Anarkist Posted July 19, 2014 Report Share Posted July 19, 2014 The Fallen Anakoth This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must first be Special Summoned (from your hand) by Banishing 3 DARK monsters from your Graveyard. This card's ATK and DEF are each 1000x the number of DARK monsters in your Graveyard and Banished Zone. While you control this card, all monsters the opponent Summons have their effect(s) negated the turn they are Summoned, and all Xyz Monsters they Summon automatically have 1 Xyz Material detached. Each time your opponent activates a card effect inflict 500 points of Direct Damage to his/her Life Points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordCowCowCowCowCowCowCowCow Posted July 19, 2014 Report Share Posted July 19, 2014 ...Okay wow. This is quite....too powerful. Okay let's see. Its summoning condition is, to be honest, not that hard to do. Seeing as it's any DARK Monster. And the three that get banished add to it's attack as well so no real loss. This thing is at least 3000/3000 and most likely more. And then you add the rest. The effect negation seriously cripples a lot of cards. Especially since they won't be able to last very long with such a powerful card on your side. The Xyz effect just adds more to the pile of why this is OP. And then when they activate any effect they take damage. While it's not a lot of damage, combined with all of the rest, your opponent is going to have major issues if it's summoned. And again, it's not too hard to summon. As for name, art, idea, etc. The name is...interesting, but I can't say much about it because either it's a made up name or a reference I'm not getting. It's effect goes well with the "Black Hole" thing, everything getting sucked up into it. (Doesn't make up for how powerful it is but at least there's that.) Of course, i would have no idea it's supposed to be related to black holes if not for the title of the topic. The art is neat, but it's blurry. That's not a huge deal but it's there. I don't want to offend you or anything, just giving my realistic opinion. It's just too much for too easy of a summon. There's literally no drawbacks. The only positive really is that it isn't protected, except from effect monsters. Though they do take some damage trying to bring it down. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anarkist Posted July 19, 2014 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2014 ...Okay wow. This is quite....too powerful. Okay let's see. Its summoning condition is, to be honest, not that hard to do. Seeing as it's any DARK Monster. And the three that get banished add to it's attack as well so no real loss. This thing is at least 3000/3000 and most likely more. And then you add the rest. The effect negation seriously cripples a lot of cards. Especially since they won't be able to last very long with such a powerful card on your side. The Xyz effect just adds more to the pile of why this is OP. And then when they activate any effect they take damage. While it's not a lot of damage, combined with all of the rest, your opponent is going to have major issues if it's summoned. And again, it's not too hard to summon. As for name, art, idea, etc. The name is...interesting, but I can't say much about it because either it's a made up name or a reference I'm not getting. It's effect goes well with the "Black Hole" thing, everything getting sucked up into it. (Doesn't make up for how powerful it is but at least there's that.) Of course, i would have no idea it's supposed to be related to black holes if not for the title of the topic. The art is neat, but it's blurry. That's not a huge deal but it's there. I don't want to offend you or anything, just giving my realistic opinion. It's just too much for too easy of a summon. There's literally no drawbacks. The only positive really is that it isn't protected, except from effect monsters. Though they do take some damage trying to bring it down. nah man im not offended at all, this was an extremely well thought-out and respectful review--a courtesy many others on here cannot extend. I'll definitely work on balancing it. It was actually supposed to be an 'alternate' version of the Wicked Gods as they seemed too hard to play, but I went overboard and now mine are too easy too play lol will work on fixing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
krakonfour Posted July 19, 2014 Report Share Posted July 19, 2014 -Easy summon. -Extreme ATK. -Stops your opponent from playing on-summon monster effects -Stops your opponent from playing 101 to get rid of this card -Deals damage when your opponent uses ANY CARD EFFECT. Please try harder to not make something that belongs in the I Win Buttons Other Cards section. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anarkist Posted July 19, 2014 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2014 -Easy summon. -Extreme ATK. -Stops your opponent from playing on-summon monster effects -Stops your opponent from playing 101 to get rid of this card -Deals damage when your opponent uses ANY CARD EFFECT. Please try harder to not make something that belongs in the I Win Buttons Other Cards section. so very constructive, not even the length of the card as per the rules I made sure to report u for always just typing garbage on my cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
krakonfour Posted July 19, 2014 Report Share Posted July 19, 2014 so very constructive, not even the length of the card as per the rules I made sure to report u for always just typing garbage on my cards. Each point listed is something you will have to modify for you to correct the card and make it playable. If you consider me breaking down the effects and listing them in order of most to least broken as garbage, then don't solicit help in the realistic cards section. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anarkist Posted July 19, 2014 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2014 Each point listed is something you will have to modify for you to correct the card and make it playable. If you consider me breaking down the effects and listing them in order of most to least broken as garbage, then don't solicit help in the realistic cards section. No I consider ur mocking to be garbage, dont ever tell me what to do. Dont call my work crap, dont mock me, review my card or buzz off. I dont need ur help, and ur spamming on my profile. Funny how LordCow can give a REAL review and not be a hater. All u are is a hater, but growing up in nyc we learned haters always gotta hate when they cant compete Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EntropicMage Posted July 19, 2014 Report Share Posted July 19, 2014 Effects and summonings that are triggered by banishing cards in the graveyard are actually easy to pull off. The fact that it gains attack for monsters both in the graveyard and banished means that it's ATK will pretty much only go up. This Black Hole monster is more overpowered then the last one. I have the same suggestions as the last one. Make it harder to summon, and have the special effect also be a negative for the person controlling the card as well. So all references of your opponents cards should be removed. With the black hole theme maybe you need something massive to collapse first before these can be played. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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