Faded Posted March 24, 2008 Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 Attention: Must Read The Rules First.Rules1- There is to be NO rating given to this card! So no ?/10 or whatever.2 -Only suggestions on how to fix the grammar mistakes!3 -Dont say theres an error without first pointing it out! You may discuss ideas about the card, and suggest changes. Any breaking of the above rules will get you Neg'd! After I am satisfied with the result and changes, and everyone says its okay, then will it be added it to my card collection thread, and open to ratings there. [align=center]If this monster is destroyed, you can Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower Normal Monster from your hand or Deck to your side of the field. When a monster that was Special Summoned by the effect of this card is destroyed, you can return this monster back to your hand or the bottom of your Deck.disclaimer: I do not own this picture. I only use this to enhance over overall quality of my card.[/align] [align=center]If this monster is destroyed, you can Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower monster from your hand or Deck to your side of the field. When a monster that was Special Summoned by the effect of this card is destroyed, you can pay 800 Life Points to return this monster back to your hand or your Deck.disclaimer: I do not own this picture. I only use this to enhance over overall quality of my card.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pizzalordgod Posted March 24, 2008 Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 nice card is that picture from naruto? I can find no mistakes I give it 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rt264 Posted March 24, 2008 Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 monster is "Monster" right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abstract [Atrocity] Posted March 24, 2008 Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 Lol Sangan search festival.Nice card, but could be abused. EASILY.Might wanna dumb it down slightly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 Only when its Monster Card is it capitalized. How do you suppose I dumb it down without losing its x-factor? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted March 24, 2008 Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 I do not see any grammar errors. The card is good but can be broken in some occasions. He can keep Special Summoning. When the summoned card is destroyed, you can just put it into your hand and start the cycle over again. It just seems to continue. I am not really sure on how to fix this problem. I may have an idea but your rules state that I am not allowed to make any nongrammar suggestions. Anyway, Seriously I would give it an 8.7/10 - Hunterb Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 No I state no ratings until its put into my other thread.Grammar suggestions and card change suggestions are allowed. and it cant Special Summon itself because its Level is too high and the condition is that it can only Special Summon a Level 3 or lower. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted March 24, 2008 Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 I read that. It can Special Summon OTHER cards without end. Maybe you should change it to where you can only use this card once, or give it a cost. What the card does, is cancel out all of the -1s that you could possibly get from your opponent destroying this card. _____ they destroy it. -1 you special summon a level 3. +1 they destroy it. -1 you add him back to your hand. +1 _____ You can never have a -1 involving him. You never run out of cards too. You just keep getting new cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 Thanks hunterb, Ill add a cost and/or make it useable only once unless Ive paid a cost] i.e When this monster is Normal Summoned you can pay LP in multiples of 600 [more?]. For every 600 you pay is the number of times you can use the following effect during the current duel. so If you only pay 600 then you can only use this effect once during the current duel. So if the card somehow ends back in your hand, and you normal summon it, then you cannot pay LPs again to use its effect a 2nd time. If you pay 1800 LP, and plan on using its effect 3 times, but dont, then you cant get the extra LP you paid back. Ill update it in 5mins. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rt264 Posted March 24, 2008 Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 Can you tell me what site you got this pic from?It sorta looks like Final Fantasy stuff... >>yay 50th post!!!!!<< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 Its from a game yes but not FF I dont think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slade Posted March 25, 2008 Report Share Posted March 25, 2008 No I state no ratings until its put into my other thread.Grammar suggestions and card change suggestions are allowed. and it cant Special Summon itself because its Level is too high and the condition is that it can only Special Summon a Level 3 or lower.I'd recommend it only be able to special summon Level 3 Normal monsters, ones without effects, otherwise people would just load their decks full of searchers, and it would be abused more than... I won't finish that phrase; it had something to do with Wacko Jacko O.o. EDIT: Or, make it only able to special summon a specific type of monster. I was thinking Six Samurais? Ah, but there's Shein's Footsoldier.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2008 Level 3 or lower Normal Monster is a good choice! :) Id give you a Rep but Im all out for today dude Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted March 25, 2008 Report Share Posted March 25, 2008 Thanks hunterb' date=' Ill add a cost and/or make it useable only once unless Ive paid a cost'] i.e When this monster is Normal Summoned you can pay LP in multiples of 600 [more?]. For every 600 you pay is the number of times you can use the following effect during the current duel. so If you only pay 600 then you can only use this effect once during the current duel. So if the card somehow ends back in your hand, and you normal summon it, then you cannot pay LPs again to use its effect a 2nd time. If you pay 1800 LP, and plan on using its effect 3 times, but dont, then you cant get the extra LP you paid back. Ill update it in 5mins. You are welcome. I am glad I can help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2008 Oh right. i actually forgot about that idea, and just changed it only being able to Special Summon a Level 3 normal Monster instead. I might have to make a 2nd card with a different effect to see which is better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted March 26, 2008 Report Share Posted March 26, 2008 Hmm, I like the effect of the top one, with the stats (ATK/DEF) of the bottom one :P Though, I am partial for normal monsters, so that's probably why ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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