Captain Murphy ☆ Posted July 8, 2014 Report Share Posted July 8, 2014 2 Level 4 Monsters During either player's turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card, then target 2 cards; destroy the targeted cards on your opponent's 2nd Standby Phase after this effect is activated. This card loses 300 ATK every time Xyz Material is detached from this card. Feedback plz. It may just be me, but the pic seems blurry kinda idk. Put it together in like 10 minutes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tornami ice Posted July 8, 2014 Report Share Posted July 8, 2014 It's a solid card, I can't find anything wrong with it. I initially thought the amount of time you have to wait for the targets to be destroyed was a bit too long but then again this balances out with the card being Rank 4. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Murphy ☆ Posted July 8, 2014 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2014 It's a solid card, I can't find anything wrong with it. I initially thought the amount of time you have to wait for the targets to be destroyed was a bit too long but then again this balances out with the card being Rank 4. Yeah, I was thinking maybe it was too long too but its a Rank 4. Thank you by the way, can you see any OCG problems? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tornami ice Posted July 8, 2014 Report Share Posted July 8, 2014 The only OCG problems I see are nit-picky stuff. "the targeted cards" = "those targets" and "every time" = "each time". Other than that, it's spot on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Murphy ☆ Posted July 9, 2014 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2014 The only OCG problems I see are nit-picky stuff. "the targeted cards" = "those targets" and "every time" = "each time". Other than that, it's spot on. Ah I see, I'll change them, thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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