PandamoniumHD Posted July 27, 2014 Report Share Posted July 27, 2014 [ This is my first Written Card Set that I am posting, so I hope I am doing this right. ]"Eschec" is the Latin-something for Chess. Chess is a game played by two players to test the skills and strategies of each. Something, blah blah blah . Archetype.I thought about a interesting series of abilities each "Eschec" piece could have that are based around the rules of Chess. These abilities include Special Summoning and draw power. Here is what I have so far. [spoiler='Monsters'] Eschec Fairy Level 3 | LIGHT Fairy | Tuner When you Normal or Special Summon a Level 4 monster to your side of the field; you can Special Summon this card. If this card is as Synchro-Material for a Fairy-Type monster, that monster gains 400 ATK. 800 | 600 Eschec Bishop Level 4 | LIGHT Warrior | Effect When this card is Summoned, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 "Eschec" monster from you Hand, except "Eschec Bishop". 1600 | 1200 Eschec Knight Level 4 | LIGHT Warrior | Effect When this card destroys an opponents monster by battle, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 "Eschec" monster from you Deck. 1900 | 900 Eschec General Level 4 | LIGHT Warrior | Effect As long as this card remains face up on the field, your opponent cannot select any "Eschec" monsters for an attack except for "Eschec Knight". 1800 | 900 Eschec Pawn Level 4 | LIGHT Warrior | Effect When this card is Summoned, you can Special Summon 1 "Eschec Pawn" from your hand or Deck. If this card inflicts damage to your opponent by a direct attack, you can send it to the Graveyard. Special Summon 1 "Eshec" monster from your hand or Deck. 1200 | 2000 Eschec Rook Level 4 | LIGHT Warrior | Effect When this card is Summoned: You can add 1 "Eschec" monster from your Deck to your Hand. 1000 | 1800 King of Eschec Level 6 | LIGHT Warrior | Effect You can Special Summon this card from your hand by discarding 1 "Eschec" monster. As long as you control another "Eschec" monster, except for "King of Eschec", this card cannot be destroyed by battle or your opponents card effects. You can only control 1 "King of Eschec". 2000 | 1200 Queen of Eschec Level 8 | LIGHT Warrior | Effect This card can be Special Summoned (from your hand) when you control 2 or more "Eschec" monsters. When this card is successfully Summoned, you can target 1 "Eschec" monster on your side of the field. Increase it's Level to 8. When this card destroys an opponents monster, it can attack once again. You can only control 1 "Queen of Eschec". 2800 | 2000 Xed Eschec Nightrider Level 5 | DARK Fairy | Effect You can Special Summon this card (from your hand) by returning 1 "Eschec Knight" from your side of the field to your Deck. Once per turn, you can target 1 "Eschec" monster in your Deck. Special Summon that target to your side of the field; change it's Attribute to DARK. It cannot attack during this turn. 1800 | 900 Xed Eschec Wazir Level 5 | DARK Fairy | Effect You can Special Summon this card (from your hand) by returning 1 "Eschec Rook" from your side of the field to your Deck. Once per turn, you can inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent. This card cannot attack during the turn you activate this effect. 1000 | 1800 Xed Eschec Mann Level 8 | DARK Fairy | Effect You can Special Summon this card (from your hand) by returning 1 "King of Eschec from your side of the field to your Deck. As long as this card remains face up on the field, other "Eschec" card(s) you control are unaffected by your opponents card effects. When this card is destroyed by a card effect, destroy all monsters you control, then Special Summon 1 "Eschec" monster from your Graveyard except for "Xed Eschec Mann". 2500 | 2000 Eschec Fool Level 10 | LIGHT Fairy | Effect This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summon except by Tributing 3 "Eschec" monsters on your side of the field. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Any battle damage you would receive from battle is inflicted to your opponent instead. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can banish 3 "Eschec" monsters from your Graveyard to Special Summon this card. 0 | 0 [/spoiler] [spoiler='Extra Deck']Fusion/ XYZ Xed Eschec Cardinal Level 6 | LIGHT Fairy | Fusion | Effect Eschec Knight + Eschec Bishop This card cannot be destroyed by card effects. Once per turn, when a Special Summoned monster would activate its effect, you can discard 1 card to negate that effect and destroy it. 2200 | 1800 Xed Eschec Chancellor Level 7 | LIGHT Fairy | Fusion | Effect Eschec Knight + Eschec Rook When this card is successfully Fusion Summoned, you can target 2 unoccupied Monster zones your opponent controls. Your opponent cannot Summon Monsters in the selected zones. Once per turn, you can pay 500 Life Points to discard 1 random card in your opponents hand. 2500 | 2000 Xed Eschec Princess Level 6 | LIGHT Fairy | Fusion | Effect Eschec Knight + Eschec Bishop When this card is successfully Fusion Summoned, Special Summon 1 "Eschec" monster from your Graveyard. Your opponent cannot select another monster for an attack, except for "Xed Eschec Princess". 2500 | 1400 Xed Eschec Ferz Level 6 | LIGHT Fairy | Fusion | Effect Eschec Bishop + Eschec Bishop When this card is successfully Fusion Summoned, you can Special Summon up to 2 "Eschec" monster(s) from your Graveyard. 2400 | 1700 Xed Eschec Empress Level 8 | LIGHT Fairy | Fusion | Effect Eschec Knight + Eschec Rook When this card is successfully Fusion Summoned, you can target 3 "Eschec" cards in your Deck. Add those targets to your hand. Once per turn, you can banish one monster your opponent controls. This card cannot attack the turn you activated this effect. 2800 | 1600 Eschec Omega Champion Level 7 | LIGHT Fairy | Synchro | Effect 1 Tuner Monster + 1 non-Tuner LIGHT monster This card can attack twice during your Battle Phase. When this card destroys an opponents monster by battle, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the Level of the destroyed monster x200. 2400 | 2000 Eschec Omega Wizard Level 8 | LIGHT Fairy | Synchro | Effect 1 Tuner Monster + 1 non-Tuner LIGHT monster When this card is Successfully Synchro Summoned, you can add 1 "Eschec" Spell/Trap card from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand. Once per turn you can excavate the top 3 cards of your Deck. You can add 1 "Eschec" monster excavated by this effect. Shuffle the rest back into the Deck. 2800 | 2300 XXed Eschec Berolina Pawn Rank 4 | DARK Fairy | Xyz | Effect 2 Level 4 "Eschec" monsters You can detach 2 Xyz Material monsters from this card: This monster can attack your opponent directly this turn, but the damage is halved. If this card successfully inflicts battle damage to your opponent with a direct attack, you can Special Summon 1 "Eschec" monster from your Hand or Deck. 2400 | 1000 Number 26: XXed Eschec Chessquere Rank 4 | LIGHT Fairy | Xyz | Effect 3 Level 4 Monsters As long as this card has Xyz Material, your opponent cannot destroy your Set Spell/Trap cards. Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to destroy 1 card your opponent controls. When this card is sent to the Graveyard: You can Special Summon 1 "Eschec" monster from your hand or Deck. 2700 | 2200 Number C26: XXed Eschec Archessquere Rank 5 | DARK Fairy | Xyz | Effect 4 Level 5 Monsters When this card is Xyz Summoned, destroy all Set cards on the field. Inflict damage to both players equal to the number of cards destroyed by this effect x300. If this card has "Number 26: XXed Eschec Chessquere" as Xyz Material, it gains the following effect: • Once per turn, during either players turn, you can detach 2 Xyz Materials from this card; Declare 1 card Type (Spell, Trap, or Monster). Your opponent discards all cards with the declared type from their hand to the Graveyard. 3200 | 2700 XXed Eschec Grasshopper Rank 8 | LIGHT Fairy | Xyz | Effect 2 Level 8 "Eschec" Monsters As long as this card has Xyz Material, face up "Eschec" monsters you control cannot be destroyed by card effects. Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card. Target up to 5 "Eschec" card(s) in your Graveyard. Add those targets to your Deck. Your Deck is shuffled, then you draw 2 cards. 3000 | 2800[/spoiler] [spoiler='Spells and Traps'] Eschec Battleground Spell | Field All "Eschec" monster(s) on on the field gain 500 ATK and DEF. When an "Eschec" monster is destroyed by battle, you can shuffle that target back into the Deck instead of sending it to the Graveyard. Eschec Modulation Spell | Quick-Play Target 1 Level 4 "Eschec" monster you control. Increase its Level to Level 8, until the End Phase. Eschec Fusion Spell | None This card is always treated as "Polymerization". Select 1 "Eschec" Fusion monster from your Extra Deck. Send from your hand or your side of the field, Fusion-Material monster(s) listed in the name of the selected Fusion monster. Send the Fusion-Material monster(s) to the Graveyard. Special Summon the selected "Eschec" Fusion monster from your Extra Deck to your side of the field. If you had an "Eschec" Fusion monster on your side of the field before you activated this card, you can shuffle the Fusion Material monster(s) back to your Deck instead of sending them tot he Graveyard. Eschecmate Trap | None You can only activate this card while you control 1 "King of Eschec" and/or 1 "Queen of Eschec" and you have 16 or more "Eschec" monsters with different names in your Graveyard. The monsters you control gain 200x ATK for each monster in your Graveyard and can attack your opponent directly. If your opponent still Life Points at the End Phase of this turn, they win the Duel. [/spoiler] Comment and Criticize please. I would like to know what I could touch up on. Thanks in advance ~DeeJay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Number IV Posted July 29, 2014 Report Share Posted July 29, 2014 Since people don't like to reply, ill take the liberty of doing so. I am not that good with rating, but ill give a 6/10. I like the fusion monsters, simply b/c they seem easy to summon. However, I would suggest a fusion card for their archetype, such as Gem-Knight or Shaddoll fusion for Eschec. I also think you could include some Xyz Monsters and maybe a field spell that focuses on drawing and reshuffling power. I also didn't see any spell/trap cards in the deck set, although that could be me. But so far, this is good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PandamoniumHD Posted July 30, 2014 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2014 Thanks for your input Mr. Leo. There are two Xyz Monsters in the Set: XXed Eschec Berolina Pawn and XXed Eschec Grasshopper. The Field Spell Eschec Battleground allows deck shuffling, as well as monster recycling. Update: Added Eschec Fusion and Eschecmate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Number IV Posted August 4, 2014 Report Share Posted August 4, 2014 I like this, 7.5/10 - I would change Eschec Fusion so that "this card is always treated like Polymerization" - I would also either change Eschecmate into some sort of auto-win condition or add another card that does so (It just fits, especially with a "checkmate" - Your Number/Xyz monsters (Should be 3) should focus on 2 having lockdown effects and 1 that focuses on a sort of Eschec blitzkrieg (detaching and sacrificing Eschec monsters to deal Effect Damage), however, I like what you have. Good Job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PandamoniumHD Posted August 7, 2014 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2014 Thanks for the advice, Leo. The intention for the Xyz Monsters were mainly based on Special Summoning or card banishing. However, Number 26: Eschec Chessquere has the ability of stunning the abilities ability to destroy your Set cards, which could make it useful in some way. Maybe another cards effect would work better. I'm not sure :p I'm trying to keep them as balanced as possible. Thanks for the advice sir. Lets see if this is any better. Update: Added Eschec Fairy, Eschec Fool, Xed Eschec Cardinal, Xed Eschec Chancellor , Number 26/C26: XXed Eschec Chessquere/Archessquere, Eschec Omega Champion, Eschec Omega Wizard, and fixed the effect of Eschecmate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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