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My first archetype, help appreciated


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Hello guys, I recently noticed how Racoon is nearly the only deck that really focuses on rank 2 xyz, so I came up with this and I'd like to hear your opinions. 

 

At the moment I only have the main deck monsters.

 

 

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Added Spell/Trap Support.

 

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Nice, I love the fact it's a female archetype. Effects are good, might have to look at the field spell again "once per turn: when an 'omnitsu' monster is special summoned from graveyard, you can send 1 card from your Deck to the graveyard to draw 1 card." I am not an ocg expert, but you had an extra 'graveyard' thrown in there.

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Oh and the monsters might be a tad op-ed since they swarm easily. Maybe weaken them a little?
Nice, I love the fact it's a female archetype. Effects are good, might have to look at the field spell again "once per turn: when an 'omnitsu' monster is special summoned from graveyard, you can send 1 card from your Deck to the graveyard to draw 1 card." I am not an ocg expert, but you had an extra 'graveyard' thrown in there.
Oh and the monsters might be a tad op-ed?

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Its never really that important, but I do agree in this case that most of these cards have far too much ATK for what they're meant to be. I'd say 1300 is generally the highest a Level 2 should have. Obviously Levels have a much different meaning now to what they used to, but these cards just have too high ATK for what they do anyway.

 

Apart from that, the Archetype looks pretty good. They all have synergy and they all achieve a common goal. Surprise Attack is a really cool card; well designed, useful and balanced at the same time. The name is pretty generic though and I would actually be tempted to make it an Omnitsu card so it can be searched by Mari. The only problem I see is that some of the individual cards are extremely broken.

 

Mari and Kari both have +1 effects that trigger when they are Summoned by any way. I would change it so that these effects only activate when they are Normal Summoned, to stop the deck swarming the field and creating massive card advantage just from 1 or 2 cards. As they are, you get a +2 just from sending them from the Deck to the Graveyard, then you can make a Rank 2 as well, which is obviously a bit ridiculous.

 

Then there's the Field Spell. These cards already have too much ATK and with the Field Spell you could end up with a field of 2000+ beatsticks and OTK really consistently. The second effect is the truly ridiculous part, though. Just by Special Summoning someone, you can trigger another of these cards' effects AND draw 1. That is a +2 that can easily be turned into a +3. as well as creating a Rank 2 Xyz. I would change it so that you have to discard 1 to send to the Graveyard rather than draw 1, just so the card advantage doesn't get ridiculous. 

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