LuciansMentor Posted August 13, 2014 Report Share Posted August 13, 2014 Welcome! This is Fortune, my collection of cards involving multiple versions of the surname Fortune. This deck isn't complete yet and I am currently making more cards as I progress. Reviews are appreciated as well as any mistakes you may find please point them out because I'm still kinda new to this thing! [spoiler=Monsters] [spoiler=Goddess of Fortune - The Endless] This card can only be summoned by removing from play 5 monster's with "Fortune" in their names form your field or hand. - This monster is immune to card effects. - This monster's attack points are determined by the amount of removed from play cards x500.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Legendary Fortune General - Caladbolg] You can only summon "Legendary Fortune General Caladbolg" by using the ritual "Fortune - The Greatest Love". - This card is unaffected by trap cards. - Whenever this monster destorys a monster in Defense Posistion; your opponent loses 500 Lifepoints.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Legendary Fortune General - Chaté] You can only summon "Legendary Fortune General Chate" by using the ritual "Fortune - The Greatest Love". - This card is unaffected by Spell Cards - Once per turn you can discard 1 card, if you do, then shuffle your deck and draw 1 card.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Legendary Fortune Soldier - Bach] During the opponent's Battle Phase; You can discard 3 cards from your hand, if you do, negate all battle damage that would be done to you this turn.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Legendary Fortune Soldier Alto] Once per turn: You can discard 2 cards from your hand, if you do; randomly select 1 card from your opponent's hand and discard it.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Fortune Soldier] During your Standby Phase: You can discard 1 card from your hand; Special Summon this monster from your hand in Attack Position, and if you do, switch its ATK and DEF.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Fortune Sniper] FLIP: Deal 250 Lifepoints of damage to your opponent. This effect multiplies for every other "Fortune" card on your field up to 4.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Fortune Princep] When this monster is Special Summoned it cannot be destroyed by battle.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Fortune Doublecrosser] When this card is Normal Summoned: Special Summon 1 monster from your hand who's level is lower than, or equal to 4.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Fortune Reconnaissance Unit] FLIP: Reveal all face-down Spell and Trap cards on the field.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=Spells] [spoiler=Last Fortune] When a "Fortune" monster is on the field toss a coin. Heads: Remove from play all monsters in your graveyard. Tails: Pay 2000 Life-points; Add all cards from your discard pile to your deck, shuffle your deck.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Advancing Assault] During the Battle Phase: If a monster you control destroys another monster who's ATK is lower than your monster; inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. All monsters on your side of the field that conducted battle are switched to defense position after damage calculation.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Duality] This can only be equipped to a monster with "Fortune" in it's name: the equipped monster's defense points are reduced to 0; Add the monster's original DEF points to it's ATK points.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Forbidden Battlefield] Remove from play 2 Warrior-Type Monsters from your graveyard to activate this card. - All face-up Warrior Type monsters on the field gain 200 ATK and DEF points. - All monsters regardless of what type must attack each turn; destroy the monsters who do not attack during the battle phase.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Wild Goose Chase!] You can activate this card from your hand when a "Fortune" monster you control is selected as an attack target; return the monster to your hand and negate the attack.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Blueprints] Sacrifice one "Fortune" monster on the field to activate this card: Take the top 5 cards of your deck and look at them; Discard these cards and then take 5 random cards from your discard pile, put them in your deck, shuffle your deck.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Destined Fortune Love] Activate this card from your hand only when you have both: "Legendary Fortune General - Caladbolg" and "Legendary Fortune General - Chate" out on your side of the field: - You can pay 800 Lifepoints to negate the effect of 1 card and destroy it. - Gain 100 Lifepoints each turn that this card is on the field. - You can destroy this card; if you do, gain 2000 Lifepoints.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Fortune - The Greatest Love] Remove from play 3 "Fortune" monsters and summon 1 "Legendary Fortune General - Caladbolg" OR "Legendary Fortune General - Chate" from your deck or your hand.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=Traps] [spoiler=Red Lotus of Fortune] When a "Fortune" monster is selected as an attack target: Draw 2 cards.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Treason - Death by Fortune's Grasp] If your opponent has destroyed 2 or more "Fortune" monsters this turn activate this card. Deal 500 lifepoints for each "Fortune" monster destroyed.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Proof of Servitude] Activate this card by targeting 1 monster your opponent controls; this monster cannot attack. Every Standby Phase the target monster loses 100 ATK points; You gain 100 Lifepoints each Standby Phase. When the target monster's ATK drops to 0; destroy the monster and remove this card from play.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Frozen Battlefield] When your opponent declares an attack negate the attack. If you choose, pay 500 lifepoints and halve the attacking monster's attack points.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Tactical Planning] During your draw phase; if the card you draw is a monster and has "Fortune" in it's name; You can Special Summon it to the field from your hand in face-down DEF Position; if you do, the monster gains 500 ATK when it is flipped up.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Warpath] Each time your opponent destroys a "Fortune" monster, gain 300 Life-points.[/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Extra Deck] [spoiler=Legendary Fortune Soldier - Amadeus] Fortune Doublecrosser + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters Once per turn: You can discard 1 card from your hand, and if you do, destroy 1 spell or trap card on the field.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Fortune Guerrilla] 2 level 4 Monsters When this monster attacks: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; ignore the defending monster's ATK and deal full damage.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Legendary Fortune Soldier - Blanche] 2 Level 8 Monsters During the battle phase: you can remove 1 Xyz Material from this card; if you do, ignore all card effects that would target this card.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Emperor of the Legendary Fortune - Axellus] 2 Level 9 Monsters - This monster is not affected by Spell or Trap Cards. - This monster's position cannot be changed by card effects. Once per turn you can remove 1 Xyz material from this card, if you do: During battle between this attacking card and a Attack Position monster whose ATK is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. [/spoiler][/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dydp Posted August 13, 2014 Report Share Posted August 13, 2014 noice deck m8 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuciansMentor Posted August 13, 2014 Author Report Share Posted August 13, 2014 THREE NEW CARDS ADDED!! See the first post for details. Also changes: Wild Goose Chase!: Fixed some grammatical errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuciansMentor Posted August 13, 2014 Author Report Share Posted August 13, 2014 NEW MONSTER CARD ADDED!!! - Legendary Fortune Soldier - Blanche Changes: - Forbidden Battlefield: Fixed some grammar made it less OP. - Tactical Planning: Fixed some grammar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuciansMentor Posted August 13, 2014 Author Report Share Posted August 13, 2014 NEW SPELL CARD ADDED!!! - Blueprints Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuciansMentor Posted August 14, 2014 Author Report Share Posted August 14, 2014 THE GENERALS OF THE FORTUNE ARMY JOIN THE FIGHT!!! The two Generals, Husband and Wife join the fight along with their pact! Monster Cards added: - Legendary Fortune General - Caladbolg - Legendary Fortune General - Chaté Spell Cards added: - Destined Fortune Love Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuciansMentor Posted August 14, 2014 Author Report Share Posted August 14, 2014 NEW CARD IN DEVELOPMENT! The Big Boss is almost here! The Master of the Army is in development. I'm currently trying to find art. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuciansMentor Posted August 14, 2014 Author Report Share Posted August 14, 2014 THE EMPEROR HAS ARRIVED! New Cards: Emperor of the Legendary Fortune - Axellus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuciansMentor Posted August 14, 2014 Author Report Share Posted August 14, 2014 THE GODDESS APPROACHES..... The Emperor may be the leader of the Fortune Army. But there is one secret above all that they keep, their first ever ruler, the Warrior of Legend who became a Goddess upon her death. She is the final monster to be added to the deck unless if you guys want me to do more. I am currently trying to work out her effect, I would need some help though, If anyone wants to offer: just post. Fixes: Fixed Destined Fortune Love's Grammar to say where you can activate it from. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuciansMentor Posted August 15, 2014 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2014 THE GODDESS ARRIVES!!! And with her she brings a new spell and trap card! Cards Added: Goddess of Fortune - The Endless Proof of Servitude Last Fortune Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuciansMentor Posted August 15, 2014 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2014 TWO NEW TRAPS!!! Two new dangerous traps crawl their way into the Fortune Army. Cards Added: Red Lotus of Fortune Treason - Death by Fortune's Grasp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuciansMentor Posted August 15, 2014 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2014 DECK IS ALMOST COMPLETE! LOOKING FOR REVIEWS! Yes that's right it's almost completed, I'm currently working on the last 2 cards. Until then critique and review is appreciated. you don't have to if you don't want to but it is appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kivoxo Posted August 15, 2014 Report Share Posted August 15, 2014 Hard to tell what the theme is (effect and look), it seems like it burns but also seems like it is just supposed to beat down and protect your monsters. Monsters- Some are much too easy to summon (Caladbolg and Chate, see dragon rulers), and others are underpowered (Doublecrosser and Princep costing 2 discards). S/T- Every Trap except 1 is a Counter Trap when some don't need to be, and the same for the Quick-Play Spells. OCG is all over the place, making some cards summonable from anywhere. I suggest rethinking what you want the deck to do, and looking at similar real cards and using their wording to improve your cards' text. Using composers is something I have not seen before, they piece together music so maybe Crystal Beast it and make a Field Spell that gets stronger with the more Fortune monsters you have summoned/banished/graved. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuciansMentor Posted August 15, 2014 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2014 Hard to tell what the theme is (effect and look), it seems like it burns but also seems like it is just supposed to beat down and protect your monsters. Monsters- Some are much too easy to summon (Caladbolg and Chate, see dragon rulers), and others are underpowered (Doublecrosser and Princep costing 2 discards). S/T- Every Trap except 1 is a Counter Trap when some don't need to be, and the same for the Quick-Play Spells. OCG is all over the place, making some cards summonable from anywhere. I suggest rethinking what you want the deck to do, and looking at similar real cards and using their wording to improve your cards' text. Using composers is something I have not seen before, they piece together music so maybe Crystal Beast it and make a Field Spell that gets stronger with the more Fortune monsters you have summoned/banished/graved. Hmmm... After looking at my deck my effects seem to be all over the place! And you do have a very good point some cards are under-powered I should buff them. As for Caladbolg and Chate I think making the cost a bit higher would do... Maybe say 3, 4 Cards? I'm not sure as of yet. Also yes I just realized that every trap card except 2 are a counter trap, I have a lot of fixing to do indeed! Thank you for pointing these out, but I'm not sure where to begin... And what do you mean by Crystal Beasting? The field spell sounds nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuciansMentor Posted August 15, 2014 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2014 REWORKING.... Changed alot of cards: Fortune Princep: New Stats and New Effect Fortune Doublecrosser: New Effect Legendary Fortune Soldier - Chate and Caladbolg: Made into Ritual Monsters. Trap Cards: Red Lotus of Fortune: New Effect is now a quickplay. Warpath: Now a Continuous: New Effect. Spell Cards: Added a new Ritual! Fortune - The Greatest Love Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuciansMentor Posted August 16, 2014 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2014 CONTINUING FIXES.... More feedback is appreciated! I'm thinking of linking up these effects up with Removed from play cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuciansMentor Posted August 18, 2014 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2014 TO EVERYONE STILL LISTENING! As much as I'd like to continue this I see my deck might have no clear point and might be too much to fix.... But if you want me to continue it please tell me some ideas! If not then that's A-OK to. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuciansMentor Posted October 23, 2014 Author Report Share Posted October 23, 2014 I'm back from a long hiatus! My new archetype I'm making will be out soon! In the meantime please feel free to critique! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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