Faded Posted March 24, 2008 Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 Attention: Must Read The Rules First.Rules1- There is to be rating given to this card! So no ?/10 or whatever.2 -Only suggestions on how to fix the grammar mistakes!3 -Dont say theres an error without first pointing it out! You may discuss ideas about the card, and suggest changes. Any breaking of the above rules will get you Neg'd! After I am satisfied with the result and changes, and everyone says its okay, then will it be added it to my card collection thread, and open to ratings there. Card:[align=center]I made the picture for the card!Pay 500 Life Points. Select and activate 1 of the following effects:- Remove from play Fusion Material Monsters in your hand, that are listed on a Level 6 or lower Fusion Monster, and Special Summon the Fusion Monster from your Fusion Deck.- Select 1 Ritual Monster in your hand. Remove from play a number of Fusion Monsters equal to the Level of the selected Ritual Monster. Special Summon the Ritual Monster from your hand.[/align] [align=center]Select 1 Fusion Monster in your Fusion Deck, and add it to your Hand. The selected monster becomes a Ritual Monster. The selected monster can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Ritualmerization".disclaimer: I do not own this artwork. I only use it to enhance the overall quality of my card.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TAG Posted March 24, 2008 Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 Well, I can start by saying that you accidentally put "Fusion" instead of "Ritual" for the second part of the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 minor errors being changed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted March 24, 2008 Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 In the second effect, you mention Fusion monster, but then mention Ritual Monsters?WTF is Amalgam?"That are listed by an fusion..."hand not HandSince it's not a Ritual Spell, replace the "Ritual Summon a monster" with "Special Summon a monster", and say: "This Special Summon is treated as a Ritual Summon.""select and activate 1 of the following effects:", not "choose"in the last sentence, you wrote "Ritual Monster" an unneeded time.Now, since I've pointed out EVERY grammar / OCG error, I'm going to look at the rest of the card.Using fusion materials from your deck is broken unless you make it otherwise underpowered / situational.The name I'm iffy about.I believe that most fusion cards should have a swirl.And finally, it wouldn't be complete without a discussion:[discuss]As of current: 5/10With mistakes fixed: 8.7/10[/discuss]I love loopholes! <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeroshot Posted March 24, 2008 Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 Choose one of the effects to do what?hand not HandThere are also some errors that I cannot point out. The wording just sounds wrong.I do not think you need "as that of" nere the end. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 updated by still wrong, and working on more suggestions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glorious eXcess Posted March 24, 2008 Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 I'm sorry, neg me all you want, but, I don't understand half of it....(extra deck, etc) Extra Deck is ONLY for Synchros, not fusions, and there are no monsters in my knowledge that involve 2 fusions to fusion summon...also, take a look, my friend..."Level Stars equal twice are as twice as much as that of"excuse me, but, what does that mean...1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 Lol dude its not for rating, its for fixing, and commenting but I understand what youre saying, the Card Maker was playing up though. Updated! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted March 24, 2008 Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 Removal in the final effect should work for fusions and synchros.I'm sorry' date=' neg me all you want, but, I don't understand half of it....(extra deck, etc) Extra Deck is ONLY for Synchros, not fusions, and there are no monsters in my knowledge that involve 2 fusions to fusion summon...also, take a look, my friend..."Level Stars equal twice are as twice as much as that of"excuse me, but, what does that mean...1/10[/quote']Fusion Material Monster!=Fusion MonsterExtra Deck is for Fusions AND Synchros.Get your facts correct pl0x. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 its okay. I changed the Extra Deck part because I knew people wouldnt have known that its purposes are widespread and not only for Synchros. What do you think? Amalgam was going to be a mix of both Fusion and Rituals but it got complicated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted March 24, 2008 Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 I'm sorry' date=' neg me all you want, but, I don't understand half of it....(extra deck, etc) Extra Deck is ONLY for Synchros, not fusions, and there are no monsters in my knowledge that involve 2 fusions to fusion summon...also, take a look, my friend..."Level Stars equal twice are as twice as much as that of"excuse me, but, what does that mean...1/10[/quote']Sorry if I'm not suggesting anything but I have to correct him.Extra Deck = Fusion Deck*Negged Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 Thats ok. At least you didnt rate it, as Im not looking for rating a work in process. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rt264 Posted March 24, 2008 Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 Hey this is a nice card I think you should make more like this! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glorious eXcess Posted March 24, 2008 Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 I'm sorry' date=' neg me all you want, but, I don't understand half of it....(extra deck, etc) Extra Deck is ONLY for Synchros, not fusions, and there are no monsters in my knowledge that involve 2 fusions to fusion summon...also, take a look, my friend..."Level Stars equal twice are as twice as much as that of"excuse me, but, what does that mean...1/10[/quote']Sorry if I'm not suggesting anything but I have to correct him.Extra Deck = Fusion Deck*Negged Well sorry, Mr. I'm the one who checks random sites awaiting Extra Decks and Synchros, but I didn't know that, and Lol, Please, I gave reasons, and I was proven wrong by phoenix....so.....take back the neg.....also, kizzi didn't neg me...so why did you? AND @Faded@ much better version.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 Thank you bob. Im glad you like it better. Now I just have to make monsters that can go along with this card. [monsters that can only be Summoned by this card only to be more exact]. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glorious eXcess Posted March 24, 2008 Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 That would be cool. You should even try to make a whole new type of card, like Synchros are white, and Virtuals are sparkly green, etc...! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 I would if I could lulz, but I fail. Itll take me awhile to think of a color scheme that wont be confused or look similar to another card type Blue-RitualOrange-EffectGreen-SpellPurple-FusionYellow-VanillaWhite/Grey-Synchro Red?Black? Maybe a red and black card. Ill see what that will look like... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yogg-Saron Posted March 24, 2008 Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 Hmm, just a suggestion....shouldn't be a Ritual Spell Card? Just because it is summoning Ritual monsters? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 At first I thought it shouldnt because it can summon a fusion aswel but theres no harm in it I suppose seeing how fusion monsters dont have a spell type of their own. plus the name is more ritual dominatant too aye Ill make one now. UPDATED. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glorious eXcess Posted March 24, 2008 Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 I would if I could lulz' date=' but I fail. Itll take me awhile to think of a color scheme that wont be confused or look similar to another card type Blue-RitualOrange-EffectGreen-SpellPurple-FusionYellow-VanillaWhite/Grey-Synchro Red?Black? Maybe a red and black card. Ill see what that will look like...[/quote'] Black~ A new type (Ritumerge)Red~PolySacrifice (A Type to summon a Ritumerge) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2008 Ritumerge? hmm Black is cool look but needs some editing done to it. Plus I dont have any Ritual/Fusion Monster ideas as of yet. But Im thinking something along the lines of Ritual [or whatever they are called] going to the Extra/Fusion Deck once when the are destroyed, and gain effects when Summoned again via Ritualmerization The Fusions return to the hand when destroyed, and gain effects when summoned [most probably going to be Level 5's and 6's] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glorious eXcess Posted March 25, 2008 Report Share Posted March 25, 2008 ok, so, Ritumerges are in the extra deck, and can only be summoned by the red cards....capishe? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2008 Yeh that was originally how it worked but it got too wordy, and complicated. Ill work on this idea some more later on. Just thought what others thought of the Ritualmerization Card first. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glorious eXcess Posted March 25, 2008 Report Share Posted March 25, 2008 but do you want me to make them on GIMP? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted March 25, 2008 Report Share Posted March 25, 2008 It doesn't Ritual Summon, so it's not a Ritual Spell Card. Edit: Merged: Well sorry' date=' Mr. I'm the one who checks random sites awaiting Extra Decks and Synchros, but I didn't know that, and Lol, Please, I gave reasons, and I was proven wrong by phoenix....so.....take back the neg.....also, [b']kizzi didn't neg me...so why did you?[/b]I'm not quite as evil as I usually am? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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