your hand. If this card is Special Summon this way, it can attack up to 3 times per turn but cannot attack your opponent directly.

 

Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. If you control 2 or more "Black Roundtable Knight" monsters with different name, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. If your control a "Black Roundtable Knight" Xyz monster, you can attach this face-up card to that monster as Xyz Material. The Xyz Monster has this card as Xyz Material gain 800 ATK during damage caculation only.

 

When this card is Normal Summoned, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Black Roundtable Knight" monster from your hand in face-up Defend Position. If this card attacks, it gains 300 ATK during damage caculation only.

 

Cannot be Special Summoned from the Graveyard. You can discard this card from your hand to Graveyard to add 1 "Swastika" Field Spell Card from you Deck to your hand. If this card is Summoned while you control a "Swastika" Field Spell Card, you can destroy it, then add 1 "Black Roundtable" Spell/Trap Card to your hand. You can only use 1 "Black Roundtable Knight #6 - Zonnenkind" effect per turn, and only once that turn.

 

 

This card cannot be destroyed by card effect. During your Main Phase 1, you can target 1 face-up monster your opponent control: as long as this card remains face-up on the field, that monster cannot attack or activate its effect. If this card is sent to your Graveyard, you can add 1 "Black Roundtable Knight" monster from your Deck to your hand.

 

 

Once per turn, you can target 1 face-up monster your opponent control, switch control of that monster and this card until the End Phase. That monster cannot attack or be used as Synchro Material.

 

If you control a "Black Roundtable Knight" monster, your opponent cannot select this card as attack target. You can target 1 Xyz Monster you control and 1 monster in your Graveyard with the same Attribute, attach the second target to the first target as Xyz Material. You can only use 1 "Black Roundtable Knight #11 - Babylon Magdalena" effect per turn.

 

 

 

 

3 Level 4 "Black Roundtable Knight" monsters
This card cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card battles with a monster your opponent control, at the end of Damage Step, place 1 "Cursed Counter" on that monster. The monster with "Cursed Counter" cannot activate its effect and loss 500 ATK during each Standby Phase. During the End Phase, detach 1 Xyz Material from this card. If this card has no Xyz Material, destroy it.

 

 

2 Level 5 "Black Roundtable Knight" monsters
You can also Xyz Summon this card by using 1 "Black Roundtable Knight #2 - Tubal Cain the Third" as Xyz Material (Xyz Material of that monster also become Xyz Material ofthis card) This card cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card destroys a monster your opponent control by battle, inflict damage equal to its ATK to your opponent's Life Point. At the end of either player Battle Phase, detach 1 Xyz Material from this card. If this card has no Xyz Material, it cannot attack and you take 2000 damage during each of your Standby Phase.

 

 

2 Level 4 "Black Roundtable Knight" monsters
This card cannot be destroyed by battle. During either player's Battle Phase, when your opponent activates a card effect at the start of Damage Step, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to negate that activation and destroy that card. You can only use this effect once per turn. If this card has no Xyz Material, it cannot attack.

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[Spoiler='Commander Rank']

.Must first be Special Summoned from the Extra Deck by effect of "Swastika". This card cannot be targeted by card effect. When this card attacks a monster your opponent control: at the end of Damage Step, negate that monster's effect and if you do, destroy it. During your Main Phase, if your control a "Black Roundtable Knight #1 - Mephisto Pheles" monster: you can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard. You can only use this effect once per turn. You can only control 1 "Black Roundtable Knight #7 - Deus ex Machina".

 

 

Must first be Special Summoned from the Extra Deck by effect of "Swastika". When this card destroy a monster your opponent control by battle, destroy all face-up Attack Position monsters your opponent control. During your Main Phase, if your control a "Black Roundtable Knight #1 - Mephisto Pheles" monster: you can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard. You can only use this effect once per turn. You can only control 1 "Black Roundtable Knight #9 - Samiel Zentaur".

 

 

Must first be Special Summoned from the Extra Deck by effect of "Swastika". This card cannot be selected as attack target. During either player's turn, when a monster declare attack: you can send this card to Graveyard to negate that attack and return that monster to the owner's hand. During your Main Phase, if your control a "Black Roundtable Knight #1 - Mephisto Pheles" monster: you can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard. You can only use this effect once per turn. You can only control 1 "Black Roundtable Knight #12 - Schreiber".

 

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[Spoiler='General Rank']

 

Must first be Special Summoned from the Extra Deck by effect of "Swastika". Once per turn, you can target 1 Level 8 or lower "Black Roundtable Knight" monster in your Graveyard: this card gain that monster's effect and its ATK and DEF become that monster's original ATK until the end of next turn. If this card on the field would be destroyed: you can destroy another "Black Roundtable Knight" monster you control or from your hand instead. You can only control 1 "Black Roundtable Knight #1 - Mephisto Pheles"

 

 

1 or more Tuner + "Black Roundtable Knight #1 - Mephisto Pheles" monster
Must be Synchro Summoned while you control a "Swastika" Field Spell Card with 8 or more "Swastika Counter" and cannot be Special Summoned by other way. When this card is Special Summoned, other card effect cannot be activated. Once per turn, you can target up to 3 Level 8 or lower "Black Roundtable Knight" Monster(s) in your Graveyard, this card gain those monsters's effect until the end of next turn. You can only control 1 "Reinhard Tristan Eugen Heydrich"

 

Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned while your Life Point is 1000 or lower and you have no card on the field and cannot be Special Summoned by other way. When this card is Summoned, banish it and shuffle all cards in both player's hand, field and Graveyard to Deck; then both player's Life Point become 8000. The activation and effect of this card cannot be negated.

 

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[spoiler='Resistance Group']

 

 

3 Level 6 DARK Monsters
This card cannot be destroy by battle with Effect Monster. This card is unaffected by effect of Monster whose have original Level or Rank lower than this card's Rank. Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: negate effect of all face-up card your opponent controll until the end of this turn.

 

 

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters
When this card is Synchro Summoned: negate all other card effect currently on the field; also, neither player can activate card effect until the End Phase. Once per turn, when a "Black Roundtable Knight" monster(s) you control is destroyed (either by battle or by card effect): draw 1 card.

 

2 Level 6 "Black Roundtable Knight" Monsters
You can also Xyz Summon this card by using 1 "Black Roundtable Knight" Xyz Monster you control (Xyz Material of that monster also become Xyz Material of this card). This card can attack all monster your opponent control once each. Special Summoned Monster cannot activated its effect in the same turn it was Summoned.

 

The effect of this card cannot be negated. While this card remains face-up on the field, any card that would be banished will be shuffled to the owner's Deck instead. When this card is destroyed by battle: you can Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower Tuner monster from your Deck, its effect is negated.

 

 

"Black Roundtable Knight #13 - Zarathustra" + "Black Roundtable Maiden" + 1 or more "Black roundtable Knight" Monster(s)
Must be Fusion Summoned. The original ATK and DEF of this card equal to the number of Fusion Materials used for its Fusion Summon x 1000. Once per turn, you can activate this effect: Negate all other card effect currently on the field; and if you do, banish 1 Level 8 or lower "Black Roundtable Knight" monster from either player's Graveyard, this card gain that monster's effect until the end of this turn. This card must be face-up on the field to activate and resolve this effect.
 

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[spoiler='Spell/Trap Card']

 

 

Each time a "Black Roundtable Knight" monster(s) you control is destroyed, place 1 "Swastika Counter" on this card. If this card would be destroyed, you can remove 2 "Swastika Counter" from it instead. During your Main Phase: You can activate each of these effects up to once per turn, depending on the total number of "Swastika Counter" on this card:
●2 or more: Sent 1 "Black Roundtable" card from your Deck to the Graveyard
●4 or more: Special Summon 1 "Black Roundtable Knight #9 - Samiel Zentaur" monster from your Extra Deck
●5 or more: Special Summon 1 "Black Roundtable Knight #7 - Dues ex Machina" monster from your Extra Deck
●6 or more: Special Summon 1 "Black Roundtable Knight #12 - Schreiber" monster from your Extra Deck
●7 or more: Special Summon 1 "Black Roundtable Knight #1 - Mephisto Pheles" momster from your Extra Deck

 

 

"Black Roundtable Knight" monster you control gain 500 ATK. Once per turn, during your turn, if you control a "Black Roundtable Knight #1 - Mephisto Pheles" monster, you can Special Summon as many as possible "Black Roundtable Knight" monster from your Graveyard. You cannot conduct your Battle Phase during the turn you activate this effect. During the End Phase, banish all monster that Special Summoned by this effect.

 

 

Each time a "Black Roundtable Knight" monster(s) is destroyed (either by battle or by card effect), place 1 "Swastika Counter" on this card (max. 3) You can send this card to Graveyard to place "Swastika Counter" on a "Swastika" Field Spell Card you control, equal to the number of "Swastika Counter" on this card.

 

 

If you control a "Black Roundtable Knight" monster, you can destroy all monsters you control, then Special Summon 1 Level 8 "Black Roundtable Knight" monster from your Extra Deck (this is treated as Special Summon by effect of "Swastika") During the End Phase, send that monster to the Graveyard and take damage equal to half of that monster's original ATK.

 

 

When a "Black Roundtable Knight" monster(s) on the field is destroyed, you can target and destroy 1 Spell/Trap Card on the field, then you can destroy 1 "Black Roundtable Knight" monster in your hand.

 

 

When your opponent Special Summon a Monster(s) from Extra Deck: destroy that Monster(s), and if you do, you can Special Summon 1 Level 5 "Black Roundtable Knight" Monster from your Deck in face-up Defend Position.

 

Activate only when your opponent activates a card effect that would destroy all Monsters and/or all Spell/Trap Card on the field. Inflict 500 damage to your opponent's Life Point for each card would be destroyed by that effect.

 

Activate only when your opponent would Special Summon a monster(s) while you control a face-up "Black Roundtable Knight" monster(s). Negate that Special Summon and return all monster you control to your hand. During the turn you activate this effect, any Battle Damage you take is halved.

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Incomplete. I will update more card (if I can :razz: )

[tornami ice]

Wow, the effects are great and pics are excellent. 8/10 Good job! Your OCG is fine, the only issue I find is that you are not using colons or semicolons. The new OCG looks something like this "Once per turn: You can target 1 card on the field; destroy it." or "When your opponent activates a Spell Card: Discard 1 card; negate the activation, and if you do, destroy it." I had trouble transitioning to the new OCG as well but I think there's a helpful post in the Realistic Cards Section.

[huuthien2911]

Thank you for very helpful reply, I will try to fix it right away.