Bluephoenix Posted March 24, 2008 Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 Yeah,the name is really unoriginal but I'm bored so I thought of the first cool word that everyone loves(sarcasm) Chaos,and went Mortal Kombat on it,and changed it to khaos.Tell me what you think.Depending on the reviews,I might make more.PLEASE RATE THEM! I don't know who owns these pics,but I found 'em on photo bucket.I personally edited The Gemini Gaurds image, but I take no credit for the original picture. The Gemini Gaurds-Watchers of the KhaosWhen this card is sent to the graveyard as a result of battle, select 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field. The selected monster may not attack until your opponent's third battlephase after this effect is activated. While this card is in the graveyard,you may pay 800 lifepoints to special summon this card in attack position. If so,when this card is destroyed and removed form the field, it is removed from play. Ruin the MassacreWhen this card is destroyed as a result of battle and sent to the graveyard, Select 1 "khaos" monster on your side of the field. Increase the selected monster's ATK by 1000 during your next battlephase. While this card is in the graveyard, you may pay 1000 lifepoints to special summon this card in attack position. If so,when this card is destroyed and removed form the field, it is removed from play. Revenge the KrimsonWhile this card is face-up on your side of the field, each player must send 1 monster card from their deck to their graveyard during the end-phase of their turn. While this card is in the graveyard, you may pay 1250 lifepoints to special summon this card in attack position. If so, when this card is destroyed and removed form the field, it is removed from play. Dread the OnslaughtWhen this monster is destroyed as a result of battle and sent to the graveyard, you may select either your or your opponent's graveyard. Select up to 3 monster cards in the selected graveyard and return them to the bottom of the owner's deck, and shuffle the deck. The owner of the graveyard takes 200x the number of cards returned to their deck as direct damage to their lifepoints. While this card is in the graveyard,you may pay 900 lifepoints to special summon this card in attack position. If so,when this card is destroyed and removed form the field, it is removed from play. Drakheart the KhaotikWhile this card is face-up on your side of the field,if a "Khaos" monster destroys a monster as a result of battle, it may attack again. While this card is face-up on the field,no monster card on the field may be targeted for battle except "Drakheart the Khaotik". While this card is in the graveyard, you may pay 1500 lifepoints to special summon this card in attack position. If so,when this card is destroyed and removed form the field, it is removed from play. Kry the ApocalypticWhen this card is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned, or Special Summoned, you may sacrifice 1 "Khaos" monster on your side of the field. If so, decrease a monster on your opponent's side of the field by the sacrificed monster's original ATK. While this monster is in your graveyard, you may pay 1300 lifepoints to Special Summon this monster on your side of the field in Face-up Attack Position. If this effect is activated and this card is destroyed and sent to the graveyard, it is removed form play instead. The Solomn FortressWhile this card is active, you may special summon 1 "Khaos" monster in your graveyard to the field in attack position without paying the required cost. When a "Khaos" monster is destroyed as a result of battle and sent to the graveyard, you may select 1 face-up monster on the field and destroy it. If the selected monster was a "Khaos" monster,you may activate it's effect. The KhaosAs long as this card is active, all damage inflicted by a card effect is reduced to 0. When this card is destroyed, the controller of this card receives 1500 lifepoints of direct damage. Please tell me if I used Overused Pictures because I hate using someone else's work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Supreme Posted March 24, 2008 Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 Always leave a space after a comma or a period. Graveyard. Deck. Post the effects under them, it is easier to read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluephoenix Posted March 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 I know,I just hate spacing after marks,but thanks.I'll write the effects right now.I just realized they are sub-typed khaos. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluephoenix Posted March 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2008 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 25, 2008 Report Share Posted March 25, 2008 You also should put spaces before and after the / in the monster type area Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluephoenix Posted March 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2008 oh thanks...now can you rate them please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowmaster999 Posted March 25, 2008 Report Share Posted March 25, 2008 Well, finally a new sub type of monster acctually worth spending time on. There are some "Dueling Grammical Errors", but the effects are fairly understandable. Good Work, I suggest you make more, they really are good! All together, I give these cards a 9/10.Keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluephoenix Posted March 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2008 thanks dude,I realized the errors after I made them,when I post more I'll post the edited card versions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted March 25, 2008 Report Share Posted March 25, 2008 What's the pattern to the subtype? I.E. Toon monsters all require Toon World, Union monsters can turn into Equip Spell Cards, Spirit monsters return to your hand at the end of the turn. What do Khaos monsters do? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluephoenix Posted March 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2008 for the cost of half of their attack points from your lifepoints,you can special summon them from the graveyard,it says it plainly in the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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