Xyz Goblin Archer!

[hectorbastida]

Hi Guys New Card!! :D Any suggestions or feedback is welcomed :D, im an open person so dont hold back.

 

 

Xyz Goblin Archer

2 level 4 Monsters
When this card is Special Summoned, Trap Cards cannot be activated.If this card attacks, it is changed to Defense Position at the end of the Battle Phase. You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; This card gains 800 ATK per each monster in defense position on the field.

 

 

And here is the "anime" card version :P
http://i.imgur.com/ykiMQDql.jpg

 

So, what do you guys think? Have a nice day :D.

 

_{Note: I dont own the artwork, card was edited in photoshop}

[cardffreakxx]

card should read : This card gains 800 ATK for each card currently in Defense Position.

 

I also recomending adding -until the End Phase of your opponents next turn. to that effect it seems like it could get way too strong.

 

I like the idea though.  just needs some touch ups

 

-Cardffreak :mrgreen:

[krakonfour]

Let's reword it:

 

Trap cards cannot be activated in response to this card's summon. If this card attacks, it is changed to Defense Position at the end of the Battle Phase. Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: This card gains ATK equal to the number of Defense-position monster on the field x800.

 

Once per turn, otherwise it'll get 8200ATK in one turn when you flip Scapegoat. 

 

To balance this trick (5000ATK even if it is once per turn, and easily gets to 6600 in Ghostrick decks), I suggest you limit this effect to monsters your opponent controls. On the plus side, having a big beatstick only when your opponent has DEFENSE position monsters is a bit pointless, how about you add piercing damage to punish you opponent for defensive play?