Queen of the Fallen Angels

[Anarkist]

Before the Angel of Creation Brahma (himself created from the self-aware Force of Creation Para Brahman-Mahadevi) created the woman Eve, he created the beautiful goddess Lilith from the same earth as Adam. The Garden of Eden was created by Brahma, isolated from the rest of humanity at the behest of the Archangel of the End of Time, Kalyug--who wanted to prove to Brahma and the rest of the Celestial Gods that humanity was inherently evil. 

Adam, physically stronger than Lilith, demanded she be subservient to him, but when she refused, he attempted to take her by force. As Adam attempted to take her, Lilith cried out the forbidden name of the Divine Angel of Destruction, Shiva--who granted her the Celestial Wings of the angels, and she fled from the Garden of Eden. Her beauty was so great that her hair was said to be the first black silk, and Adam cried to the heavens for god to bring her back.

And so Brahma at once sent his 3 angels Senoy, Sansenoy and Semangelof, to bring Lilith back. The Three Holy Angels found Lilith by the red sea, and gave her a choice; return with them to Eden or die. Lilith, unable to go back and be a servant chose death, but just as the Angels prepared to kill her, one of the highest Angels, Archangel Sammael, a Mahamaharathi-Seraphim, appeared from the darkness of the sky--his black wings blotting out even the sun.

And with just a breath he destroyed Brahma's 3 angels. It is said Archangel Sammael mated with Lilith creating a race of demons on earth. She herself remained immortal, even as Adam died, because she had never partook of the Fruit of Knowledge--and became the Queen of the Fallen equal to even Lucifer's love Persephone.

 

 

2 Level 8 "Fallen Angel" monsters

While you control this card other "Fallen Angel" and "Dark City Criminal" monsters you control cannot be Targeted by Card Effects. This card gains 500 ATK and DEF for every "Fallen Angels" monster in your Graveyard and Banished Zone. Once per turn, during either turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to activate 1 of these effects:

• During either player's Battle Phase: negate the activation of a card effect and Banish the card. This effect cannot be negated, and no Spells, Traps or Monster Effects can be activated in response to this effect(s) activation.

• Once per turn: Pay half your Life Points; select 1 card from either Graveyard, and add it to your hand.

[Dokutah]

i want to give a full review...but...after seeing the "fallen angels" one after another...i realize that your concept is getting better and have a balance result (for me at least)

 

advice: (1) instead just monster, start to make spell or trap that support it (2) post it in multiple cards section

[krakonfour]

Yet another cosmic backstory where half the intrigue is sexual and the other half is forcing it to happen. *Sigh*

 

Anyway, onto the card:

 

2500 ATK for a Rank 8 monster requiring two specific materials is pretty low, but the effects make up for it.

If I understand correctly, this card will get 3500 attack by the time you opponent get to their battle phase, and that's just the beginning of the duel. Later on, 4000, even 5000 attack is nothing too difficult.

 

And this is from a two material Rank 8 monster. 

 

It gets an extreme battle-phase protection effect, since it goes as far as banishing the target, and adds on top of that a blanket effect protection for all other fallen angle monsters. Basically, if you get two of these out, even without Xyz material (summon 1, Call of the Haunted the other), you'll have two 4000+ attack monters your opponent can't touch with card effects.

 

Oh, and it recycles ANY card from the grave into your hand. Yeah, even the spells that Konami dedicated entire cards to do so (Magician of Faith? Flip effect lvl 1 monster banned for many years. Magical Stone excavation? It's a -3). This card just costs half your lifepoints (which are dead cheap later in the game), and it can even get you limited trap cards back in the hand.

 

This card is broken broken broken, its sole limitation is that maybe Fallen Angel/Dark City lvl 8's are already hard to get out.

[Anarkist]

Yet another cosmic backstory where half the intrigue is sexual and the other half is forcing it to happen. *Sigh*

 

U do realize I took real religious stories and tweaked them slightly to come up with the back story right? Blame religion, not me. I just find it interesting