Fat Cat Ultim Posted September 3, 2014 Report Share Posted September 3, 2014 Hello, I'm here to post my latest monster card for a Dragon deck I'm making.Please leave feedback : 2ND EDITION : Text : When a Dragon-type monster you control is sent to the Graveyard: draw 1 card.You may only use the effect of "Red-Scales Dragon" once per turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dokutah Posted September 3, 2014 Report Share Posted September 3, 2014 a Super Rejuvenation reboot ? how about no this thing is abomination among over-powered cards (among the Dragon-Type support that is)... give it Dragon Shield and you can nuke the field only to make your opponent lost their resources while you can do bigger play and draw at least 2 cards that locking away your opponent hope for sure (since most Dragon now days actually works it wonder when it sent to grave) its a perfect match for Dracossack you need to see ban-list first before asking grammar fixes... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fat Cat Ultim Posted September 3, 2014 Author Report Share Posted September 3, 2014 @Re-Creator : I don't want a fricking grammar fix.Tell me how to IMPROVE the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The15thWing Posted September 3, 2014 Report Share Posted September 3, 2014 @Re-Creator : I don't want a fricking grammar fix.Tell me how to IMPROVE the card. Make it once per turn. Fixes the problem quite well, methinks. For how you want to work it: When a Dragon-Type Monster you control is sent to the Graveyard: Draw 1 card. You may only use the effect of "Red-Scales Dragon" once per turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fat Cat Ultim Posted September 3, 2014 Author Report Share Posted September 3, 2014 Thank you The15thWing.Finally someone who cares to fix my card :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dokutah Posted September 3, 2014 Report Share Posted September 3, 2014 @Re-Creator : I don't want a fricking grammar fix.Tell me how to IMPROVE the card. above poster doing it fine... as for me i'm not that good at grammar (partialy for certain reason) i'm letting other to do that for now the most important is: did you get what i'm saying about this card is can be consider over-power? if you do... you 1 step closer to improve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neutrality Man Posted September 3, 2014 Report Share Posted September 3, 2014 Thank you The15thWing.Finally someone who cares to fix my card :) And you immediately broke the fix text. Punctuation is important now. http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/PSCT Also, have you considered just making the entire Deck and posting it all to Sets? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fat Cat Ultim Posted September 3, 2014 Author Report Share Posted September 3, 2014 @Chaos Knux : Fixed ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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