The Legendary Chikushou, Sushinzhu~NO RATINGS PLEASE! Suggestions only

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Attention: Must Read The Rules First.

Rules

1- There is to be NO rating given to this card! So no ?/10 or whatever.

2 -Only suggestions on how to fix the grammar mistakes!

3 -Dont say theres an error without first pointing it out!

 

You may discuss ideas about the card, and suggest changes.

 

Any breaking of the above rules will get you Neg'd!

 

After I am satisfied with the result and changes, and everyone says its okay, then will it be added it to my card collection thread, and open to ratings there.

 

[align=center]This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This monster can only be Special Summoned by tributing 1 "Sushi The Legend" on your side of the field. The ATK and DEF of this card becomes equal to the total ATK of the monsters that were destroyed by the monster that was used to Special Summon this card. Once per turn, you can destroy 1 card on the field.

disclaimer: I do not own this picture. I only use this to enhance over overall quality of my card.

 

If your opponent Summons a monster with ATK lower than this monster, automatically destroy the monster, and inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the original ATK of the destroyed monster. If a monster is destroyed by the effect of this card, you must give control of this monster to your opponent.

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Update: changed the effect, so instead of having to destroy 3 monsters with Sushi first, you only have to destroy 2.

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Good change (if it was 3 monsters, then he would currently belong to your opponent, if I'm understanding his effect correctly). I think they are pretty good cards. The top one's effect is kinda awkward, but I'm not sure if there's a better way of saying it :P

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Update #2: changed the effect, so instead of having to destroy 2 monsters with Sushi first, you can tribute it straight away...