The first 3 cards of my campaign ~ 2 reps to whoever can give me the best advice ~

[Moderator]

Welcome to my first thread. :D

These are also my first cards, none of the 3 are linked or related in any way though, they are all completely random, well, because, I am random. =D

Enjoy my cards, I put 4 hours effort into them. ^_^

I also decided to give each card a various color change, or holo, they look great in my opinion.

 

Der Warrior des Regenbogens

 

König des dunklen Dschungels

 

Spell card - Blood Transfusion

 

This is my very own blood holo effect. =D

[zap50001]

a little over with the holo but cool cards 7.5 out of 10

[Moderator]

a little over with the holo but cool cards 7.5 out of 10

 

^Thank you. =D

First person to post in my thread.

[Guest JoshIcy]

4hrs?!! now i feel bad if i were to rate these cards =/.... but the first card is underpowered...

and please dont invert and grayscale, (looks like that anyway)... id like to see the cards in their entirety, rainbow colors and all :D

 

great cards for a newby ^_^

[Moderator]

4hrs?!! now i feel bad if i were to rate these cards =/.... but the first card is underpowered...

and please dont invert and grayscale' date=' (looks like that anyway)... id like to see the cards in their entirety, rainbow colors and all :D

 

great cards for a newby ^_^

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^Thanks icyblue. =D

I did greyscale the cards, they look so boring and plain to me when in there normal colors. +_+

Anymore ratings?

[CrazyKev]

Those cards are great for a new member

But the holos aren't so great

3.50\5

[Moderator]

^Thank you Kev. =D

I'm surprised my cards are getting decent ratings.

[Lucas Maximus]

If these are your first cards they are just about perfect. =D

I love the effect on the last card. (the holo effect, not the card effect)

Well done, I hope to see more from you in future.

8/10

[Moderator]

^Don't worry Lucas, you will see more cards from me. =D

And I'm glad you like them, thanks for the positive feedback, as the thread title says, 2 reps to the best feedback.

[Faded]

Blood Transfusion>Shooting Star Bow - Ceal

[Lucas Maximus]

^Its actually very different to Shooting Star Bow - Ceal.

This is the effect of Shooting Star Bow - Ceal: Decrease the ATK of a monster equipped with this card by 1000 points. A monster equipped with this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly.

Compare with: A monster equipped with this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. When a monster equipped with this card inflicts damage to your opponent's Life Points you may add 1 monster to your hand from your fusion deck with an ATK of 1000 or less.

 

>_>

[Slade]

He was saying that Blood Transfusion is greater than Shooting Star Bow - Ceal. That's what the ">" symbol means. Also, Blood Transfusion + Vennominaga = 3 turn win.

[Huntar!]

The names do confuse me due to me not speaking, German?, I guess.

 

I LOVE THE BLOOD HOLO EFFECT.

 

can I have it, please!?

[Bluephoenix]

I think that the first card is underpowered, I'd atleast increase his ATK or lower the cost to equip cards to him.

 

The second card makes beasts finally worth while, besides like behemoth and Oz there was really no point. I do however find the "Cannot be normal summoned during your mainphase", I get where you're coming from, but I would just make it "This card cannot be normal summoned" period, unless you have a card to count a summon outside of the mainphase as a Normal summon, then I'll just shut up.

 

I love Blood transfusion, great effect, great picture, and great effects by the way.

[Parting Shot]

I really like Blood Transfusion, though maybe it should be limited as to who it can be equipped to (Slade mentioned one very overpowered example). Bluephoenix was right about the second one, it is a bit confusing. Otherwise, very good cards!

 

overall - 11.55/13.69 ^_^

[Kizzi]

Not bad; The holo effectss are good, but the grayscaling / inverting is iffy.

Also, regarding balance:

1st - Underpowered, change to Lv4.

2nd - Underpowered, add a good effect.

3rd - Overpowered, add a massive cost.

[OCG]

First card is underpowered

Minor OCG errors but for a newbie great :P

 

9/10

[RiffMaster Alex]

Very awesome cards! Amazing for a newbie! 8/10 ^_^

[Hanimir]

1st card underpowered-> either decrease Level or increase ATK

2nd card underpowered-> Its not easy to keep more than two monsters on the field these days :P

3rd card slightly overpowered-> you should at least half the ATK of the monster equipped with this card

 

 

nevertheless, very great 9/10 ^-^

 

EDIT

Full translation of the first card would be "Der Krieger des Regenbogens" in case

you didnt know XD