0DST Posted August 8, 2014 Report Share Posted August 8, 2014 Right, so... I don't have much confidence in my abilities with OCG. And, whilst I work on that with my written cards, I would rather post this one here. Plus, it's more of a "proof-of-concept", which will be my excuse if this card is overpowered in ways I cannot fathom. [spoiler=General Theme] Story wise: Sorcerers, Mages and Witches have familiars. So yeah. -All of these will be Lv2 Fiends, Fairies, Dragons, Winged Beasts or Beasts -All will be Union monsters that can only equip to Spellcaster-Type monsters -Whilst the Familiars have no synergy with each other, they allow Spellcasters to have synergies with other decks (zombies, dragons etc.) [/spoiler] [spoiler=Cards (02/??)] [spoiler=Skeletal Familiar] [spoiler=Effect ] Once per turn, you can either: Target 1 face up Spellcaster-Type monster you control; equip this card to the target, OR: Unequip it and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. Whilst equiped by this effect, the equiped card gains the following effect; "Once per turn, you may Tribute one monster you control; Special Summon 1 Zombie-Type monster with the same Level as the Tributed monster from your Graveyard." You can only activate this effect once per turn.(A monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed by battle, destroy this card instead.) [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Drum Familiar] [spoiler=Effect] Once per turn, you can either: Target 1 face up Spellcaster-Type monster you control; equip this card to the target, OR: Unequip it and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. Whilst equiped by this effecct, the equiped card gains the following effect; "This card is treated as a Tuner monster for the Syncro Summoning of any Spellcaster Syncro Monsters. If this card is to be used in a Syncro Summon, you can tribute 1 "Drum Familiar" equipped to this card instead of sacrificing this card." You can only activate this effect once per turn.(A monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed by battle, destroy this card instead.) [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [/spoiler] Rate and review fairly, and point out my stupidity where necessary. Who knows, if this idea goes well, I might just make a set out of it. EDIT: Have changed the layout, because I actually like this idea a bit. Plus, with the updates to Any Other Cards, might actually see more passing reviews. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BertyCollosal Posted August 14, 2014 Report Share Posted August 14, 2014 Don't mean to be anal or anything, but the OCD in me is getting irked at the mistake in the spelling of 'Spellcaster' in the first sentence. Second line also messed up with 'Effect.' I'm also assuming that you meant the effect doesn't have to used in the turn, in which case it should be: 'Once per turn, you may Tribute 1 monster you control; Special Summon,,,,,,' So on and so forth. Other then that, keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0DST Posted August 15, 2014 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2014 Damn, hadn't noticed the typo in the first sentence, thanks for that. Also, thanks for the review! I will be changing up the second line; having it compulsory is a bit silly. Also, I should be adding another card or two to this one, and make it a set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0DST Posted August 24, 2014 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2014 Bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0DST Posted September 2, 2014 Author Report Share Posted September 2, 2014 Bump-before-necro. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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