Atlantean Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 I hope you'll like it :) ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 Its pretty nice for your first :)2.5/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L33t Jenkins Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 Slightly overpowered but fanatastic image and nicley grammared 9/10 just increase the cost. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eliwan Posted March 24, 2008 Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 Slightly overpowered but fanatastic image and nicley grammared 9/10 just increase the cost. Agreed. 14.7/18 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lilly white Posted March 24, 2008 Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 Its a great card and good image make more card like that 8/10Only problem is the overpoweredness increase the cost and its fine ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted March 24, 2008 Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 great first card. A couple of grammar errors but since it is your first i will let it slide. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted March 24, 2008 Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 I would change the cost to discarding 1 card, as then you gain no card advantage. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atlantean Posted March 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 that's some good ideas . i will modify it asap Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ferro Posted March 24, 2008 Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 great card but some grammar but still 8.75/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rt264 Posted March 24, 2008 Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 I like the idea, abit over powered though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SOUL Posted March 24, 2008 Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 9/10Nice For your First! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 24, 2008 Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 1st line- 1>one2nd line- to your side of the field during>at3rd line- Monsters>Monster4th line- cards>card's5th line- opponent's>opponent , Life Points6th line [special] Summoned? You shouldn't put spaces between the word before an apostrophe or a full stop.I'd prefer them not to attack at all during the turn they were Summoned back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pizzalordgod Posted March 24, 2008 Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 that is so much better than my first card o well nice job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest xbon Posted March 24, 2008 Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 33.7/50 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atlantean Posted March 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 thanx for your comments , i will create another cards and a set maybe soon :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluephoenix Posted March 24, 2008 Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 Not bad ::Claps,loud audience applause:: for a beginner,but look who's talkin' right. It's good, I'd say........8.5 or 9/10,kinda on the edge. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Supreme Posted March 24, 2008 Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 Good for a first Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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