The twins of shadows and light - opinions ?

[jellal17]

So i Though id make a ss for both Light and Dark monsters 

My ocg is always bad xD

<3

 

 

 

This card is also treated as a dark type monster while on your field or in your Graveyard.You can special summon this card from your hand if you control a face-up Light or Dark type monster,if you use this face-up card for the special summon of a monster that monster must be a light or dark type monster.You can only use the effect of"The twins of shadows and light once per turn.

 

 

​It will be a key card in a new set I'm making for example 

 

 

2 level 4 Monsters

 

If this card was xyz summoned by using 1 or more light type monsters increase this cards ATK by 200 for each.Once per turn you, can detach 1 xyz material from this card to increase this cards ATK by 500.When this card leaves the field by a card effect special summon 1 level 4 or lower light type monster from your graveyard in face-up defense position its effects are negated until the end of the turn.

[Neutrality Man]

First card:

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This card is also treated as a DARK type monster while on the Field or in the Graveyard. You can Special Summon this card (from your hand) if you control a face-up LIGHT or DARK type monster. If you use this face-up card for the Special Summon of a monster: that monster must be a LIGHT or DARK type monster. You can only use this effect of "The Twins of Shadows and Light once per turn.

fix'd

 

LIGHT, DARK, FIRE, WIND, WATER, EARTH, and DIVINE are all always ALLCAPS and they are Attributes, not types.

 

The pic is too good, Konami of America will censor it.

 

Second card:

 

 

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2 Level 4 monsters

 

If this card was Xyz Summoned by using 1 or more LIGHT type monsters as Xyz Material: increase this card's ATK by 200 for each. Once per turn: you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; to increase this card's ATK by 500. When this card leaves the Field by a card effect: Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower LIGHT type monster from your Graveyard in face-up defense position. Its effects are negated until the end of the turn.

 

Capitalize Level, and the names any Summons

 

Never capitalize monster unless it has a specific card color named (e.g. Xyz Monster, Synchro Monster, Effect Monster)

 

Learn to punctuate.

 

You should really read up on your PSCT. http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Problem-Solving_Card_Text