Immediate Backup

[JohnnyHanna]

"If one of your monsters are attacked, you can special summon two normal warrior type monsters from your deck".

[Iphrem]

OCG Fix: If one of your monsters are targeted for an attack; you can Special Summon 2 Warrior-type Normal monsters from your Deck.

[thlch]

Let me try to fix the OCG:

''When a monster you control is attacked: Special Summon 2 Warrior-Type Normal Monsters from your Deck.''

I'm by no means perfect at OCG fixing though.   B)

First I'd like to say that I like the name of your card, but don't find the artwork to go well with it (so you might change that).

Other than that, I think the effect is OP (especially when taking into account that Normal Monsters are having a little comeback, partially because of Pendulum Summons and/or Pendulum Normal Monsters). You should at least block Warrior-Type Normal Monsters whose Level is 5 or higher, and even then 2 Special Summoned monsters at no cost at all seems to be a bit too much (imo).

As a result, I'd recommend to change the effect to something like this:

''When a monster you control is attacked: Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Warrior-Type Normal Monster from your Deck.''

Greets!  :rolleyes:

[magemeek22]

thlch's recommendation seems right to me. Definitely cap the Level of monster you can Summon, because otherwise this card would be ridiculous. Aside from that, I think having two monsters is fine, mostly because they'll be summoned during your opponent's turn, and they'll probably have something to take care of them. Also, make sure you can only use 1 "Immediate Backup" per turn, since spamming this card would be unfair beyond belief. 

 

When your opponent attacks a face-up monster you control: Special Summon 2 Normal Level 4 or lower Warrior-Type monsters from your Deck. You can only activate 1 "Immediate Backup" per turn. 

[JohnnyHanna]

Thank you for all the feed back :D