Faded Posted March 25, 2008 Report Share Posted March 25, 2008 OMFG its, oh man, a friggin VanillaDYSOAB! <<< If you dont knw what that means [Die you son of a *****] for lulz... Read on. Attention: Must Read The Rules First.Rules1- There is to be NO rating given to this card! So no ?/10 or whatever.2 -Only suggestions on how to fix the grammar mistakes!3 -Dont say theres an error without first pointing it out! You may discuss ideas about the card, and suggest changes. Any breaking of the above rules will get you Neg'd! After I am satisfied with the result and changes, and everyone says its okay, then will it be added it to my card collection thread, and open to ratings there. Part of the Random Rockers SetSet details:ROCK-EN001~Blockmallon Rocker LadyROCK-EN002~LaylahROCK-EN003~unknown Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glorious eXcess Posted March 25, 2008 Report Share Posted March 25, 2008 so, where are the others....i don't grade normals....they have no errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted March 25, 2008 Report Share Posted March 25, 2008 Faded does anything else join with this card or support it, or is it overall singular? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted March 25, 2008 Report Share Posted March 25, 2008 yeah, normal monsters dont have much errors unless its level is unbalanced.... but i will give kudos to the fact that this isnt a beat-stick.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
72night Posted March 25, 2008 Report Share Posted March 25, 2008 O_o A Forgotten World Monster. o_O The card lore is good, and if there are supports it'll be better. (Guessing there is..)^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2008 It will work with other monsters in the Set. Mainly based around the ATK difference and opponents monsters. Thats why theyre low. Effect monsters will make them overpowered. I know it really cant be commented on. I was more or less tempting others to rate it, and then punish them lulz. Nah nah jokes. I haven't made the rest yet escept Blockmallon Rocker Lady who happens to be an Effect Monster :O?? Guess its not really going to be an spectacular in the long run but Im trying to keep my cards realistic as possible. [shes human with no battle skills. just a pretty face, and is got good attack, for a human] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
N00B Hunter Posted March 25, 2008 Report Share Posted March 25, 2008 wouldn't it be "beautiful creature" instead of "beauty creature" in the description? (2nd line)What's forgotten world? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2008 Oh right, there was a mistake. Forgotten World is part of the story. I expand on the Forgotten Land as time goes on.Like some other Vanilla Monsters would mention. So its kind of like me trying to tell a story through the cards themselves [not a fanfic because Im not that good] Forgotten Lands, and Cities or anything Forgotten is what I work around.I am the Forgotten Duelist.I am creating monsters that become Normal Monsters after they use their effect. Then basing other cards around Normal Monsters.Its on going so telling you all this info now is kind of pointless. +Rep for pointing out a mistake! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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