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Beigespell Dragon (Constructive Criticism Welcome)


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Hello !

 

So I though to make another Dragon-type card for my Dragon Deck.So...Feedback ? :3

 

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Text : When this card is targeted by an attack while in face-down defense position,destroy the attacking moster then shuffle this card back to your deck.

 

SECOND EDITION :

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Text : When this card is target by an attack when in face-down defense position,destroy the attacking monster.And if you do,banish this card.

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One thing I found annoying is how its attribute is water. Maybe change it to Earth or Light? If not, maybe some Lore?

 

Maybe change the type to Sea-Dragon?

 

The art is nice and since I like Sukusukus, an extra point.

 

Now, about the card's effect:

 

Too stronk, please nerf. This card will always be a pain to deal with, and with its effect of going back to the deck leaves so many possibilities to re-summon it back with ease. Maybe make it more like snowman and just send it to the grave. This card can also be sent to the graveyard with Future Fusion and then Dragon Mirror it for F.G.D. I haven't played against many meta-decks lately, but I know a water/dragon monster with this effect will be broken, considering how many uses them.

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@HeroicHammer : Umm...I can change it to Earth.Then about what you said about the effect,this card also relies on effects of spell cards and some of the effects too rely on it.And,if you put it in any other dragon deck,it'll lose all it's functionality.Anyways,I remade it.And put what I think is a drawback :

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This card isn't strong at all.

Firstly, it needs to be attacked face-down. Secondly, it gets Banished. and finally, all you get is to destroy the opponent's Monster.

 

Exploder Dragon does the same thing, without being Banished, without having to be set, being able to attack the opponent to destroy the Monster, and being able to reduce the damage you take, from said attack, to 0. Decoy Dragon lets you Summon Level 7 or higher Dragons whenever it's attacked, AND change the attack target to that Monster.

 

This card is incredibly weak. Therefore:

Remove the Banish effect,

Switch the ATK and DEF.

Decrease it's Level by 1.

Make it WATER again.

 

Now it works with cards like Salvage, Surface, isn't gotten rid of when destroyed, and is overall a much more useable card.

 

Also, it's effect has nothing to do with Spell Cards, as stated in previous posts. Was it intended to utilize spells?

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