Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted September 10, 2014 Report Share Posted September 10, 2014 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Dragon-Type Monsters The Summon of this card cannot be negated if you control another Dragon-Type monster. If any of the Synchro Materials used for the Synchro Summon of this card are in your Graveyard: Level 7 and lower Dragon-Type monsters you control cannot be destroyed by your opponent's cards (either by battle or by card effects). Once per turn, you can Set 1 face-up monster your opponent controls; Banish 1 Dragon-Type monster from your Graveyard, then, if you do, this card gains 1300 ATK until your opponent's next End Phase. [spoiler=Old Version] 2 Level 7 Dragon-Type Monsters The Xyz Summon of this card cannot be negated if you control another Dragon-Type monster. While this card has Xyz Material, Dragon-Type Normal Monsters cannot be destroyed by your opponent's cards (either by battle or by card effects). Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Banish 1 Dragon-Type monster from your Graveyard, then, if you do, this card gains 500 ATK. [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kivoxo Posted September 10, 2014 Report Share Posted September 10, 2014 In no way would a Chaos Dragon Deck run this, the only level 7s those Decks run are Black Rose, Michael, DaD, and other potential techs that would not be worth running. This is more aimed at an Elemental Dragon Deck, and even then it's only because they're level 7 Dragons (which is a dead Deck). This card is all around very weak. OCG isn't perfect but I could fix it if you'd like. 2 Level 7 Dragon-Type monsters -I suggest making it 2 Level 4 Dragon-Type monsters. This would open up Collapserpent, Wyvern, and Wyverburster plays. The Xyz Summon of this card cannot be negated if you control another Dragon-Type monster. -This is fine but not very useful. Negating this guy's summon would be pretty wasteful. While this card has Xyz Material, Dragon-Type Normal Monsters cannot be destroyed by your opponent's cards (either by battle or by card effects). -Again, fine but not very useful for anything other than Blue-Eyes Decks or some kind of Hieratic build. Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Banish 1 Dragon-Type monster from your Graveyard, then, if you do, this card gains 500 ATK. -Unless you change it's base ATK, I suggest making it increase ATK by 750-900. I get it has the possibility to banish an Eclipse Wyvern or an Elemental Dragon, but rarely will you want to banish them with an effect rather than use them as Special Summon food. It's effects are overall lacking. It could use some kind of search or SS effect. Keep in mind, if you're going to rework this and still make it more Chaos Dragon orientated, that their Extra Decks are already tight on space. It's going to need a big push if you want it to even be a possible tech. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted September 10, 2014 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2014 thanks for the CnC. I suppose you're right...i cose rank and stats based off of the level and stats of the original ryu-ran. I suppose this card could be more useful as a Synchro so as to utilize monsters with more common levels. I'll rework it and update the post shortly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted September 22, 2014 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2014 bump...any thoghts on how i could improve this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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