'Angelic' Archetype

[Ci1000Numerronius]

These cards are so over-powered that if they were release it might be one of the most hated and loved archetypes. I was inspired by 'Maiden with eyes of blue', 'Spell Absorption' and 'Madolche'. Please tell me if you can find away of getting rid of my monsters for good and if i can post this in 'Realistic Card' forum. Don't be too harsh since this is my very first post in a forum.

 

Angelic Absorption:

 

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Priestess of the Angelic Guardian:

 

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Arkedeus, Guardian of the Angelic:

 

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[LittleMoxxie]

Ok, for the moment, these cards are not to "over-powered", more unbalanced and chunky. these are some of my suggestions.

 

First of all: "Angelic Absorption" what target/who gains the attack of the destroyed monster. I don't understand what this card do and what benefit it has, but I believe you mean another "Angelic" monster gains the attack. If so, you should maybe put it something like this:
 

[acronym='Effect1']Target 2 face-up "Angelic" monsters you control: Destroy the 1st target, and if you do, the 2nd target gains ATK equal to the 1st target in your Graveyard. Cards and effects cannot be activated in response to this card's activation.[/acronym]

 

Or something like that. Now it's much clearer what it does. I don't know if this is what the card is suppose to do but any way.

"Priestess of the Angelic Guardian" this card is maybe your OP card, but that's because of all the effects you crammed on her. I would suggest you only use one of the effects, you could maybe change it to:

 

[acronym='Effect1']Once per turn: If this card is targeted for an attack; you can negate the attack, and if you do, you can Special Summon 1 "Arkedeus, Guardian of the Angelic" from your hand. When this card is sent to the Graveyard: You can add 1 "Arkedeus, Guardian of the Angelic" from your Graveyard to your Deck. You can only activate the effect of 1 "Priestess of the Angelic Guardian" per turn, and only once that turn.[/acronym]

 

Or something similar xD This makes her strong, but not too OP and will do some mind games with your opponent, at the same time balance her for the RC.

 

For the last card (this is actually pretty decent already) It's just some OCG that are needed. But my suggestion is to maybe change this card to something like:

 

[acronym='Effect1']This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by the effect of a "Angelic" monster/card. Your opponent cannot target face-up "Angelic" monsters you control for an attack, except "Arkedeus, Guardian of the Angelic". When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard; add 1 "Angelic" monster from your Deck to your hand. If this card under your control is sent to the Banished Zone by your opponent's card effect; Special Summon this card instead.[/acronym]

 

This is some of my CnC and suggestion to make these cards/ this Archetype more viable in the RC. They maybe need some more tweeks but this is maybe a small start ^^ You should consider to make more Support with the other effects of "Priestess of the Angelic Guardian" I didn't chose or something, but keep it up and have a nice day. C:

P.s. You should write the card effect underneath the card so people can OCG/fix or suggest if needed faster (This make will help you get more ppl to help you if you need, because it take sometime to copy the text from a IMG). just keep this in mind next time you post cards. ;D

[Ci1000Numerronius]

thanks for the feed backbecase i dont remeber how to upload files icant show you but i have them

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