Squirrel Girl Posted July 1, 2014 Report Share Posted July 1, 2014 I want to begin and say I have been out of cardmaking for a while so there will be some errors in the OCG (text in the cards) and some of them may or may not be OP so I would appreciate some help in correcting these so they become as good as they can be. Although, I will not accept any bad languages or insults about them. If you have nothing nice to say, dont say it. [spoiler=Credits and More] [spoiler=Credit] Image credit: Jazin Kay's Photobucket Archive [/spoiler] [spoiler=The More] Well, the name of the cards comes from a story I'm writing (who is not nearly finished since I have only written 18 pages). So there are the backstory. Will maybe post a summary of the story to explain the name. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Cards] [spoiler=Ace Card] "Afterworld - Bride of the Empress" + "Afterworld Empress"This cards Summon cannot be negated. This card is unnafected by card effects. This card cannot be destroyed by battle and you take no damage from battles involving this card. You can skip your Battle Phase to destroy 2 monsters your opponent controls. When an "Afterworld" monster is destroyed: Pay 500 Life Points; add the destroyed monster to your hand. When this card attacks: Inflict 1000 damage to your opponent. You can switch 1 monster you control from Attack Position to Defense Position. All "Afterworld" monsters you control cannot be destroyed by card effects. If this is the only card on your field and in your hand during your Draw Phase: Draw 1 extra card. If it was an "Afterworld" monster: Special Summon it. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Afterworld] This card cannot be tageted by card effect and other Field Spell Cards cannot be activated. All face-up "Afterworld" monsters gain 1000 ATK and DEF. When a "Afterworld" monster is destroyed, inflict 500 damage to your opponent. Once per turn, During your Draw Phase: Instead of drawing; add 1 Level 4 or lower "Afterworld" monster to your hand. If you do, both players takes damage equal to the monsters Level x 200. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Monster Cards] Once per turn, If this card is face-up on your Field: Inflict 800 damage to your opponent. When this card is destroyed: Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Afterworld" monster from your Deck; inflict damage to your opponent equal to the Level of the summoned monster x 200. This card can attack your opponent dorectly. If this card is the only monster you control: Add 1 "Afterworld" monster from your Graveyard to your hand. When this card is destroyed: Target 1 "Afterworld" monster on your side of the field; increase it's ATK by 1000. Target 1 monster your opponent controls: Once per turn; place 1 Afterworld Counter on the targeted monster (Max 3). When this card is destroyed:Remove all Afterworld Counters from the targeted monster; inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of Afterworld Counter removed x 300, then add 1 "Afterworld" monster with the same level as the number of Afterworld Counter removed. This card cannot be destroyed by card effects. When this card battles: increase this cards ATK equal to the number of "Afterworld" monsters in your Graveyard x 300. When this card is destroyed: both players take 800 damage. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Once per turn, if an "Afterworld" monster would be attacked: Switch this card to Defense Position and change the attack target to this card. When this card is destroyed: Pay 500 Life Points; add 1 "Afterworld" monster from your Graveyard to your Deck. This card gains ATK equal to the number of "Afterworld" monsters on the field x 600. When this card is Summoned: Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower "Afterworld" monster from your Graveyard in Defense Position. If "Afterworld Empress" is face-up on the field: This card cannot be destroyed by card effects. When there is another "Afterworld" monster on the field: This card can attack directly. When this card inflicts damage: Target 1 monster your opponent control; switch the target to Defense Position. When this card is destroyed: Draw 1 card. This card can attack twice each Battle Phase. When this card inflicts damage: Increase this cards ATK by 600; until the End Phase. If an "Afterworld" monster you control is destroyed during your turn: This card can attack once more. When this card destroys a monster in battle: Switch 1 monster your opponent control from Attack Position to Defense Position. This card inflicts piercing damage. This cards Summon cannot be negated. When this card is Summoned: Add 1 "Afterworld - Bride of the Empress" to your hand. If your opponent control 2 or more monsters and you control no monsters: Special Summon this card from your hand. As long as "Afterworld - Bride of the Empress" is on your field: This card is unaffected by card effects. This card cannot be destroyed by battle and you take no battle damage from battles with this card. When this card is selected as an attack target: Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Afterworld" monster from your hand. This card can attack your opponent directly. When this card attacks: Inflict 1000 damage to your opopnent. If this card was used as a Synchro Material monster for the Summon of "Afterworld Princess": Increase your Life Points by 1000. Once per turn, skip your Battle Phase to inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of "Afterworld" monsters you control x 400. When this card is destroyed: Pay 500 damage; take control of 1 monster your opponent's control. When that card is destroyed: Add this card to your hand. As long as this card is face-up on your Field: Other "Afterworld" monsters cannot be attacked or tageted by card effects. When this card is destroyed: End your opponent's battle phase; then your opponent takes 500 damage. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Spell Cards] Activate only if "Afterworld Empress" is in your Graveyard. Special Summon it from your Graveyard and add 1 "Afterworld - Bride of the Empress" from your Deck to your hand. You cannot Normal Summon the turn this card is activated. If this card would be destroyed before activating: Add "Afterworld Empress" to your hand. Target 1 monster your opponent control: Decrease it's ATK to 0. The targeted monster cannot be destroyed by battle. All "Afterworld" monster must declare an attack at the targeted monster. All battle damage dealth during this cards activation is halved. The targeted monster is destroyed during the End Phase. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Trap Cards] When an opponent attacks: Negate the attack; Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Afterworld" monster from your Deck. This cards activation cannot be negated. This card cannot be targeted by card effects. Once per turn, negate the attack of one monster your opponent controls and destroy it. This card is destroyed during your opponent's third turn after this cards activation. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Extra Deck] No cards made yet except for the card in the Ace section [/spoiler] [/spoiler] Hope you enjoyed it and feel free to express your thought's about these cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tojin Posted July 1, 2014 Report Share Posted July 1, 2014 These all look pretty nice, but there are a few errors that need correcting. For example, I'm pretty sure Guardian of Light's ATK should be 500, not 5000. Also, does Archer of Truth use Afterworld Counters or Queens Counters? Her effect mentions both. Other than those, these all look great, and I look forward to seeing more from you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted July 2, 2014 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2014 Added 5 more cards now and changed some errors in some of the existing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted October 26, 2014 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2014 Well, well, well, this is an old thread I made and I thought of continuing with these card, so BUMP this thread. Criticism always welcome as long as it is civilized. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Argeus Posted October 26, 2014 Report Share Posted October 26, 2014 Wow those card pics look cool Question: Why is guardian of light a Spellcaster? o_o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted October 27, 2014 Author Report Share Posted October 27, 2014 Well, she is Spellcaster cause that fit's better I think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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