Excalibur the Divine Posted July 17, 2014 Report Share Posted July 17, 2014 Started this set; didn't finish yet. Only made the more powerful monsters ATM. Will make S/T and weaker monsters in 24 hours if i get reviews [Spoiler='Normal Mages'] I'm going to make a Level 8 Synchro so using these cards as support for both Xyz and Synchro plays. Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. Must be Special Summoned (from the hand) while you control 1 or more face-up "Archmage" monster(s). This card cannot be targeted for an attack while an "Archmage" monster is face-up on your side of the field. Once per turn, you can increase or decrease this card's Level by 2. You can Special Summon this card from your hand during your Standby Phase by tributing 1 monster on the field and if you do, this card's level becomes 7. [/Spoiler] [Spoiler='The powerful Archmages'] Once per turn: Target one monster your opponent controls, it gains the following effect: During each End Phase, pay 500 life points or destroy this card. Once per turn: Target one monster your opponent controls, it cannot change its battle position or attack(permanently). Once per turn: You can pay 500 Life Points to target one monster your opponent controls, destroy it and inflict 1000 damage to your opponent. Once per turn, during either player's turn: Inflict 1000 damage to your opponent. [/Spoiler] [Spoiler='Boss Monsters'] [Spoiler='Fusion'] Fire Archmage Fiso + Lightning Archmage Lamara + Poison Archmage Poisum + Ice Archmage Isofa You can also Fusion Summon this card by sending the above cards from you hand or your side of the field to the Graveyard. You do not use "Polmerization". Once per turn: Target one monster on the field: Banish it. When this card is sent to the Graveyard: Inflict 800 damage to your opponent for each monster banished by this card's effect. If this card would be destroyed and sent to the Graveyard: You can destroy another "Archmage" monster you control instead. [/Spoiler] [Spoiler='Xyz'] 2 Level 7 "Archmage" monsters Once per turn: Banish 1 Set Spell/Trap on the field and gain 1000 Life Points. This card cannot be targeted or destroyed by card effects. There can only be 1 face-up "Divine Archmage Plaidor" on the field. [/Spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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EndSeekingValor Posted July 18, 2014 Report Share Posted July 18, 2014 I really like everything. Only "Lightning Archmage Lamara" being able to destroy a monster AND inflict 1000 damage seems a bit over-powered. Also "Poison Archmage Poisum" being able to inflict 1000 damage on either player's turn is over-powered. Besides those two things, I like what you have a lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Excalibur the Divine Posted July 18, 2014 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2014 Those two you mentioned I lowered their attack to compensate for the powerful Effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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MajorMajora Posted July 18, 2014 Report Share Posted July 18, 2014 I'm pretty sure that the OCG is off, but I won't nitpick since I'm no expert. Â I like what you have here and that the cards are powerful but are offset by high levels. They all can be easily countered by card removal, which any decent deck should have decent amounts of. Â Fire Archmage should deal 1000 points of damage. it's a bit underwhelming right now. Â I'm confused by Ice Archmage's ability: how long does it last? Forever? Your next standby phase? Either way is fine, but it's unclear. Â Poison should just have the effect happen on each standby phase, to make life easier. Maybe up his ATK to 2000, makes him less easily swatted out by a low level monster. Â Lightning is out of place because its ability is so undeniably better than both Fire's (either damage or destruction, not both, and the opponent can decide) and Ice's (keeps the monster around but renders it useless). Maybe change it to (Destroy any monster with less ATK than this card" and up its ATK by just a tad. Â Daemon: Ah yeah, it's got style without being ridiculous, and its summoning requirements are somewhat reasonable. I see no reason to run this other than to look cool, since there are stronger, easier combos to pull off out there, but i really like that about him and this whole archetype. It's not ridiculously strong, but it's fun and has style. I'd like to see a TV show villain use these cards. Â Speaking of TV show characters, I'm creating an archetype used by a main character in my rough, still only in my head idea for a Yugioh TV show plot. It's the 12 elemental warriors. It's still only has 2 cards, but I'd appreciate it if you came down to check it out anyways. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Excalibur the Divine Posted July 19, 2014 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2014 Thanks for the review. I'm pretty sure the OCG is correct, but if not then you should correct it since my OCG isnt bad and I'm pretty sure I'm not incorrect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Generaxius Posted July 19, 2014 Report Share Posted July 19, 2014 All of the cards you made are good but I feel bad for Lightning Archmage Lamara. Good thing you edit Poison's stats because it can cause too much damage to your opponent since it's hard to control and it can continuously bombard you. If there are some tweaks made with Lightning, it will all be good. As you say, no OCG errors ;). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Excalibur the Divine Posted July 19, 2014 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2014 I will edit in 7-8 hours. Thanks for the reviews guys! You all got reps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fire Fist Moralltach Posted July 19, 2014 Report Share Posted July 19, 2014 The Elements will Kill You review: Fire Archmage Fiso: I love him, because while opponent Life Points are low, you can destroy 1 opponent monster per turn. Does opponent need to pay Life Points only during his End Phase or during each player End Phase?  Ice Archmage Isofa: Another good monster, don't have much to say for it except good job. Just, what I noticed. I don't know how long last his effect.  Lightning Archmage Lamara: I agree with MajorMajora, this card needs some kind of restriction. I'm not saying this is bad card but its little OP now.  Poison Archmage Poisum: I also think this card need a higher ATK or DEF. When I saw its effect I thought how it would be awesome for something like this: Play Area B, change this card to Defense then equip this card with Mist Body.  Elementalist Daemon: A little to hard to Summon but its worth a try. Don't know, good card for a Boss Monster who can KILL the opponent in a couple of turns. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Anarkist Posted July 19, 2014 Report Share Posted July 19, 2014 wow I really like this archetype. Archmage's apprentice is such a versatile card (within the archetype) I cant wait to see the synchro monster. I love the concept of the "arch" mages, just like the archangels, it denotes mages superior to the rest. I saw ppl say that Lightning is a bit OP but imo it isn't because it has rather low attack, balancing it, and no immunities to destruction. The absolute only thing Id nitpick is that archmage apprentice's pic isnt "yugioh-like" but the yugioh art has been evolving (I remember they had their first 3d card with that Spellbook monster) so it's no big deal at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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