Chrisrobotable Posted September 8, 2014 Report Share Posted September 8, 2014 Designed to be basic warrior support, would work quite well with Marauding Captain.(Effect activates from normal summon) Feedback of any kind is appreciated, If im doing something wrong tell me so I don't do it again :P thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezmoe Posted September 8, 2014 Report Share Posted September 8, 2014 Very Unique, But on DN, it's harder to use, making it much more fair. I think a card of this effect already exists. Calling it an additional normal summon is kind of redundant seeing as you can summon anyway. Designed to be basic warrior support, would work quite well with Marauding Captain. <---- Headline Warrior of the Game Feedback of any kind is appreciated, If im doing something wrong tell me so I don't do it again :P thx What you're doing wrong: Old OCG (Official Card Grammar) usually isn't frowned upon, but for the sake of other people, instead of "Remove from play" just put "Banish". Numbers are always Numeric. 1 2 3 <---- No card on the planet actually has the word "one" in it. No 1st *BLEH* Edition. It's funny I know, but people just then consider you a noob. Multiple Cards is where this should have gone. What you're doing Right ✌: Card Art is Good :D Love the Throne Card. Never seen anything like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chrisrobotable Posted September 9, 2014 Author Report Share Posted September 9, 2014 What you're doing wrong: Old OCG (Official Card Grammar) usually isn't frowned upon, but for the sake of other people, instead of "Remove from play" just put "Banish". Numbers are always Numeric. 1 2 3 <---- No card on the planet actually has the word "one" in it.No 1st *BLEH* Edition. It's funny I know, but people just then consider you a noob.Multiple Cards is where this should have gone.What you're doing Right ✌:Card Art is Good :DLove the Throne Card. Never seen anything like it. Thanks xD appreciate the feedback, the reason tried to make warriors call a normal summon was to allow for marauding captains effect to activate because I don't t think it activates on special summon. I also thought the throne idea was quite good. Seemed unique, thus was placed in experimental section. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seanoow Posted September 11, 2014 Report Share Posted September 11, 2014 Good ideas, I like the Throne of Empowerment. (I am a sucker for cards that have effects based on location on the field) Warrior Call is an interesting card. There are many cards that prevent special summons or have effects that trigger off of a card being special summoned. The card text is a little tricky and I feel it may be difficult to understand especially for some newer players, I would recommend changing the card text to be something like: "Banish one card in your hand. Target one level 3 or lower Warrior-type monster in your deck, special summon that target in face-up attack position. Effects that trigger when a monster is special summoned can not be activated in response to the targeted Warrior-type monster's special summon. Draco Raywall has an effect that reminds me of another card but I cant quite remember it at the moment. The picture used for this card also already is a card, I think its called Paradox Fusion or something. It has something to do with a fusion monster. Overall these seem like pretty good cards, keep up the good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chrisrobotable Posted September 11, 2014 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2014 Good ideas, I like the Throne of Empowerment. (I am a sucker for cards that have effects based on location on the field) Warrior Call is an interesting card. There are many cards that prevent special summons or have effects that trigger off of a card being special summoned. The card text is a little tricky and I feel it may be difficult to understand especially for some newer players, I would recommend changing the card text to be something like: "Banish one card in your hand. Target one level 3 or lower Warrior-type monster in your deck, special summon that target in face-up attack position. Effects that trigger when a monster is special summoned can not be activated in response to the targeted Warrior-type monster's special summon. Draco Raywall has an effect that reminds me of another card but I cant quite remember it at the moment. The picture used for this card also already is a card, I think its called Paradox Fusion or something. It has something to do with a fusion monster. Overall these seem like pretty good cards, keep up the good work! Thanks for Feedback, glad I went back and checked this post again.The aim with warriors call was to make something marauding captain could chain off of. (has to be normal summoned for his effect to activate).Thus why I said treat this summon as a normal summon or something along those lines. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chrisrobotable Posted September 11, 2014 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2014 Here are the cards as of now with the specified changes: (I removed Raywall in favor of something else later, I felt it wasn't very original) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezmoe Posted September 11, 2014 Report Share Posted September 11, 2014 one ---> 1 Other than that, this looks good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chrisrobotable Posted September 11, 2014 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2014 one ---> 1 Other than that, this looks good. Damn it, How did I miss that! xD fixed it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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