Jesus Posted March 26, 2008 Report Share Posted March 26, 2008 Tell me what you think, I made a bunch of cards that go along with it, but I don't feel like posting them... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God of Cadillacs Posted March 26, 2008 Report Share Posted March 26, 2008 A few grammar errors, but it looks cool to me. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted March 26, 2008 Report Share Posted March 26, 2008 DARK not "dark"LIGHT not "light"I'm not sure card's has a apostrophe. face-up not face upATK not attackYou don't need attribute after DARK or LIGHT.Graveyard not graveyardStandby Phase not standby phaseMonster Card not monster card1 not oneopponent's not opponets (misspelling also)Besides those errors this card is not bad, the effect is understandable. Image could be a little better though, remove the signature from the bottom right corner, I can do that, private message me if you would like me to do so.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesus Posted March 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2008 Thanks guys, I didn't notice all those errors.. I'm going to post the other cards I have that go along with it, Although I don't like some of the pictures. I appreciate the spelling/grammer errors, thanks for pointing them out. I have my others saved on another computer, so I may have to points them out later.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesus Posted March 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2008 Here are my others, a lot of them woulden't upload. Don't know why. They probably have some errors, too. I'll fix them eventually. Also, For "The Wanderer's Unholy Twin Blades", The picture is of real swords because I coulden't draw any pictures of Twin Blades.. It's kinda hard for me to do that T_T. Some of the attachments That I tried to make were really important.. Like for example "The Wanderer's Heavenly Spirit" All it does is it increases it's own attack x 700 for each card in your hand. The ones that didn't attach (And I'll look into why it didn't) Were : The Wanderer's CorruptionThe Wanderer's Heavenly SpiritArragon, holy warrior of AsgardFallen Angel of Asgard Any other card that I made over a while was posted (I think). Tell me what you think and how I can improve this cards to be better/faierer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L33t Jenkins Posted March 26, 2008 Report Share Posted March 26, 2008 7/10 few gram probs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesus Posted March 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2008 Yeah I know.. I'm going to fix a bunch of my grammer problems soon.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesus Posted March 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2008 Also, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesus Posted March 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2008 ...Sorry bout that, I acidentily hit the post button T_T. Also, I think I figured out why some of them won't post. I'll try it again soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesus Posted March 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2008 I fixed the grammer on "The Wanderer". I'll post sometime Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesus Posted March 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2008 I need an idea for a new card that goes along with The Wanderer.. any tips? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHINI [THE CHAOS] Posted March 26, 2008 Report Share Posted March 26, 2008 Don't Triple Post. Also the Grammar for the first card should be:Â "When this card is face-up on your side of the field, it is treated as LIGHT. Increase this card's ATK by 200 points for each LIGHT and DARK Monsters in your Graveyard. During your Standby Phase, you can destroy 1 Monster on your side of the field, then destroy 1 Card on your opponent's side of the field. You can only activate this effect once per turn." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesus Posted March 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2008 Yeah sorry for posting so much o.o, It's just that I'll post somthing and then I'll remember somthing after I post it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHINI [THE CHAOS] Posted March 26, 2008 Report Share Posted March 26, 2008 Just click on the "Edit" button write more stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesus Posted March 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2008 Oh.. Sorry :D. Still getting used to this forum. How do you like my card though, :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesus Posted March 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2008 Renewing Topic.. Sorry. Want to get my card out to as many people as possible :D. Also nobody seems to be rateing the card... D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesus Posted March 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2008 :D Photo Bucket FTW Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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